高中英语概要写作公开课优质课PPT课件
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高中英语说明文概要写作省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件
Various as people’s names are, they have developed gradually in some common ways.
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Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
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04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
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Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
第5页
04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
高中英语概要写作 Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
There is nothing unusual about a single language dying. Communities have come and gone throughout history, and
with them their language.BBuutt what is happening today is
somewhere in the world every two
weeks or so.
Key point 2:
… many languages are not in such a
serious position… there are things that
The solutions can be done to give new life to them.
The problem
Read for the Content
➢What else do we know about the problem?
It is too late to do anything to help many languages, where the speakers are too few or too old, and where the community is too busy just trying to survive to care about
) older. If good descriptions and materials are available, even
extinct languages can be saved. Kaurna, from South Australia, is an example. This language had been extinct for about a century, but had been quite well documented. So when a strong movement grew for its revival (复活), it was possible to bring it back from death.
with them their language.BBuutt what is happening today is
somewhere in the world every two
weeks or so.
Key point 2:
… many languages are not in such a
serious position… there are things that
The solutions can be done to give new life to them.
The problem
Read for the Content
➢What else do we know about the problem?
It is too late to do anything to help many languages, where the speakers are too few or too old, and where the community is too busy just trying to survive to care about
) older. If good descriptions and materials are available, even
extinct languages can be saved. Kaurna, from South Australia, is an example. This language had been extinct for about a century, but had been quite well documented. So when a strong movement grew for its revival (复活), it was possible to bring it back from death.
Unit4概要写作专题课件高中英语堂(人教版2019)
因果
because of，due to， thanks to，therefore，so
目的
to do，in order to，so that， with the purpose of...
学会积累！
us another talk this week.
both…and…，neither…nor…，either…or…，not only…but also…可两个 简单句合并为一个简单句。连接两主语时需注意：
both…and…连接两个主语谓语复数，而neither…nor…，either…or…，not
only…but also…连接两主语时，谓语动词遵循就近原则。
③This store sells men’s shoes, and it also sells men’s clothes.
①We don’t speak Japanese well and Jim doesn’t, too.
②Alice has read the book and Peter has read it, too.
in summary，in conclusion， in a word，all in all， last but not least，finally， at last...
递进
also，besides，in addition， more importantly， what’s more， what’s worse，
改写技巧
步骤二 意译（改写）
确定主题句
paraphrase
誊写成文
将要点或主题句用自己的语言进行准确地简化和 改写（保证要点和语法的准确、保证不被判定为抄袭原文）
改写技巧
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
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I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
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Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
最新高考英语写作专题概要写作PPT课件
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I went on to another grocery store, staying for
about five minutes while shopping for tomatoes,
onions and other vegetables. During that time,
the man managed to sit up and wave to passing
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第二步：阅读材料，回答以下两个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.
(2) 结果如何？He got sick. He was angry with his parents and felt lonely.
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［例2］ (2011年广州一模) 阅读下面短文, 然后按要求写一篇150词左右 的英语短文。—内容略
［写作内容］ 1. 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感, 说明“诚 信的重要性”。
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[解题过程] 第一步, 根据[写作内容2] , 快速获取大
意。[写作内容2]说明“诚信的重要性”， 扫读原文可以发现该文章是夹叙夹议的记 叙文, 那么我们可以形成概要框架: 作者讲 述了一个故事来说明诚信的重要性。这样, 就有了方向和思路了。
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第二步：阅读材料, 回答以下三个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？The writer tells a story of an overseas Chinese student. The student had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times.
高中英语新高考概要写作-公开课(共24张PPT)
spent much money on
treasured treated it kindly
used it carefully
You spent much money on it and treasured it.
Para1.概写后
Long before, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasuredowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly 需to提th取e “的th一row些-a细w节ay信so息ciety” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
需提取的信息 忽略具体事例 detailed example
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概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly? (如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
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there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语教学竞赛公开课、高考复习课件——高考“概要写作”教学课件
• 2. Read the article for all you can understand the first time through.
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
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Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高中英语专家讲座-概要写作交流课件(共49张PPT)
students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit
college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to
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can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain
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高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Tips for rewriting:
How can we rewrite the key points in our own words? e synonyms or synonymous phrases. bine two or more sentences by using clause, participle,
As the result of his work, Ebbesmeyer has become known as the scientist to call with questions about any unusual objects found floating in the ocean. (Point 4)
2. Some parents are in favor of this activity because it is a useful way to release students’ pressure.
Summary writing
What is a summary? It’s a concise, complete and objective restatement of the key points of a passage in your own words.
《普通高等学招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
Read for the structure:
Four elements The topic The reason The method The result
Paragraph Para. 1
Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4
Read for the key points:
E1b)beWsmhaeyt’esrtshtuedtoiepsicocoefatnhicsuprraesnsatsgbe?y s(Ptuadryai.n1g)movements of random floating garbage. (Point1)
Iathfn2ehd) peWttarlhaethitacseykrrsnnedpdtsiedwcowihfEhaeolbencrwbeeaeaatsnynhmd?eceywuy(lhrPeareranerrndweateast.dh.n2,e(t)hPsteohoiconsoettuus2ldwd)yelneoatcreinnatnao cltohuterrawebnaottuestrin
Ebbesmeyer got to know a lot of beachcombers and asked for their help in collecting information about where the shoes landed. With this data, …(Point 3)
with-structure and so on. 3.Turn complex sentences into simple ones by omitting
unnecessary parts. e connectives to make it coherent.
Practice for rewriting:
1. Opinions about whether high school students should open micro blogs vary from person to person. People hold different views about whether students should open micro blogs.
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要.
1) Read the passage for the style, structure and key points.
2) Rewrite the key points in our own words briefly and coherently.
E3b)beHsmoweydeirdghoet tcookllnecotwdaatlao?t o(fPbaeraac.h3c)ombers and asked for their help in collecting information about where the shoes landed. With this data, …(Point 3) As4t)heWrhesaut’lst othf ehriseswuolrtko,fEhbisbewsomreky?er(Phaarsab.e4c)ome known as the scientist to call with questions about any unusual objects found floating in the ocean. (Point 4)
Rewrite the key points in our own words:
Ebbesmeyer studies ocean currents by studying movements of random floating garbage. (Point 1)
If he learnt when and where the shoes went into the water and tracked where they landed, he could learn a lot about the patterns of ocean currents. (Point 2)
Read for the style:
What’s the style of the passage? A. Narration B. Argumentationtructure of an exposition
The topic-what The reason-why The effects-how The solution/conclusion