初三英语 提高题专题复习书面表达英语作文汇编练习题含答案

初三英语提高题专题复习书面表达英语作文汇编练习题含答案
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无
法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：
1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；
3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4. 你的建议……
参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take m obile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

2．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥
的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方法。

● 清淡饮食；● 合理休息；● 适当运动；● ……
注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名
和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Johnson
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack,
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.
First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. W hat's more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。

在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。

写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。

本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的建议。

第二段也是文章的主体部分。

用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。

结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。

3．（·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作
今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢？
请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。

【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals
disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．
Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．
【解析】
【详解】
写作思路：先仔细审题，这是写好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来，一定要确定好文章的重点，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短语和句式，增加文章的色彩．
本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题，指出环境问题变得越来越严重，然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。

提出问题之后接着提出解决问题的办法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到内容完整，思路清晰，词语运用正确，是一篇很不错的文章。

4．（·重庆一中中考模拟）书面表达。

“开心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我们独自旅行；烦恼的是父母不予支持。

我们，可以独自出游么？”这是本月我校英语“烦恼墙”上最令人关注的内容，并引发了大家的热烈讨论。

同为青少年的你觉得在没有父母的陪伴下出游可行吗？请你按要求写一篇英语作文。

参考要点：
1. 解读“烦恼墙”内容；
2. 陈述你的观点及理由；
3. 提出合理的相关建议。

要求：
1. 词数80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。

Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.
______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is coming, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acco mpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our self-care capacity. But we need to get
ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important self-help knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题议论文。

【详解】
英语作文一般分为三部分：
第一部分：阐明论点。

解读“烦恼墙”内容并陈述自己的观点——青少年应该被允许独自旅行。

第二部分：主体部分。

分条逐一阐明理由并提出合理的相关建议。

第三部分：再次重申论点。

5．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。

同学们，从小到大，会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长，他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学……甚至是路人。

他们或许对你产生了重要影响，进而给你留下深刻印象。

请以“A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。

要求：1. 结构清晰，内容完整，语言流利。

2. 文中不得出现真实的学校，姓名等个人信息。

3. 80词左右。

A person who impressed me a lot
【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.
Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life.
I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运
用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation
of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

7．（·江苏赣榆实验中学初三）初中的三年即将过去，这三年里你一定学会了不少东西。

假如你是Jack，你想给老师写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。

请根据下列提示，完成这封感谢信。

词数100左右。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

1. 学会了如何学习：课前预习；课堂认真听讲，记笔记：课后认真完成作业，及时复习；懂得了读书的重要性，养成了好的阅读习惯，为以后的学习做好准备。

2. 懂得了如何做人：在家里，爱父母和家人，帮父母做力所能及的事：在学校，尊重老师，关爱同学，做文明学生；在社会，遵守交通规则，爱护花草树木，…（适当补充）
3. 以后的打算：……（适当补充）
Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear teachers,
How time flies! Nearly three years has passed. I will graduate from the school. I want to say "Thank you, dear teachers." It is you who have taught me a lot of things.
First，I learn how to learn. I preview before class, listen carefully in class and take notes. I finish homework carefully after class and review in time. I understand the importance of reading and develop good reading habits to prepare for future learning.
Secondly, I know how to be a person. At home, I love parents and family and help parents do what they can. At school, I respect teachers, care for classmates, and try to be civilized students. In society, I obey traffic rules, love flowers and trees. I try to be a civilized teenager.
I am going to study harder in high school. I will meet new challenges and enter my dream university. I will make greater contributions to society in the future.
Yours,
Jack 【解析】
8．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。

你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。

请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。

本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。

句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

9．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。

提示词语：forgive原谅
提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?
Why did you decide to forgive him/her?
How did you feel after forgiving him/her?
I still remember what happened between ...
【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.
I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I
forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

字数80字左右。

本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提
纲。

短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。

字数应在80词左右。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。

两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。

我准时到达那里。

我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。

我打电话问他发生了什么事。

他把音乐会的一切都忘了。

那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。

我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。

迈克也意识到了他的错误。

他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。

他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。

最后我原谅了他。

原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。

【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

10．（·江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

请根据下面内容写一篇短文。

注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；
3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.
But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.
As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。

第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。

第四段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。

4.写下关键词、短语、句型。

5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。

6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。

写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。

运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。

用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。

They also believe that···。

If they take too many classes。

It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

11．（·湖南中考模拟）情景作文
阅读现在已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。

请根据提示的内容，以“Reading Is Very Important”为题，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。

要求内容连贯，并进行合理拓展， 80 词左右。

good points ， get lots of knowledge ，so much fun ， keep happy ，a good way to relax， enjoy reading ， after school, write down ，think ， begin now Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to rea d books.
【答案】Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to read books. And there are so many good points when we do that. First of all, we can get lots of knowledge we didn’t know, e specially when we are reading some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a long-day wo rk, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.
Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

12．（·广东中考模拟）假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。

你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。

请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。

而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

13．（·甘肃中考模拟）近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。

请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。

要点提示：
（1）我国空气污染的现象。

（至少写2点）
（2）空气污染产生的原因。

（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染的措施。

（至少写2点）
要求：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution_____________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。

所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时。

注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。

这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。