2016年高考英语二轮复习训练：4-1 短文改错a 含解析

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Correction 1

[2015·江西六校联考二]It appear that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchanges. They can use the library around the clock when it's open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village paid it a visit. Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighborhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderfully library.

答案：

that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a It appear

appears

a red phone box into small British village, people decided to turning

turn

smallest libraries.

a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country

country's

phone box. Villagers there can About 150 books sit on shelves in a

the

take whatever they want and leave their own books for

exchange.

in

it's open 365 They can use the library around the clock when

because/since/as/for

days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright

paid it a visit. Among door, people from all parts of the village ∧

have

it

there're senior citizens living in the neighborhood, children them/those

＼stopping by late getting off school buses and university students are

at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderfully

wonderful

library.

Correction 2

[2015·河北唐山二模]If you monitor the wasting of energy at home, you'll be amazing. Your brother and you watch same movie in different room, which is a great waste. Dad drives to work lonely when he can share the ride with two men who live nearby. Mom washes dishes without the water running. You go out and left the radio on all morning. Aren't these enough to make you to realize we are wasting too much energy? Let's be more concerned about the future, because that's where they are going. Unless every person in every house make an effort, hope still exists!

答案：

If you monitor the wasting of energy at home, you'll be amazing

amazed

.

Your brother and you watch ∧

the same movie in different room

rooms

，

which is a great waste. Dad drives to work lonely

alone

when he can share the ride with two men who live nearby. Mom washes dishes without

with the water running. You go out and left

leave

the radio on all morning. Aren't these enough to make you to＼realize we are wasting too much energy? Let's be more concerned about the future, because that's

where they

we are going. Unless

If

every person in every house make

makes

an

effort, hope still exists!