实用翻译10
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第十章 汉译英常见错误例析
10.1生搬硬套型错误 1)欢迎你来参加英语角活动! 误:Welcome you to join our English corner activities! 正:You are welcome to join our English corner activities! Welcome to join our English corner! 2)我们改革开放的步子要迈得更大一些. 误:Our steps of reform and open policy should be bigger. 正:Take a broader approach to reform and opening up. 3)我们的事业从胜利走向胜利. 误:Our cause has won victories one after another. 正:We have won one victory after another for our cause. A series of victories have been won for our cause.
10.2.3 分词的逻辑主语问题
1)看着窗外,他想起了自己的童年. 误:Looking out the window, thoughts of his childhood came to him. 正:Looking out the window, he thought of his childhood. 2)从山顶上看下去,这座城市就像个漂亮的花园. 误:Seeing from the top of the hill, the city looks like a beautiful garden. 正:seen from the top of the hill, the city looks like a beautiful garden. 3)听到这个消息时,他满眼是泪. 误:Hearing the sad news, his eyes were filled with tears. 正:When he heard the news, his eyes were filled with tears.
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10.2.5不合逻辑的比较 1)你们班的女生比我们班的更活跃. 误:The girls in your class are more active than our class. 正:The girls in your class are more active than those in our class. 2)这里的气候像北京. 误:The climate here is like Beijing. 正:The climate here is like that of Beijing. 3)男孩子的帽子和女孩子的不同. 误:A boy's hat is different from a girl. 正:A boy's hat is different from a girl's.
10.2 逻辑型错误 10.2.1时间的先与后不合乎逻辑 1)对不起,我没有看见你. 误:Sorry I don't see you. 正:Sorry I didn't see you. 2)从图书馆借来的那本书已经找到. 误: The book which was borrowed from the library had been found. 正: The book which had been borrowed from the library was found.
10.2.4动名词的逻辑主语错误
1)在挤公共汽车时,我的钱包丢了. 误:On squeezing on to the bus, my wallet was lost. 正:On squeezing on to the bus, I lost my wallet. 2)大学毕业后,他父亲想让他去日本继续深造. 误:After graduating from college, his father wanted him to pursue his education in Japan. 正:After he graduated from college, his father wanted him to pursue his education in Japan. 3)未接到邀请他就参加了聚会. 误:He attended the party without inviting. 正:He attended the party without being invited.
10.2.2 不定式的逻辑主语问题 1)要做出决定,你应该考虑各种因素. 误:To make a decision, everything must be taken into consideration. 2)这本书要翻译成英语. 误:The book is required to put into English. 3)他挨了批评真是遗憾. 误:It is a pity for him to have criticized.
10.3语法型错误
1)他本来想多给你一点帮助的,只是他太忙了. 误:He wanted to give you more help, but he has been so busy recently. 正:He would have given you more help, but he has been so busy recently. 2)有些人不但不植树,反而砍树. 误:But some people not only don't plant trees but also cut trees. 正:But some people don't plant trees, instead, they cut trees. 3)要完全把一个人的情感隐藏起来几乎是不可能的. 误:Entirely to conceal one's feelings is almost impossible. 正:To entirely conceal one's feelings is almost impossible.
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10.4语义结构型错误
1)我能看出你的心事. 误:I can see your mind. 正:I can read your mind. 2) 从他的话音里,我能听出东西来. 误:I can hear something from the tone of his voice. 正:I can tell something from the tone of his voice. 3)通过不断实践学习英语知识. 误:Study knowledge of English by constant practice. 正:Acquire knowledge of English by constant practice. 4)我们享受公费医疗. 误:We enjoy free medical care. 正:We are entitled to free medical care.
10.1生搬硬套型错误 1)欢迎你来参加英语角活动! 误:Welcome you to join our English corner activities! 正:You are welcome to join our English corner activities! Welcome to join our English corner! 2)我们改革开放的步子要迈得更大一些. 误:Our steps of reform and open policy should be bigger. 正:Take a broader approach to reform and opening up. 3)我们的事业从胜利走向胜利. 误:Our cause has won victories one after another. 正:We have won one victory after another for our cause. A series of victories have been won for our cause.
10.2.3 分词的逻辑主语问题
1)看着窗外,他想起了自己的童年. 误:Looking out the window, thoughts of his childhood came to him. 正:Looking out the window, he thought of his childhood. 2)从山顶上看下去,这座城市就像个漂亮的花园. 误:Seeing from the top of the hill, the city looks like a beautiful garden. 正:seen from the top of the hill, the city looks like a beautiful garden. 3)听到这个消息时,他满眼是泪. 误:Hearing the sad news, his eyes were filled with tears. 正:When he heard the news, his eyes were filled with tears.
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10.2.5不合逻辑的比较 1)你们班的女生比我们班的更活跃. 误:The girls in your class are more active than our class. 正:The girls in your class are more active than those in our class. 2)这里的气候像北京. 误:The climate here is like Beijing. 正:The climate here is like that of Beijing. 3)男孩子的帽子和女孩子的不同. 误:A boy's hat is different from a girl. 正:A boy's hat is different from a girl's.
10.2 逻辑型错误 10.2.1时间的先与后不合乎逻辑 1)对不起,我没有看见你. 误:Sorry I don't see you. 正:Sorry I didn't see you. 2)从图书馆借来的那本书已经找到. 误: The book which was borrowed from the library had been found. 正: The book which had been borrowed from the library was found.
10.2.4动名词的逻辑主语错误
1)在挤公共汽车时,我的钱包丢了. 误:On squeezing on to the bus, my wallet was lost. 正:On squeezing on to the bus, I lost my wallet. 2)大学毕业后,他父亲想让他去日本继续深造. 误:After graduating from college, his father wanted him to pursue his education in Japan. 正:After he graduated from college, his father wanted him to pursue his education in Japan. 3)未接到邀请他就参加了聚会. 误:He attended the party without inviting. 正:He attended the party without being invited.
10.2.2 不定式的逻辑主语问题 1)要做出决定,你应该考虑各种因素. 误:To make a decision, everything must be taken into consideration. 2)这本书要翻译成英语. 误:The book is required to put into English. 3)他挨了批评真是遗憾. 误:It is a pity for him to have criticized.
10.3语法型错误
1)他本来想多给你一点帮助的,只是他太忙了. 误:He wanted to give you more help, but he has been so busy recently. 正:He would have given you more help, but he has been so busy recently. 2)有些人不但不植树,反而砍树. 误:But some people not only don't plant trees but also cut trees. 正:But some people don't plant trees, instead, they cut trees. 3)要完全把一个人的情感隐藏起来几乎是不可能的. 误:Entirely to conceal one's feelings is almost impossible. 正:To entirely conceal one's feelings is almost impossible.
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10.4语义结构型错误
1)我能看出你的心事. 误:I can see your mind. 正:I can read your mind. 2) 从他的话音里,我能听出东西来. 误:I can hear something from the tone of his voice. 正:I can tell something from the tone of his voice. 3)通过不断实践学习英语知识. 误:Study knowledge of English by constant practice. 正:Acquire knowledge of English by constant practice. 4)我们享受公费医疗. 误:We enjoy free medical care. 正:We are entitled to free medical care.