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2013年6月英语四级写作分析以及例文(3套看图作文) 第一套

The importance of doing small things

before undertaking something big

对白

子：Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste（处理核废料）

父：If you can empty the dustbin（垃圾筒）here, you can do anything

范文：

We can see from th e illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, point ing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. With out any doubt, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other word, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

第一部分：考试分析

一：形式

1. 有图片，图片要点为：一对父子就一个问题展开讨论；

2，英文提示：a 简要描述图片；b 给出有关于主题“the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”的观点

二．写作应对

1. 简要描述图片：

简要描述，即，描述图中主题，并引出相关的主题即可，使用描述句式如下：

A：简单型

As we can see from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son.

B：复杂型

As is vividly depicted in the picture, two men ，who are a father and his son，are talking about what should be done firstly，the small thing or the big ones. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.

2. 判断写作类型：

题干中有明显的两种观点，即先做小事，或者大事，只不过，出题人要求学生写的是关于先做小事的重要的意义，故可以使用两种观点对立的“观点分型”写作模板带入如下：

第一段：说明现象第二段：观点讨论第三段：观点总结

3. 主题

该主题，可以被分为三个部分，即：

A：the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big

B：doing small things

C: doing something big

以上三个内容在每段中确保出现1-2次，该作文便不跑题。

第二部分：例文写作与模板对比

第一段：描述图片+说明现象

As we can see from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of

the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.

（原有模板）

Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of …… has arouse wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth,

ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.

第二段：观点讨论

Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not，actually, opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that the doing some big is beneficial to students. However, quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doing some big is detrimental to the youngsters, and they think that the merits of students’ doing some small things far outweigh its demerits. To my way of thinking, we should know the the importance that why we must do small things before we undertake something big. If we know the significance, we will choice the right way and do the right things.

（原有模板）

Does anyone maintain/claim the same attitude towards this issue/phenomenon? Definitely not，actually/in fact，opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain/argue/hold/claim that something is beneficial to sth. However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that something is detrimental to sth .The demerits/disadvantages of sth. far outweigh its

merits/advantages.

第三段：观点总结

the problem of doing big things firstly mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if measures should be adopted before the thing get worse. What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of

us ,parents, educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to let young men know the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future

（原有模板）

To my way of thinking\From my perspective, The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it.

Measures should be adopted before things get worse. What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to put an end to this situation. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future

总结：

改作文中，第二段落内容容易较为单薄，故建议同学们将原模板的第三段内容中，我的观点写到第二段的结尾处，已调整三段之间比例。

The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. The son told his father, “Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nucle ar waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before undertaking something big. There is also an old Chinese saying to go with this that a person can’t sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.

I agree on the point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things well before undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well entail the qualities that needed in doing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. For example, when we sweep our room, we need to manage our time and energy reasonably. Accordingly, if we sweep a bigger room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, we should learn how to cooperate and allot assignments as well. And a big advantage is that we can draw useful lessons from the failure of performing well because they didn’t cost a lot.

In another word, though these things seem trivial, they reinforce our manipulative ability and thus our understanding to the world. Therefore, we should not ignore the small things.

On Doing Small Things

图画的内容和构图不难：父亲和男孩子的对话，孩子说“ Dad，I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon. （爸爸，我有点担心清除核武器这个问题）”，父亲则回答“ If you

can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉，你就能坐好任何事情)” ，说话间，手指着垃圾桶。

这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似，当时的图中，也是两人对话，女儿和父亲。父亲问女儿：“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿，小甜心，你在今天在学校过得怎么样？)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答：“Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs. (爹哋，你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”，然后呢，女儿拔腿出门，留下父亲一脸惊愕。

作文的第一段，要进行简单描绘图画内容，这是必须的，也是题目中强制要求的（a brief description of the picture）。描述的时候，只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段，然后把父亲手指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了，非常简单。

作文的第二段，进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题，那就是做大事之前，要先做小事（一屋不扫，何以扫天下）,而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了（express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.）因此，第二段通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题，论述意义”

作文第三段，总结，启发。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义，我们不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。

请看范文：

We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s w ords “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them