大学英语四级作文辅导Be a Civic-minded Tourist

4. but
• • • • however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas,
5. think (that)
• • • • • • • • • assume deem reckon ague maintain suppose conceive insist consider hold the opion/standpoint that ... be convinced that ... to my knowledge, personally, from my perspective, as far as I am concerned from my point of view from my angle
结尾：
If we can carry out what is mentioned above, there will be no doubt that Chinese tourists would be civic-minded in the near future.
问题+列举：
However, we cannot fail to notice that countless uncivil behaviors exist in the tourist attractions, such as speaking loudly in museums, jumping the queue, hurting wildlife in zoos and defacing of ancient monuments.
• harmful
3. important
• • • • • • • essential significant vital crucial profound indispensable necessary
play an important role in ... be of importance the importance of ... can nver be exaggerated
具体措施1：
On the one hand, the government should institute laws and regulations to put the situation under control. In other words, common misconducts of Chinese tourists are expected to be forbidden and corresponding publishment for violating the law should be stated clearly.
问题+列举：
However, along with this are some uncivil behaviors, which have received fierce criticism. For example, some tourists may smoke, talk loudly, throw trash around, or even scrawl on cultural relics in the scenic spots.
Part 1
S6: 具体措施1扩展句 regulate, punish, violate improve citizens' quality S8: 具体措施2扩展句 moral education
Part 1
现象： In recent years, there has been a sharp increase in the number of Chinese tourists traveling both home and abroad. In recent years, the number of Chinese tourists traveling both home and abroad has been on the rise. In recent years, tourism has experienced a tremendous growth in China.
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第1-2分钟 审题
CET作文写作步骤
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Be a Civic-minded Tourist. You should include in your essay tourists' uncivil behaviors in the scenic spots and the corresponding solutions. You should write at least 120 words but not more than 180 words.
Translate the Sentences
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Part 1 Writing
1 第3-5分钟 草拟提纲 | 2 第6-27分钟 正文写作 | 3 第28-30分钟 检查修改 | 4
具体措施2：
On the other hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of uncivil behaviors.For instance, it is essential to strengthen moral educatioin in schools.
6. very
• • • • • extremely acutely decidedly deeply exceedingly greatly highly uncommonly profoundly unusually
7. people
• individual • folks • characters
beginning
(introduce a topic)
body (supporting details)
end
(conclusion)
Part 1
S1: 现象 S2: 问题 S3: 列举不文明现象 S4: 采取措施主题句 S5: 具体措施1 S6: 具体措施1扩展句 S7: 具体措施2 S8: 具体措施2扩展句 S9: 总结句
positive promising excellent outstanding superior distinguished remarkable incredible
favorable marvelous terrific amazing fabulous gorgeous
2. bad
• • • • • negative discouraging unfavorable adverse dreadful
措施主题句：
Confronted with the problem, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. In view of the seriousness of the phenominon, effective measures should be taken as follBaidu Nhomakorabeaws.
Model Test 1
大学英语四级练习课
CET4写作练习
词汇替换练习
List Synonyms of the Following Words
1. good 2. bad 3. important 4. but 5. think 6. very 7. people
1. good
• beneficial • • • • • •
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Part 1
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S1: 现象 S2: 问题 S3: 列举不文明现象 S4: 采取措施主题句 S5: 具体措施1 S7: 具体措施2 S9: 总结句
increase in/tendency concern/debate/criticism uncivil behaviors take measures government, regulations