高中英语作文讲解(课堂PPT)

attach great importance to grammar.
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二.如何使用较丰富的句式
1. 感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter!
2. 倒装句 Not only can it help you to form the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability and skills.
There is a clean river in the city
A clean river winds through the city.
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一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. A good idea suddenly occurred to me.
=》That naughty boy ran away without
turning off the water.
=》In order to escape being scolded, the
naughty boy ran away without turning off
the water.
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如何写出精彩的高档句子 突破书面表达的高分？
她决定好好学习。
She decided to study hard.
She was determined to devote herself to studying.
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一、怎样使用较高级词汇
2. 弃旧取新:
There is a temple on top of the mountain.
On top of the mountain stands a temple.
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from English writing class. I’m writing to ask for your help.
I’m applying for a part-time job in a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment（附件 ）.
1. 使用较高级的词汇 词汇可以衡量英语水平
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2. 使用较丰富的句式
丰富的句式可以使文章增 色生辉 。
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3. 使用恰当的连接词 恰当的连接词， 使文章有 “英语味” ，上下衔接自 然。
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一、怎样使用较高级词汇
1. 短语优先： 我们想要和平。
We want peace.
We look forward to /call on peace.
2. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 3. When he spoke, he felt more and more
excited.
The more he spo源自文库e, the more excited he felt. 4. What we can do is to study hard.
佳作欣赏---2016高考全国I卷作文范文
书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写 好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改 所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
=》句句之间的衔接
然而，并且，但是 however--- and---; but;
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Writing 写出优质句子，
突破作文高分
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学习目标
1. 能够鉴赏范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表达形式。
2. 通过合作讲解： 能够写出正确的简单句 能够创作出精彩高档句
3. 掌握如何评价一份作文。
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第一步：找出句子主干， 翻译句子主干。
Thank you for your kindness! ( 102 Words)
Yours,
Li HUa
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经典累积
2016高考全国I卷作文范文鉴赏。 =》用词的地道
ask for your help; apply for; make changes
=》句式的高级
我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并 作I k出no必w要yo的u改h变av我e a会v很er感y 激bu。sy schedule , but I ‘d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.
What we can do is to devote ourselves to study.
5. The teacher suggested that we should
pay attention to grammar.
The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should
第二步：找出修饰成分， 添加修饰成分。
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第一步：找出句子主干，
例句：
翻译句子主干。
为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男男 孩没关水龙头就跑了。
The boy ran away.
注意：时态和语态
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第二步：找出修饰成分，
添加修饰成分
为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男孩 没关水龙头就跑了。
=》That naughty boy ran away.