12月优秀托福作文批改展示
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分类：独立+综合/TPO4 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80916-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO6 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82227-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
南小希~gogogo 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO3 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81744-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
JessicaZhang 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO13 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82402-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO3 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82296-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
12 月托福写作优秀批改展示
七夜雪 老师 明明 2014 老师 JessicaZhang 老师 一米阳光 happy 老师 南小希~gogogo 老师 月~fiona 老师
Bernie 老师 秒速 5 厘米 老师 Claire.wang 老师
七夜雪 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO20 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80866-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TP24 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81945-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
№4 分类：独立+综合/TPO14 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81568-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO22 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81811-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
明明 2014 老师 №1
分类：独立+综合/TPO32 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81779-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO8 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80591-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
4 / 10
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO8 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82174-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO31 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82034-1-1.html?yxpg源自文库独立题目：Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
1 / 10
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO30 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82176-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目： It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
月~fiona 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO1 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80122-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
2 / 10
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO6 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81909-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO23 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81477-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目： In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO33 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81553-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO27 链接 ：http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81767-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would he more satisfying.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO9 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81402-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
一米阳光 happy 老师
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO18 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82094-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO4 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81602-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO7 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82063-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO25 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81888-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO29 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81597-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
3 / 10
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO19 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82436-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
分类：独立+综合/TPO4 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80916-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO6 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82227-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
南小希~gogogo 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO3 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81744-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
JessicaZhang 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO13 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82402-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO3 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82296-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
12 月托福写作优秀批改展示
七夜雪 老师 明明 2014 老师 JessicaZhang 老师 一米阳光 happy 老师 南小希~gogogo 老师 月~fiona 老师
Bernie 老师 秒速 5 厘米 老师 Claire.wang 老师
七夜雪 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO20 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80866-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TP24 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81945-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
№4 分类：独立+综合/TPO14 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81568-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO22 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81811-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
明明 2014 老师 №1
分类：独立+综合/TPO32 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81779-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO8 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80591-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
4 / 10
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分类：独立+综合/TPO8 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82174-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO31 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82034-1-1.html?yxpg源自文库独立题目：Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
1 / 10
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO30 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82176-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目： It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
月~fiona 老师
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO1 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-80122-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
2 / 10
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO6 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81909-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO23 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81477-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目： In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO33 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81553-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO27 链接 ：http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81767-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would he more satisfying.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO9 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81402-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
一米阳光 happy 老师
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO18 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82094-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
№1
分类：独立+综合/TPO4 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81602-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
№2
分类：独立+综合/TPO7 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82063-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
№5
分类：独立+综合/TPO25 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81888-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
№3
分类：独立+综合/TPO29 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-81597-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
小站教育 http://www.tpooo.com 小站论坛 http://bbs.tpooo.com
3 / 10
№4
分类：独立+综合/TPO19 链接 : http://bbs.tpooo.com/thread-82436-1-1.html?yxpg 独立题目：In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.