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中考英语作文经典指导完美版PPT

中考英语作文经典指导完美版PPT
How necessary it is to help others. =endless/oceans of seem, appear 等表示“似乎〞、“好似〞等意思的动词;
• 能到达上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的 They started learning English three years ago.
如何逐步培养和 提升英语写作能力?
写作能力的引导
词汇短语 句子
篇章
词汇短语
词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的根 底和源泉。
词汇短语“攻关秘笈 〞
children; believe…)〕 词汇的巧妙记忆。 .1
• 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这 个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
• 据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个局部逐项打分的, 而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分〞,然后 再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分局部。因此,这个“印 象分〞就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了 自己的分数。所以如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要 写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改 较少。
We are planning an outing.
高分。 Thank you for listening .
语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.
四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分):表达清楚,行文连贯,语言根本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分):表达根本清楚,行文根本连贯,语言有
少量错误。 • 第三档(9—12分):语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。 • 第二档(5—8分):能写明根本要点;语言错误多,影响意思
表达。 • 第一档(0—4分):白卷或文不对题,或错误百出,不知所云

中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)

中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬 长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不 要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后 写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要,重新排列组合已写成的 句子,划分 必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文,演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告,列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….

中考英语写作指导I love…… 指导PPT课件(30PPT)

中考英语写作指导I love…… 指导PPT课件(30PPT)
always ready to help me . I love my best friend because she is very considerate and always ready to help me. I love my best friend who is very considerate and always ready to help me.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
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2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8

4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ,掌握 一定的 技巧, 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来, 出语不 俗的效 果,感 动自己 ,征服 读者。

5.这些根据材料提供的话题,进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目,源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料,加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解,充 满了理 性的光 辉,于 平凡中 见奇倔 ,也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ,很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.

2024年深圳市中考英语书面表达教学课件

2024年深圳市中考英语书面表达教学课件

As an important wetland city,
Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.
202303 深圳市南山区一模
《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市,也积极响应公 约 (Wetlands Convention)号召。假如你是学生李华,是学校环保俱乐部一员,你们俱乐部举行了 “湿地保护节”(Wetland Protection Festival)。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike 写一封邮件, 介绍此次活动。
Topic
A Great Passage
Genre(体裁)
Tense(时态)
Personal Pronoun(人称)
Main Points(要点)
Paragraph(段落)
Dear Mike, Shenzhen is an innovative city. A great event called “Creative December” is held here. In order to enrich campus life and develop innovation ability, my school held the “Creative Campus Festival” last week. The content of this activity mainly includes creative writing contest, robot exhibition and personal programming design. Through this activity, I learned a lot of knowledge, and I also learned the wonderful ideas of my classmates. I also want to learn relevant knowledge and try to design my own home next time. I hope my dream can come true.Yours,Li Hua

中考英语作文指导ppt课件

中考英语作文指导ppt课件
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
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根据下面表格所提供的信息,写一则通知,告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日(7月10日)
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上7:00
到达公园时 早上8:30 间
活动安排
上午:划船;游泳;在饭馆吃午餐 下午:英语角活动(English corner activities);照相
5、内容的完整:一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点,漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分,因此审 题要细心观察,特别是在做看图作文题时,要注 意某些夸张“画点”,它(们)常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时,不要事无巨细, 全面开花,应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍,做到 详略得当。此外,80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词,最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件,少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we

中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时; 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时; 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然;用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: (综述)with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者,请你 依据当初统计,首先描述两位同学碰到问题,然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题,给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤:
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.

中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)

中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由:
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
第三部分:结尾 (总结全文,重申观点)
in a word in short all in all ...
正方:
反方:
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.

初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)

初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)

Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 (总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总)
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛,首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2

2025年中考英语写作专题复习课件+话题6 志愿服务

2025年中考英语写作专题复习课件+话题6 志愿服务

·She volunteers there once a week to help kids to learn and read.
·You helped to make it possible for me to have Lucky.
·The more I get to know Julie, the more I realize that we have a lot in
B.【句子升格】
(话题6 志愿服务)
Dear Sir/Madam,
①改为含有定语从句
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to be a
的句子。
volunteer in this “Telling Guizhou Stories,
I—a—m——15——ye—a—rs—o—ld—,—a—n—
19. do well in (在话…题6…志做愿服得务好) 20. get a strong feeling of satisfaction 获得强烈的满足感 21. speak English well 英语讲得好 22. tell a story 讲故事 23. be good with 善于应付……的 24. get on well with 和睦相处,关系良好 25. because of your kindness 因为你的善意 26. play a role 发挥作用,有影响 27. be ready to(do sth.) 准备好(做某事) 28. pay attention to 关注,留意
开头句:
(话题6 志愿服务)
·True happiness comes from helping others.
·To give is better than to receive.

中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)

中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)

看法
我认为……
建议(至少3条) 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右,广播的开头已给出,不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步:集句成段,组段成篇
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For example
There are many things we can do. we can plan
play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧,上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)

2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)

Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.

2024年中考英语作文精讲【成长变化类】 课件(共38张PPT).ppt

2024年中考英语作文精讲【成长变化类】 课件(共38张PPT).ppt

我很感激我的变化与成长. I'm grateful for my changes and growth.
书现在是我的朋友,它们使我受益很多. Books are my friends now, and they benefit me a lot.
句式:I sincerely hope everyone can join us, and try to be a virtue teenager.
进阶写作-成长变化类
Байду номын сангаас
我们在变化中成长
成长让我们的人生充满了意义
回首三年初中时光
我在学习、思想、性格、生活等方 面发生了很多变化
We grow up in changes.
句式: In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to keep healthy.
在家里:
经常与家人交流,分担家务,知错就改
句式:At home, it's our duty to help parents do some housework.
句式:In society, we must obey the rules in public
句式:Also, keep in mind that safety is the first.
句式:In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above.
句式:Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them.
句式:Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely.

2023年中考英语写作技巧课件

2023年中考英语写作技巧课件
I didn’t realize how special my mother was until I became an adult. (表条件) 5.常用句型
As we all know(众所周知), safety is very important to us. (It is +adj.+for/of sb. +to do sth.) 还有很多,考点里的句型大胆用
We all like that speaker who is very humourous.
The meeting that you have missed yesterday was very important. 状语从句: When we got home, dinner was ready.(表时间)
以写人叙事为主题的作文
• 开头结尾用多种不同句式 • 中间段(内容段)活用平常课堂上,考点里面的句 型短语 • 注意时态(叙事一般常用过去时态)
The Security Guard is My Hero(保安是我的英雄)
In the battle against (与...对抗)COVID-19, we have been moved by so
活用所学知识点和谚语
Ms. Liu not only changed my handwriting, but also changed my attitude
towards learning. I’ll never forget her.
I spent too much time playing
studying.
spare no effort to (不遗余力做)help people around me.

中考写作指导课公开课课件

中考写作指导课公开课课件

How to write a good composition? 中考英语写作指导课学习目标:1、审准主题,把握要点,确定时态、人称2、充实细节,step1:Lead-in(2minutes)T:Do you find it difficult to write a good article in English in the test?What problems do you have when you write an article?SS:T: Well, through this class, I hope you can take an active part in it and try your best to learn how to write a good article.Step2: Before-writingTask 1 Think about what makes a good article (2分钟)T: When we talk about a good article, what do you think makes a good article?Ss: ...T: Well, in general, a good article should at least have good language, good organization and good content. And of the three, which do you think is the most important?SS:…T: Yes, that is its content.Task 2 T:So, when we start to write, the first step and the most important step is to read the requirements carefully and decide what we should write about. Now, let’s look at the two exercises. You see, they are of similar topic, but not the same theme. Let’s compare them and find out the key points of each article and decide on the topic sentence for each one.Activity 2提供写作支架Mind-map思维导图,搭建写作内容支架(5分钟)T: From this ad, we know that food waste has become a serious problem and it is necessary for us to save things to protect the environment. So when we talk about saving things at school, what aspects can we include?Ss:some facts about wasting things at schoolthe importance of saving thingshow to save things/ things we can do to save things/ the purpose of doing certain things Activity 3Play a game: Which team is the best greener?环保先锋(5分钟)T: Yes, that’s right. With these aspects, the article is half done. And how good this article is depends on the details. So let’s work together and think of as many things we can do to save things as possible. And see which team is the best greener.Ss: remember to turn off the light/ computer when we leave the room; write our exercises on both sides of the paper; not to ask for more food than we need; don’t throw away any food after meals…[设计意图]先让学生观看一则央视关于食品浪费的公益广告,引出话题, 通过问题的引导学生讨论话题的相关内容,旨在让学生从宏观上思考该话题所包含的主要内容,搭建写作语言支架。

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Stage 2.2: 抓
➢动词
时态
Stage 2.3: 抓
➢语块
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Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
Stage 3: 扩
➢Make up the needed sentences
1.他认为水是最便宜的也是最好的饮(drinks)。 2.他是一个好学生也是一个好儿子。
Stage 4: 连
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, 8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
Some classmates think that it is very strange for him to do so. But in my eyes, his behaviour makes a lot of sense to me. After all it is a traditional virtue to save money.
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审

体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
From the point of my view, we are supposed to learn from him. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life.
要点
文 章 语言 的 评 价
行文
齐 全
语 法
准确



连贯

连接词பைடு நூலகம்
过渡 性句

英文写作评分标准(部分)
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Stage 1: 审
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2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Stage 2.1: 抓
Better Your Writing
Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich. Therefore, a lot of pocket money is given to him by his parents every day. But to my surprise, not like others, Jim tries his best to save money as possible as he can instead of wasting money. The reason is that he knows how hard they work to earn the money. Jim loves reading, and he buys books from the Internet. Sometimes he borrows books from the library in order to save money. Apart from that, he always brings water to school instead of buying juice. In addition, he never buys snacks with his pocket money.
➢断句
1.“他(Jim )的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他(Jim)理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱,想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读,在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学”
8.“他从不花钱买零食”
9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异,但我.....”
第五档: (13-15分) 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要 点;语言基 本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 语法、词汇、标点、大小写、时态准确 分段、连接词、复合句、高级词汇使用恰当
第四档:(10-12分)能写明全部或大部分内容要 点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达清楚。
第三档: (7 - 9分 )能写明大部分内容要点;语言 有较多错误; 尚能达意。
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