高级高中英语书面表达之道歉信

8. 给你带来不便
9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _____________________ cause you much trouble 10. 更加小心 _____________________ be more careful
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11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
make such a stupid mistake ______________________ be to blame 12. 应当受到责备 ______________________ 13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibility _______________________
书面表达 假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下： （1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右 开头已给出，不计总数
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审题
1. 文体： 电子邮件 2. 写作对象： 外教Smith 4. 时态： 现在时&过去式 5. 写作要点： 三大要点按照顺序写；开头部分
14. 难以接受的后果
an unacceptable result/consequence ______________________ never let it happen again 15. 下不为例 ______________________ make an appointment 16. 定约会 ______________________
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套用句式 1. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。 1. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for … I am writing to express my sincere apology for... 2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。
2. Please accept my sincere apology (for…).
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常用语块
1. 因某事向某人道歉apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth. ____________________ sorry to sb. for sth. 2. 因某事向某人说对不起 say ___________________
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Body
未能赴约的原因:
look after a family member; do a good deed; get a bad cold; pick sb. up at the airport…
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words and expression? sentence patterns? detail information? 14
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4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一 位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到 医院
On my way to your office, I happened to see a car accident. An old man was badly injured, but nobody came to offer help. So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital. I stayed there for several hours until his son came, which caused me to miss our appointment.
也要包括进去。 6. 语言风格： 语言简洁； 道歉语气诚恳； 礼貌得体。
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Beginning 1.表达未能赴约的歉意； 2. 开头部分的内容。
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for you. We made an appointment at 3 o’clock yesterday afternoon. And you planned to give me advice on how to learn English well.
3. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但 请相信，我并非故意要…… 3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to…
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4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我 考虑，并接受我的道歉。 4. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology. 5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。 5. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
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6. 弥补；赔偿
7. 赔偿；偿还
_____________________ make up for
pay for / compensate for _____________________
_____________________ cause you inconvenience
Body 未能赴约的原因 1.我叔叔从美国回来, 3:00时下飞机。然而，我爸 爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。 2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸 爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。 3.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一 位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到 医院 4.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for missing our appointment at 3 o’clock yesterday afternoon, when you planned /intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.
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6. 错过了...的机会，我感到非常遗憾。 I am terribly sorry for missing the chance of...
我写信是向你表示抱歉,因为我错过了参加你毕业典礼的机会 I am writing to express my sincere apology for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony. 7. 我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间... I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for... 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。我真心希望我们可以 再找一个时间去北京旅行。 Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip to Beijing. 10
my sincere apology 3. 接受我真诚的道歉accept ____________________
4. 为某事原谅某人 ____________________ forgive sb. for sth.
5. 并非故意做某事 have _____________________ no intention to do sth.
5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。 I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself. For my health's sake, the doctor advised me to stay at home to have a rest. 18
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Dear John, I am very sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of you to invite me to your house. I really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party because the final exam is just around the corner. What’s worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself. Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. I am truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apology. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, 2019-1-30 2019-1-30 Li Hua2
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未能赴约原因： 1. 我叔叔从美国回来,2:30时下飞机。然而，我爸 爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。 Yesterday afternoon, my uncle came from America and got off at 2:30, but my parents had no time to pick him up, in which case I had to meet him at the airport. After that it was too late to meet you. Thus I missed our appointment.
Ending 希望另约时间 ①I hope you can give me another chance to make an appointment with you again. ②I will appreciate it if you can give me another chance to meet me. ③Hope you can forgive me and give me another chance to meet me. ④ Would you mind if I change the appointment time?
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2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸 爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。 My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work. In that case, I had to stay at home to take care of her, which caused me unable to meet you as appointed.
写作"三步曲"
• 表示歉意 • 说明具体原因、提出补救 办法 • 再次致歉，希望得到理解。
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书面表达 假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下： （1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右 开头已给出，不计总数