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方法归纳
if, as long as, so long as, on condition that(条件是), unless
and, both…and…, or, either…or…, neither…nor…,as well as
总结类 条件类
让步类 并列类
方法归纳
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方法归纳 (2)分析原因: There are several reasons that account for this phenomenon. A number of factors account for(contribute to/lead to/result in)the change(phenomenon /increase). The main reason for such a change is … 3.发表看法/提出建议时: Personally/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view… It is high time that we…
将图表所传达的信息进行全面的转换,并根据不同的项目对信息进行分类,这是进行数据整 合的基础,这一过程中要尽量确保信息的全面。
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方法归纳
2 整合信息,总结规律/分析原因
信息经过分类之后,以某一个标准为参照(比如时间、地域等),总结出同一对象在不同时间/ 地域/…下的变化规律,或通过对同类信息的对比分析出问题出现的原因。找出规律/原因是 解决问题/提出建议的基础。
高考英语作文考题类型例析——图表作文
高考英语作文考题类型例析——图表作文1、Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例。
请简要描述该图，选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由。
答案Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities．We can see from the graph that about 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interest．More students （around 45%）, however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society．Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision．Personally, I would like to choose my courses and university according to my own interest．The reasons can be listed as follows．To begin with, it is widely acknowledged that interest is the best teacher．With the help of this best teacher, my four- year learning experience in the university will be made more enjoyable and much easier as well．While on the other hand, it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in．Quite apart from that, interest helps to arouse your curiosity, stimulate your motivation for exploring new things, thus leading to creativity and even a new invention, which might be beneficial to the whole world．For these reasons, /As mentioned above, I can draw a safe conclusion that there is nothing that will make my college life more fascinating than interest．I have every reason to believe that, with a goal in my mind, along with the interest and effort, I will surely achieve great success in the coming university life．2、下面是一张有关新西兰气象的图表，请根据这张图表用英语介绍新西兰的气象情况，内容应包括：1．冬夏的月份；2．全国冬夏气温的总体情况；3．全国最高气温和最低气温；4．冬夏温差最大的地方。
2024届高三英语基础写作：图表作文-调查图表+评价+建议+课件
3. Structure Para. 1 引言及简述调查结果： 更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数 据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。 Para. 2 评价调查结果 可从减压方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向 等方面切入。 Para. 3 建议 可从学生个人、社团（如英语俱乐部）或学校三个维度思考
Ways to Relieve Stress Para. 1 引言及简述调查结果 Para. 2 评价调查结果 Para. 3 建议
• listen to music 65% • watch videos 80% • do sports 30% • talk to others 40%
引言的相关句子表达 (1) 上周，我们对sb.进行了关于sth.的调查 ① Last week, we carried out / made / did/ conducted/ undertook a survey on sth. among (sb.) ② A survey was carried out among sb. on the theme of... ③ Lask week witnessed a survey conducted by our school on the theme of... (2) 调查结果显示...... The results show/ reveal that students...
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上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表类作文详解
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考情分析
4 mins
2016年高考作文分析
6 mins
2016年高考作文实操
20 mins
点评、课后作业和预习
10 mins
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试卷解读 1
数据差异the difference of the two figures between parents and children
key words and expression
show-indicate显示/survey调查/ pride骄傲/be proud of以。。。为自豪
试卷解读 2
考情分析
上海高考 作文
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体裁特点
题材特点
应用文 申请信（帮助儿童的扶贫项目）
夹叙夹议
日记（绘画课感想）
应用文
建议信（名画展出场所）
应用文
建议信（校报改版）
应用文 推荐信（“读书节”宣传册图片）
议论文
“父母是否以子女为荣”
应用文
建议信（名画展出场所）
说明文
校报征文（对老师分类评价）
命题形式
提纲 半开放
提纲 提纲 提纲 提纲(图表) 提纲 半开放
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高考英语数据图表分析类小作文课件
HOMEWORK
1、背诵例句 2、润色文章
第二段可背例句
1、 These figures may reflect … 这些数据可能反映出了… 2、on one hand, on the other hand 一方面，另一方面… 3、The figures of the chart suggest that 图表中的数据表明…
注意要点
3、到了最后一段，考生可以发表个人看法。 既然图表的数据反映了吃货的注意要点
2、来到中间段，考生需要分析这些数据。 它们反映了消费者就餐时的顾虑和喜好。消 费者最关注的因素是特色，那么考生就需要 解释为什么如此。考生不应该泛泛而谈，而 应指出具体的原因，比如人们在很多方面都 追求特色(个性)，就餐时也是如此。至于服 务和环境，试想，谁不希望得到良好的服务 以及在友善的环境下消费呢？公务宴席就餐 者喜欢安静的环境，追求时尚的年轻食客喜 欢高大上的环境等。
分析图表，数据呈现
The chart shows the result of a citywide survey on
factors that influence its residents' restaurant
selection.
第一段要说明这个图表是干嘛的
The data shows that specialty, chosen by more than 1/3 of respondents, is what residents care most about now. Expectation on great service is also high (26.8%), as well as better environment(24.2%). In contrast, It seems that price, with the proportion dropping to a mere 8%, is no longer customers primary concern.
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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上海高考英语作文分类训练：图表作文
图表作文1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.国际经合组织（OECD）对600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查，结果如下图。
请联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。
3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.假设你是李华，你的英语老师把你班同学分成几个小组来调查班里患近视(short-sightedness)的同学的人数和原因。
你们小组调查后做了如下图所示的统计，请分析下面的饼状图，并谈谈你的看法及建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.下列图表反映的是某高中2010年与2013年学生健康状况调查的部分数据，请你用英语为某报写一份报告，反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其中原因，并提出一些改进措施。
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(完整版)上海高考英语作文解析
2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷一．书面表达（共20小题）1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须:1．描述调研数据;2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因2．学校即将举办"读书节”，目前正广泛征集"读书节”宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传”读书节"的理由．3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．4．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．6．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter(高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教,请给Peter回复一封电子邮件,邮件必须包括以下内容:结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由;就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．．7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写．8．你班将召开一次主题班会,探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍;2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．．9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to theinstructions given below in Chinese．假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员,请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：在三项方案中选择其一；对该方案提出建议；谈谈你提出建议的理由．．10．假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明,写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容:•简要介绍个人特长•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员,对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议注意：文中请勿提及真实学校Dear Sir/Madam．11．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历,谈谈你的想法．12．某英文网站正举办征文活动,题目是The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned，请以此写一篇征文．你的文章比须包括：•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的?•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．（注:文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称)．13．假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如图所示),你希望加入其中一个．请你写一篇日记,谈谈你的想法．内容必须包括：•你希望加入的社团•选择该社团的原因•你可以为该社团做些什么注意:请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称．14．如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）．请写一篇作文，内容包括：1．给procrastination下定义；2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．15．最近，网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点，一种是"兴趣是最好的老师”，另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．请你结合自己的体会，选择你支持的观点，表达自己的看法，并阐述理由．注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．16．现有一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台，这是该平台上显示学生参与活动的流程图：请你据此写一篇短文，你的文章必须包括：•简要介绍参与活动的流程．•谈谈你对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．．17．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青,有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）．如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？注意:自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．18．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to theinstructions given below in Chinese．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法,你的文章应包括：●具体描述两幅图；●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因;●提出解决问题的建议．（注:请勿出现真实姓名和学校）19．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions．你是李华,为解决你所在的学校公益社团(public welfare society）的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信,募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：1．向全校的捐款号召．2．你发起这一活动的理由．3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．(文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等任何真实信息）20．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：具体描述两幅图；简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；提出解决问题的建议．（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷参考答案与试题解析一．书面表达（共20小题)1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为”父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告,在报告中，你必须：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论．时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主．写作要点为:1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．重要的词汇及短语：make a survey 做调查hold the same opinion 持相同的观点according to…根据…approve 同意,认可cause 起因，原因figure out 找出lead to 导致subtle 细微的conservative 保守的accustom to 习惯于convey 传递(信息)tendency 趋势conceal 隐藏the current education system 常规的教育体系bias 偏爱，偏见excessively 过分地高分句型：句型一：There seems to be①two causes as②we tried to figure out what③led to this subtle difference．there seems to be 句型，表示”看上去似乎有";as 引导时间状语从句，表示伴随,主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；what 引导宾语从句．句型二：The current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．句型三：This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．【解答】Recently,we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80％ of parents are proud of their children while only 60％ of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20％more than of children．（描述调研数据)There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference．【高分句型一】First,conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self﹣confidence．(原因一）Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．【高分句型二】This bias unfairlyundermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二)Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam﹣oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown﹣up．（结论)【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因,得出结论．2．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节”宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传”读书节"的理由．【分析】本文采用了”图表+提纲类"形式,根据文章所给提示信息给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅图片，描述图片同时阐述推荐理由，既是提纲作文又是图画类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第二和第三人称．重要短语:around the corner（即将到来)，recommend sthto…．（推荐什么给），remind sb of sth （提醒某人…．），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言）,turn out to be（结果是)，not only…．，but also…．（不仅,而且），enhance …．understanding of…。
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2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷一．书面表达（共20小题）1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因2．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．4．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．6．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．．7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写．8．你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼．请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿．文章需包括：1．你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；2．你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议．．9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对．作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其一，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由．你的写作中必须包括：在三项方案中选择其一；对该方案提出建议；谈谈你提出建议的理由．．10．假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明，写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：•简要介绍个人特长•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员，对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议注意：文中请勿提及真实学校Dear Sir/Madam．11．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历，谈谈你的想法．12．某英文网站正举办征文活动，题目是The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned，请以此写一篇征文．你的文章比须包括：•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的？•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称）．13．假设你是李华，学校有四个社团正招募新人（如图所示），你希望加入其中一个．请你写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法．内容必须包括：•你希望加入的社团•选择该社团的原因•你可以为该社团做些什么注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称．14．如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）．请写一篇作文，内容包括：1．给procrastination下定义；2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．15．最近，网络上针对学习有两种不同的观点，一种是"兴趣是最好的老师"，另一种是"兴趣不是最好的老师"．请你结合自己的体会，选择你支持的观点，表达自己的看法，并阐述理由．注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．16．现有一个中学生志愿者服务的网络平台，这是该平台上显示学生参与活动的流程图：请你据此写一篇短文，你的文章必须包括：•简要介绍参与活动的流程．•谈谈你对通过网络平台参与志愿者服务活动的看法．．17．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）．如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．18．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：●具体描述两幅图；●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；●提出解决问题的建议．（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）19．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions．你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团（public welfare society）的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：1．向全校的捐款号召．2．你发起这一活动的理由．3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）20．下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境．请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：具体描述两幅图；简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；提出解决问题的建议．（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）2018年01月25日试用3的高中英语组卷参考答案与试题解析一．书面表达（共20小题）1．假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论．时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主．写作要点为：1．描述调研数据；2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．重要的词汇及短语：make a survey 做调查hold the same opinion 持相同的观点according to…根据…approve 同意，认可cause 起因，原因figure out 找出lead to 导致subtle 细微的conservative 保守的accustom to 习惯于convey 传递（信息）tendency 趋势conceal 隐藏the current education system 常规的教育体系bias 偏爱，偏见excessively 过分地高分句型：句型一：There seems to be①two causes as②we tried to figure out what③led to this subtle difference．there seems to be 句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；as 引导时间状语从句，表示伴随，主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；what 引导宾语从句．句型二：The current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．句型三：This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimatethemselves．这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．【解答】Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．（描述调研数据）There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference．【高分句型一】First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self﹣confidence．（原因一）Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．【高分句型二】This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二）Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam﹣oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown﹣up．（结论）【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．2．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．【分析】本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅图片，描述图片同时阐述推荐理由，既是提纲作文又是图画类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第二和第三人称．重要短语：around the corner（即将到来），recommend sth to…．（推荐什么给），remind sb of sth （提醒某人…．），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言），turn out to be （结果是），not only…．，but also…．（不仅，而且），enhance …．understanding of…..（增强…..的理解），take sth into consideration…．（把…..考虑在内）．【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，Since the Reading Festival is around the corner，I'm writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading．In the picture，three students are sitting at the table，discussing heatedly what they have just read．【高分句型】It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion．（描述图片）Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration，as far as I'm concerned，it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated．Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots．You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can't help sharing it with your classmatesor best friends，who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well．【高分句型】The moment you mention the book，the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own．【高分句型】My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that，through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself，but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers，which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book．【高分句型】To sum up，the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and common interest．（阐述推荐该图片的理由）I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply．Yours sincerely，Pan Yang【点评】写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．3．学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报．假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点．邮件须包括以下内容：1．你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2．你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由．【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，就学校英语报改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报事宜发表自己的观点．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点：1．表示对客人的欢迎；2．介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）3．表达对客人的祝愿；重要短语：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（与某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用说），according to （根据），have positive effects on（对…有影响），be of great significance（非常有意义），loss of （损失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓宽某人的视野），in turn （反过来又），be beneficial to （对…有益）．【高分句型一】1．①Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view ②that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important．①此处是过去分词作状语，主句为"I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important"，主句的主语为"I"与所给动词存在逻辑上的被动关系．②此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"引导的同位语从句解释说明"view"的具体内容．【高分句型二】2．The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life．此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"The main factor"，谓语动词为"is"．【高分句型三】3．the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life．此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．【高分句型四】4．Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post．此处是由连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，连接词"that"解释说明名词"hope"的具体内容．【解答】Dear Editor，I've learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one．I'm writing this e﹣mail to share with you my opinions．Needless to say，the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life．（写信的目的）Compared to the entertainment，I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important．【高分句型一】The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life．【高分句型二】Consequently，more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life．In addition，the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one's horizons，which in turn is beneficial to one's study and the establishment of philosophy of life．【高分句型三】（建议去除的栏目及去除的理由）Furthermore，the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post．On the one hand，it covers one's career development a great deal．On the other hand，it makes a great difference to one's career success in the future．（建议增加的栏目及去除的理由）What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas．Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post．【高分句型四】（希望）Yours sincerely，Cheng Fei【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．4．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．【分析】本文为看图作文，主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活"．写作时可按"三段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述其含义，发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：do some actions （做一些动作…），look like…（看上去像…），be faced with （面临，面对），manage to do （成功地做某事），have a positive attitude toward…（对…有积极的态度），have great influence on（有很大影响），keep peace（保持平静）．【解答】As is vividly shown in the picture，an old granny who looks ugly in a wheelchair does some actions．The actions reflect on the wall，which makes her look like a young beautiful girl．（描述图片）【高分句型】The picture conveys that some people are positive when they are faced with life．They are always so energetic and enterprising that they manage to finish most of tasks well．Life returns color to those people who have positive and optimistic attitudes toward life．（联系实际，反映问题）【高分句型】Now that a positive attitude can lead us a better life，how can we develop a positive attitude？For one thing，we should hold a dream about future to provide our life a clear direction．For another，it is necessary for us to be confident which is the energy of life，perhaps the beauty of life．【高分句型】Whether we can find it have a great influence on our attitude towards life，so we should keep peace in our heart to find the beauty of life．In my opinion，if we can do like that mentioned above，better life will hug us tightly．（观点）【点评】写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．5．Directions：Write an English composition in 120﹣150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．【分析】高分句型：句型一：①The reason why I still keep it in my memory is ②that it reminds me of an old saying：there must be a use for one's talent．The reason why…是以reason为先行词，关系副词why引导的定语从句．在that引导的表语从句中含有短语remind sb．of sth．使某人想起某物．句型二：①When I was ten years old，there was an old man ②living in my neighborhood．when引导时间状语从句，在从句中作状语．living是现在分词作后置定语，与其逻辑主语man是主动关系．【解答】In my drawer，there is a deliberate wooden toy horse．（开门见山，指出珍藏的物品）It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still veryyoung．The reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of anold saying：there must be a use for one's talent．【高分句型一】When I was ten years old，therewas an old man living in my neighborhood．【高分句型一】He didn't have theopportunity to study in school，but he learned how to make wood furniture．Everytime people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture，he waswilling to help them．To my surprise，in his spare time，he would make some toys with small piece s of wood．Some ofthem were sold to the toy store and others were given to us．（具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品）The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man，I wouldremember the happy childhood．The old man impressed me deeply with his talent andkindness．From the little horse toy，we can see whatever kind of talent you have，you canfind your own method to display your talent and bring love to others．（这件物品为什么珍藏到现在的原因）【点评】本文要求描写一件你珍藏的物品，要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．所以在写作时必须审好题，不能遗漏任何一条．在准确表述内容的基础上，争取多用些从句，非谓语和短语使文章生动，上档次．6．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．Besides，having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．What's more，a tutor may make you depend fully onhim and lose your self﹣motivation on study，which is exactly the truth of study．Without it，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you to invite a home tutor．When it comes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details．Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam．．【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件，就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．写作要点包括：1．结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由；2．就复习迎考提出主要建议．写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：invitesb to do （邀请某人做某事），prepare for （为…作准备），be able to do（能够做某事），be similar to （与…相似），dependon （取决于，依赖），be of no use （没有用处），When it comes to…（当谈到，涉及到），bepoor at （在…薄弱），be accompanied with（带有，兼有），captureall the details（掌握所有细节），achievea good score（取得好成绩）．【高分句型】1．Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．这里是由现在分词hearing作状语，主句为I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'，主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．2．A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作宾语，指代前面的名词150 yuan or more per hour．3．I find that most of the information is similar to ②that of school's，①which is even with little or no extended materials，③so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词the information，that=the+名词．③这里是由连词so引导的句子，与前面的句子I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials构成因果关系．【解答】Hearing thatyou're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for thecoming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．【高分句型】（表达观点）A tutor costshigh，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．【高分句型】Besides，having studied that detailed informationof tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information issimilar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extendedmaterials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with fullattention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully afterclass．【高分句型】What's more，a tutor may make you dependfully on him and lose your self﹣motivation on study，which isexactly the truth of study．【高分句型】Withoutit，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you toinvite a home tutor．（理由）When itcomes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result withhalf the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particularexercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all thedetails．【高分句型】（建议）Try hard and I believe you can achieve agood score in the exam．（结尾﹣﹣﹣总结概括）【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．7．以下是三座城市在就业、娱乐、环境方面的满意度．假如你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，请从你和家庭的情况考虑选择一座比较满意的城市，并简要谈谈选择这座城市的理由．提示：不必对图表中的数据做详细描写．【分析】本文是图表作文，根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述你的家庭打算移居到其中的某座城市，考虑在就业、娱乐、环境等方面选择一座比较满意的城市并说明理由．写作要点：1．概述图表；2．选择城市B的理由；3．结尾点题．写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主．重要短语：illustrate sth （解释某事），as follows（如下），according to（根据），in one's opinion（某人认为），plays a vital role in（起重要作用），affect sth （影响某物），as well （也），do some recreational activities （进行一些娱乐活动），such as （例如），in terms of（就…而言），meet our needs（同时），all in all（问题的答案），take sth into account（许诺某人某事），embrace the life（许诺某人某事）．【高分句型一】1．①what's important to my family is②that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment ③which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．①此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在主语从句中作主语．②此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句，"that"在从句中起连接词的作用，无意义．③此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，"which"在定语从句中作主语，先行词为"environmen"，定语从句中由"not only…，but also…"结构连接两个谓语动词．【高分句型二】2．What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．【解答】This bar chart illustrates the satisfaction of employment、entertainment and environment in three cities．Among all the cities involved，according to the situation of my family，plan to move to City B．I have some reasons as follows．（概述图表）Firstly，City B has the second best environment of all the three cities．In my opinion，what's important to my family is that we can live in a city with a pleasant environment which not only plays a vital role in our physical fitness，but greatly affects our mental health as well．【高分句型一】（选择城市B的理由一）Secondly，there are three young members including me in my family，and we always do some recreational activities together，such as going shopping and doing some sports．In terms of entertainment，City B can meet our needs more than the other cities．（选择城市B的理由二）What's more，we can see that the employment in City B is not so bad from the chat，which is better than City C．【高分句型二】My parents are both senior engineers and I have no worries about them．For me，I'm just a high school student，employment is not my priority．I know if I study hard form now on，I can find a good job without any doubt in the near future．（选择城市B的理由三）All in all，after taking what my family need into account．City B is my first choice．I look forward to embracing the life of the new city．（结尾点题）【点评】表格类作文写作要注意：1）不同文体的格式，避免"填表式"表达.2）灵活变通，避免"硬译式"，表达表格中的汉语提示简洁凝练，概括性强，表达时切忌逐字逐句翻译，要做灵活调整或进行补充；较为抽象、复杂的汉语提示应善于变通转换．3）衔接，避免"单句式"表达，使全文语篇通顺连贯．。
上海新世纪高考英语作文分类讲评范文课件(共27张PPT)
作文范文：Junk message
• 目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们生活带来困扰，分析原 因谈谈如何解决这个问题。
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Junk messages are in the air. People are caught up
• 分为4段 • 第一段：陈述现状
• 第二段：优点罗列；缺点罗列
• 第三段: 表明自己的态度 • 第四段: 总结
二图表类别：最近学校在高中生中做一次 :有烦恼向谁说？的调查活动，谈谈想法和理由。
Recently, a survey on the topic ‘ whom do you turn to when in trouble’ has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students.
• Anti-junk-message war can be demanding , but it will be worth the efforts to free people form the constant assault presented by these unwelcomed visitor.
• There is no doubt that mobile phones have their advantages. As a communication tool, mobile phones connect people conveniently. We can use mobile phones to call or send text messages to each other, keeping in touch with the outside world. On the other hand, mobile phones also have disadvantages.
专题08-2022年上海卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析
专题08-2022年上海卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析【试题再现2022年秋季高考作文题】2022年上海高考英语作文网络回忆版：假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择：1.走访老战士；2.表演历史剧；3.制作历史短视频。
现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括：1.你的建议2.你的理由【试题解读】【审题】审题分析：建议信+选择类，都是大家平时经常练习的内容，应该说今年的秋考作文相当友好了，文章框架结构非常清晰，关键是一定要把自己的理由写清楚，通过明确的topic sentence突出自己所选活动的优势，再用supportive sentence增强说服力。
【相关词汇】走进历史approaching history/walking into history制作短视频making/filming short videos拜访老战士visiting the old soldiers历史舞台剧historical stage play【大纲撰写】下面是以“制作短视频”为例的大纲:a.在社交媒体盛行年代，短视频更容易让年轻人接受b.通过短视频活动方式，成本低，且不需要消耗师生时间、精力c.短视频一个好处就是能够充分展现历史的丰富内容供参考观点：走访老战士——1. 真实；2. 连接现实，让同学们了解历史就是现实表演历史剧——1.有趣； 2.更身临其境地了解体会历史制作短视频——1.流行，便于传播；2. 能发动更多的人参加活动【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Headmaster,My name is Li Hua, one of senior students in our school. I am writing this letter torecommend “history play” as the main activity of “Revisiting the history”.First and foremost, it is a better way to know about the historical events vividly by maximum students’ engagement rather than printed text and photos. Through the involvement students could efficiently remember historical facts instead of merely reciting them from books or PPTs. Secondly, by appreciating the heroic plots in the stage, students would comprehend the hard-won achievements of revolution deeply. For students can further recognize the background, analyze and the cause and evaluate the effect after the whole process of historical rehearsal. Most important of all, the excellent stories of national heroes and heroines will be imprinted in students’ mind and stimulate their national pride and confidence, and even promote their devotion to a better future of our country.Yours truly,Li Hua【满分范文欣赏2】Dear Headmaster,Having heard our school is going to organize an activity about walking into history and is now considering three ways among"making short videos"visiting the old soldiers" and "historical stage play”I am writing to voice my support for filming short videos. My reasons in favour are listed as follows.First and foremost, electronic devices are almost available to the young generation and social media like TikTok have been on the rise, leaving the short video prone to being accepted by the youth. Apart from its short videos bear a little cost and energy for the school side. Not only will they help save the school’s financial budget, but also they will not involve too much energy of the teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities. Last but not least short videos can cover more various historical themes in a wider range, which means historical tales and figures from the ancient society to modern one can be exhibited through videos.Conclusively, these are my reasons after careful consideration. I sincerely wish my voice could be heard and a success would be followed in this activity.Yours truly,Li Hua【试题再现2022年春季高考作文】假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。
上海高考英语作文模板(书信、图表、议论)
上海高考英语作文模板书信类Word came that ... I'm writing to express my humble opinions/raise my proposals...To begin with, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）Additionally, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）Last but not least, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）In a nutshell, 总结句（1句）+ 提出希望（1-2句）图表类With the development of ..., ... is becoming more and more ...As is clearly/vividly depicted in the chart/picture, there is an overall trend about ...A accounts for ...% in ..., which is ...B takes up ...% in ..., demonstrating ... C, however, hold ...%.It is evidently not difficult to reveal that ... For one thing, ... For another, ...In a nutshell, ... can't be overemphasized. From my perspective, 观点1. What's more, 观点2. Only when ... can we ...议论文Nowadays, when it comes to ..., 描述背景。
In view of the fact, opinions vary from person to person. From my perspective, ...To begin with, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）Subsequently, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）Last but not least, 主题句（1句）+ 拓展句（2-3句）In a nutshell, it is + 被强调部分+ that ... （1句）+ 重申观点（1句）。
【英语写作】高考英语满分作文全解全析(标准范文1篇+满分范例8篇)2018上海卷
2018上海卷一、真题展示假如你是明启中学高三学生卢平，校英文报向高三学生征文，题目是“My teachers”，你想要投稿，内容必须包括：1. 请你将认识的老师进行分类；2. 具体描述每一类老师的牲。
二、真题解析本篇书面表达属于主题作文，要求对认识的老师进行分类，并具体描述每一类老师的特征。
乍一看，“My teachers”仿佛是从初中就开始涉及的话题，会有一定的亲切感，但细细分析，同学们会发现今年英语作文的难度，不管是在文章形式还是文章内容上，都有了大幅的难度提升。
从形式上而言，其虽然属于书信体，但脱离了同学们惯常所见的各种夹叙夹议类文体，其设定更加偏向说明文。
开头如何阐述？主体部分是否以对比形式呈现？最后又该如何收尾？这些都会对学生造成困惑。
从内容上而言，“My teachers”看似简单，但其对学生的要求实则不低。
首先，将teachers 具体分为几类，每类该如何命名和定义，其次，分类之后又该如何进行细节阐述。
对于一个观察能力或归纳总结能力欠缺的学生而言，题目的要求必然令人手足无措。
但本文的选材属于校园生活，这一话题一直是考查的重点，贴近学生生活实际，让学生有话可说。
题目中已经给出了内容要点，所以可以根据要点分段并进行适当扩充，以使行文连贯，有血有肉。
另外，文章词数在题中没有明确的要求，所以请参考一般高考写作的要求。
本文的标题是“My teachers”，所以应该用第一人称，而且本文是介绍自己身边的老师，所以主体时态为一般现在时。
三、写作小贴士1、词数没有明确要求，但应该有所控制。
2、文章要覆盖所有内容要点，并适当延伸。
3、对于教师的分类一定要明确，不可含糊其词，杂糅交替。
4、对于细节的阐述，一定要充分有条理。
5、对于分类阐述完成之后，一定要有自己的选择和之后的主题升华，将整篇文章的高度进行拔高，工体现观察之外的思考。
四、标准范文My teachersIn our school teachers are classified into two types. One type is teachers who know all the things. The other is teachers who focus on their own subject.Mr. Li is our history teacher. He can answer all the questions about different dynasties clearly. He often tells amusing anecdotes of ancient emperors which are of great fun. We all like this type of teachers.We also appreciate the second type of teachers. They are experts in some fields. But it’s better to combine theories and practice.I will remember all the teachers who teach me knowledge and make me laugh.译文在我们学校，老师可以分成两种，一种是全知全能的老师，另外一种是专注于自己科目的老师。
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表类作文详解PPT优质公开课
How do we protect oursleves from
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should
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谋篇布局
列提纲—打草稿
：十句左右的句子 + 连词
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课后作业 2
2015江苏高考英语作文题 请阅读左边文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一 篇 150 词左右的文章.
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容; 2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主 要原因; 3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启 示(不少于两点)。 [写作要求] 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2. 作 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 不必写标题。 [评分标准] 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
Without the sincere encouragement from parents and the alteration of exam-oriented educational methods,children would never grow up in a positive way.
2、文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词 数。 3、词数： 150 4、参考词汇：调查： make a survey Dear editor，
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purposes of getting on the Internet. ___________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表类作文详解【完美版】
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advanced words and consistency of tense?
various but not too complex sentence the predicates agree in peprastotnerannsd? number with its subjuects?
causing people to
(后果1).At the same time,
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How do we protect oursleves from
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上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 完美版 】
图表类的模板套路1
As is shown in the chart, %
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差异原因the reasons for it and the causes 总结summary
key sentences
there are 2 reasons which may be responsible for the difference
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夹叙夹议
日记（绘画课感想）
应用文
建议信（名画展出场所）
应用文
建议信（校报改版）
应用文 推荐信（“读书节”宣传册图片）
议论文
“父母是否以子女为荣”
应用文
建议信（名画展出场所）
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校报征文（对老师分类评价）
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There are two reasons which may be responsible for the difference.First,traditional Chinese parents are not used to expressing how much they are proud of their kids.They tend to hide their love,which hardly helps children develop their selfconfidence.Second,the current educational system places too much emphasis on the value of exam results,thus making children believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud.This bias plays down the significance of talents for art and sports,which will much likely frustrat children,even causing them to look down upon themselves.
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上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
点评和佳作分析
A survey conducted recently indicates that 80% of the parents are proud of their children,and they are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as the pride of their parents.
us to
(方法2).Do remember that
(号召).
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
谋篇布局
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
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列提纲—打草稿
：十句左右的句子 + 连词
谋篇布局
第一段数据描 述：3句以内
第二段原因分 析：主体
词汇升级和句 式多样化
第三段总结： 2句话内
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
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上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
图表类的模板套路1
Hale Waihona Puke As is shown in the chart, %
(现象
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(现象2).Another %
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As we all know,
do much harm to
,even
试卷解读 2
差异原因the reasons for it and the causes 总结summary
key sentences
there are 2 reasons which may be responsible for the difference
上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】 上海市高考英语作文考情分析和图表 类作文 详解【 优质课 】
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图表类—2016 高考作文
假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参与了一项研 究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过 调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看 法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告， 在报告中，你必须：
课程安排
考情分析
4 mins
2016年高考作文分析
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2016年高考作文实操
20 mins
点评、课后作业和预习
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考情分析
上海高考 作文
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应用文 申请信（帮助儿童的扶贫项目）
causing people to
(后果1).At the same time,
(后果2).But to our sadness,
(不良现象)。
How do we protect oursleves from
?I think we
should
(方法1)。In addition,it's very important for
Without the sincere encouragement from parents and the alteration of exam-oriented educational methods,children would never grow up in a positive way.
1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
试卷解读 1
数据差异the difference of the two figures between parents and children
key words and expression
show-indicate显示/survey调查/ pride骄傲/be proud of以。。。为自豪