旅游宣传手册景点的介绍写作练习(共13张PPT)
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The city of Heyuan consists of five counties. 5. 它大约有324万人口。（主谓宾结构）
It has a population of about 3.24million. 6. 河源市有许多名胜。（there be句型）
There are many places of interest in Heyuan. 7. 万绿湖是其中一个典型。（主系表结构；one of …；typical） 8. 湖水清澈，鱼类繁多。（so… that…）
Writing exercise
根据提示，写一篇介绍中国的短文。词数在100左右。 1. 中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上第三大国家，面积有960万
平方公里，境内河流中长江和黄河是两条最长最重要的河 流。西部有大面积的沙漠。
2. 中国历史悠久，有五十六个民族，十三亿人口，其中汉族 （Han nationality）人口最多。
2. 描写景点状况：it has a population of about…including ..., be divided into ..., be made up of, be shaped like ..., take on a new look ...
3.历史：it has a long history of about…years. The history of …dates back to …
scenery,… is one of China’s major tourist cities. 6. A trip along… will enable you to get to know…
题目要求 假设你是河源市的李华，你市为了吸引国外 游客，拟制作英文版河源旅游宣传手册，并 公开征稿。请根据下面信息，用英文写一篇 100词左右的短文应征。 1. 位于广州的东北方向，离广州约198公里。 2. 由五个县（county）组成，人口约324万。 3. 历史悠久，名胜众多；万绿湖（Wanlu Lake）景点优美；湖水清澈；鱼类繁多。 4. 博物馆中有各种恐龙（dinosaur）蛋化石 （fossil），吸引了来自世界各地的游客。
One possible version Last week we visited the British Museum, which attwk.baidu.comacts
many visitors from all over the world. For convenience, we had made a list of the sites we wanted to see, so that we wouldn’t leave anything important out. We found the museum consisting of nine exhibit rooms, each of which was divided into several parts to display different history treasures. Through the visit, we have learnt a lot. 。
1. 描写地理位置：be located in, lie in the south of ..., cover an area of ... square kilometers, be surrounded by ... In the north of ;to the east of ;on the coast of
3. 中国有很多风景名胜。 4. 中国是一个发展中国家。
知识回顾 Knowledge Review
7. 是……中之一 be one of/among…
8. 各种各样的
a variety of
9. 展出
display/be on show
10. 来自世界各地 from all over the world/
from every Corner of the world
由词扩句雏形现 1. 河源市有着悠久的历史。（主谓宾结构）
The water there is so clean that there is a variety of fish in it. 9. 有很多恐龙化石。(there be 句型)
There are many dinosaur egg fossils. 10. 它们在当地博物馆中展出。（被动语态）
abroad. 3. with …, …is /are attracting more and more tourists. 4. An interesting feature of … is … 5. With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful
Why nit give it a try? Your trip to Heyuan is sure to be enjoyable and worthwhile.
小试牛刀 上周我们去参观了大英博物馆，它吸引了世界各地的游 客。为了方便起见，我们将想要参观的地方列了一张清 单，以便于不会漏掉任何重要的东西，我们发现博物馆 由九个展厅构成，每个展厅分成若干部分，展览不同的 历史珍品。通过这次参观我们学到了很多。
writing
————旅游宣传手册
如何介绍旅游景点
【写作分析】
主题：
第一部分：介绍旅游景点的基本信息，如地理 位置、人文环境等。
第二部分：具体介绍其旅游特色。
时态：现在时第态三为部主分，：尤总其结是陈现述在以完吸成引时读态者，前适去当旅使游用。被动语
态
过渡词： Besides; what’s more; in addition( to );on the one hand; on the other hand ; However; as well as; at the same time; thanks to
核心词汇想周全
1. 有着悠久的历史 have a long history
2. 位于
lie to/in
3. 离……有……远
be … away from…
4. 由……组成
consist of
5. 有……的人口 have a population of …
6. 名胜
places of interest
过度衔接联成篇
Heyuan, with a long history, lies to the northeast of Guangzhou, from which it is about 198 kilometers away. The city of Heyuan, consisting of five counties, has a population of about 3.24 million. There are many places of interest in Heyuan, one example of which is Wanlu Lake, an inviting tourist destination . So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fish in it. In addition， there are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local Museum, attracting visitors from every corner of the world.
location and area landscape and rivers nature and environment language and religion life and culture 学科网
population climate history economy foods
●常用表达:
4.气候:the climate is pleasant, the average temperature is… 5.特色：1. There are many places of interest, such as… 2. You can enjoy…/ which has a high reputation both at home and
They are displayed in the local museum. 11. 它们吸引了来自世界各地的游客。（主谓宾结构）
They attract visitors from every corner of the world.
句式升级造亮点 1. 用“Heyuan + with.. +谓语动词lie+ from which+定语从句”连接1、2、 3 Heyuan, with a long history, lies to the northeast of Guangzhou, from which it is about 198 kilometers away. 2. 用现在分词短语作定语连接4、5 The city of Heyuan, consisting of five counties, has a population of about 3.24 million. 3. 用 one example of which引导定语从句连接6、7 There are many places of interest in Heyuan, one example of which is Wanlu Lake. 4. 用倒装句改写句8 So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fish in it. 5. 用句型“There be + n. +过去分词作定语+现在分词作结果状语”改写 9、10、11 There are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local Museum, attracting visitors from every corner of the world.
Heyuan has a long history. 2. 它位于广州的东北方向。（主谓结构）
It lies to the northeast of Guangzhou. 3. 离广州约198公里远。（主系表结构）
It is about 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. 4. 河源市由五个县组成。（主谓宾结构）
It has a population of about 3.24million. 6. 河源市有许多名胜。（there be句型）
There are many places of interest in Heyuan. 7. 万绿湖是其中一个典型。（主系表结构；one of …；typical） 8. 湖水清澈，鱼类繁多。（so… that…）
Writing exercise
根据提示，写一篇介绍中国的短文。词数在100左右。 1. 中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上第三大国家，面积有960万
平方公里，境内河流中长江和黄河是两条最长最重要的河 流。西部有大面积的沙漠。
2. 中国历史悠久，有五十六个民族，十三亿人口，其中汉族 （Han nationality）人口最多。
2. 描写景点状况：it has a population of about…including ..., be divided into ..., be made up of, be shaped like ..., take on a new look ...
3.历史：it has a long history of about…years. The history of …dates back to …
scenery,… is one of China’s major tourist cities. 6. A trip along… will enable you to get to know…
题目要求 假设你是河源市的李华，你市为了吸引国外 游客，拟制作英文版河源旅游宣传手册，并 公开征稿。请根据下面信息，用英文写一篇 100词左右的短文应征。 1. 位于广州的东北方向，离广州约198公里。 2. 由五个县（county）组成，人口约324万。 3. 历史悠久，名胜众多；万绿湖（Wanlu Lake）景点优美；湖水清澈；鱼类繁多。 4. 博物馆中有各种恐龙（dinosaur）蛋化石 （fossil），吸引了来自世界各地的游客。
One possible version Last week we visited the British Museum, which attwk.baidu.comacts
many visitors from all over the world. For convenience, we had made a list of the sites we wanted to see, so that we wouldn’t leave anything important out. We found the museum consisting of nine exhibit rooms, each of which was divided into several parts to display different history treasures. Through the visit, we have learnt a lot. 。
1. 描写地理位置：be located in, lie in the south of ..., cover an area of ... square kilometers, be surrounded by ... In the north of ;to the east of ;on the coast of
3. 中国有很多风景名胜。 4. 中国是一个发展中国家。
知识回顾 Knowledge Review
7. 是……中之一 be one of/among…
8. 各种各样的
a variety of
9. 展出
display/be on show
10. 来自世界各地 from all over the world/
from every Corner of the world
由词扩句雏形现 1. 河源市有着悠久的历史。（主谓宾结构）
The water there is so clean that there is a variety of fish in it. 9. 有很多恐龙化石。(there be 句型)
There are many dinosaur egg fossils. 10. 它们在当地博物馆中展出。（被动语态）
abroad. 3. with …, …is /are attracting more and more tourists. 4. An interesting feature of … is … 5. With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful
Why nit give it a try? Your trip to Heyuan is sure to be enjoyable and worthwhile.
小试牛刀 上周我们去参观了大英博物馆，它吸引了世界各地的游 客。为了方便起见，我们将想要参观的地方列了一张清 单，以便于不会漏掉任何重要的东西，我们发现博物馆 由九个展厅构成，每个展厅分成若干部分，展览不同的 历史珍品。通过这次参观我们学到了很多。
writing
————旅游宣传手册
如何介绍旅游景点
【写作分析】
主题：
第一部分：介绍旅游景点的基本信息，如地理 位置、人文环境等。
第二部分：具体介绍其旅游特色。
时态：现在时第态三为部主分，：尤总其结是陈现述在以完吸成引时读态者，前适去当旅使游用。被动语
态
过渡词： Besides; what’s more; in addition( to );on the one hand; on the other hand ; However; as well as; at the same time; thanks to
核心词汇想周全
1. 有着悠久的历史 have a long history
2. 位于
lie to/in
3. 离……有……远
be … away from…
4. 由……组成
consist of
5. 有……的人口 have a population of …
6. 名胜
places of interest
过度衔接联成篇
Heyuan, with a long history, lies to the northeast of Guangzhou, from which it is about 198 kilometers away. The city of Heyuan, consisting of five counties, has a population of about 3.24 million. There are many places of interest in Heyuan, one example of which is Wanlu Lake, an inviting tourist destination . So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fish in it. In addition， there are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local Museum, attracting visitors from every corner of the world.
location and area landscape and rivers nature and environment language and religion life and culture 学科网
population climate history economy foods
●常用表达:
4.气候:the climate is pleasant, the average temperature is… 5.特色：1. There are many places of interest, such as… 2. You can enjoy…/ which has a high reputation both at home and
They are displayed in the local museum. 11. 它们吸引了来自世界各地的游客。（主谓宾结构）
They attract visitors from every corner of the world.
句式升级造亮点 1. 用“Heyuan + with.. +谓语动词lie+ from which+定语从句”连接1、2、 3 Heyuan, with a long history, lies to the northeast of Guangzhou, from which it is about 198 kilometers away. 2. 用现在分词短语作定语连接4、5 The city of Heyuan, consisting of five counties, has a population of about 3.24 million. 3. 用 one example of which引导定语从句连接6、7 There are many places of interest in Heyuan, one example of which is Wanlu Lake. 4. 用倒装句改写句8 So clean is the water there that there is a variety of fish in it. 5. 用句型“There be + n. +过去分词作定语+现在分词作结果状语”改写 9、10、11 There are many dinosaur egg fossils displayed in the local Museum, attracting visitors from every corner of the world.
Heyuan has a long history. 2. 它位于广州的东北方向。（主谓结构）
It lies to the northeast of Guangzhou. 3. 离广州约198公里远。（主系表结构）
It is about 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. 4. 河源市由五个县组成。（主谓宾结构）