打包读后续写高考英语作文新题型2
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frightened away. 9.Before it could realize what had happened, Paul had already opened the front door and
instantly pulled Mac into the car. 10.Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack.
III. 片段的积累
1. Every time I made a move to get it, some passing eye detected my purpose, and of course I straightened up and looked indifferent, and pretended that I hadn’t been thinking about the pear at all. This same thing kept happening and happening, and I couldn’t get the pear. I was just getting desperate enough to brave all the shame, and to seize it, when a window behind me was raised, and gentleman spoke out of it, saying: “Step in here, please.”
3. Mac saw his last straw, jumped off his bike and dashed for the side of the car. He slammed the car door wildly as the hungry wolf was almost reaching him. Paul quickly unlocked the door and Mac dived into the car, out of breath. The hungry wolf seemed unwilling to give up on its prey, growling outside the window. The frightened three sat inside trembling with horror with the wolf trying to enter the car. After what seemed a long time, the exhausted wolf walked away, disappearing into the woods.
把…瞄准/对准
12. dash for
冲向
13. rush/dive/jump into
…without pausing
毫不犹豫地冲/跳进去
14. catch up with
赶上
15. pull/ drag sb. into/onto 把某人拉进/上
16. race/chase after
追赶
17. restart/launch another attack 再次发动袭击
blocks down, standing in front of an abandoned white house.
②①①②③KoWWHnimtohhhwwaae ttaswstwdrasieaadsesvtKTetodhiJrm.esn(pheeseoaoasruvas/esniibneddl?tylhidkbaoeyt??hToJuaspenBadrnaWidckaWerdea)re
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之动作表达：打斗篇
我们常说，行动从思想中来。动作描写是刻画人物的重要方法之一。人 物在各种外在因素的作用下和不同性格的驱使下，会产生不同的表情、心 理和动作变化。动作描写常常和人物的表情、心理描写相结合。准确细致 的动作描写有助于更立体地反映人物的心理和性格特点，使得情节进展更 加顺畅自然，人物形象栩栩如生，跃然纸上。本文主要聚焦打斗类的动作 描写。
street kicking
and
biting
Para. 2 Alerted by Julie and other neighbors, the police and the
victim’s mother had arrived on the scene.
① What happened to Kim and the bearded man in the end?
② Who are everyday heroes?
dashed first thought
③ Why are they considered heroes?
对上述问题进行回答，我们就可以写出这样两段结尾：
Para. 1 Once TJ hit the alley, he spotted the man a couple of blocks dow点n,评st：an从di故ng事i情n f节ro上nt看of，a两n a个b续an写do段ne落d已w经hit完e 整ho地us交e.代Its了w这in个do事w件s w的ere bu结st局ed。, d但oo是rs，b从oa内rd容ed和u语p,言an角d度ya看rd，o续ve写r-第gr一ow段n中. HheowwwaassshKoivminsgavtheed pa应ni该ck是ed该g故irl事th最ro紧ug张h，a最w扣ind人o心w.弦Ju的st高th潮en部, 分Wa，re对a这nd个h部is分w进ife行p细ul致led的up. “thS描 递 让etam述满正ya，心能hne不 期量froeu仅 待。,”g容 的而hWt易 读本awr吸 者段ieth引颇仅toel读感仅adc者失用ThJof也望iathg有。sehhr利续te, a于写wtoin烘第todhkf托二去ionef段描afvlte虽述loyrwy然打Wda清a斗arydr楚过ethhm交程eera代，ohneoa了显sug这se受得ed个.害有Wt主o者些at题ar和干ek，e犯瘪a传nh罪，dim do嫌w疑n.人的结局，以及对everyday heroes这个主题进行了呼应，但是如 Pa果ra能. 2再A增le加rte一d些by细J节ul描ie 写an和d 人ot们he对r n于ei该gh事bo件rs的, t评he论p的ol话ice会a更nd符th合e本vi文cti的m’s m报oth道er文h学ad的a特rr点ive，d增on加t其he可sc信en度e.和K可im读d性as。hed into the safety of her mother’s arms. Meanwhile, officers cuffed and arrested Raeshawn Perez, 26. there were a few heroes that day, but Ware insisted that the quick-thinking, dogged 11-year-old deserved most of the credit.
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之动作表达：打斗篇
1.bear down on
逼近
2.let go of
放开；松开
3.crash/bump into
撞到
4.break into a run
拔腿就跑
5.slide/ sneak in
潜入；溜进
6.hit/kick sb in/on
Time and places Plot development
feelings
Interpretation of given information
续写首句解读 (G-N策略） Given
New
Information
Information
Para. 1 Once TJ hit the alley, he spotted the man a couple of
? Possibly with the help of Brad Ware
Interpretation of underlined words
street alley catch her breath walked away get free of first thought Brad Ware kicking and biting dashed panicked
18. wrap sb in one’s arms 紧紧抱住某人
19. pull sb back into
把某人拉回去
20. drag…swiftly into/onto/out of 把…迅速拉进去/上去/出去
II. 句子的积累
1.He dashed along the platform and jumped on the train. 2.It started to rain so we dived into the nearest café. 3.He bent down/over and picked up a book from the floor. 4.He cast a look at the woman. 5.He stormed out of the room and crashed the door shut behind him. 6.She fought him desperately, kicking and biting. 7.She would scream and kick and lie on the floor drumming her heels. 8.He held up his bicycle and threw it at the wolf, in the hope that the wolf would be
Everyday Heroes
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读
when
where
how
A story
who
why
what
Who Where When What Why
TJ Smith; Brad Ware & his wife; Kim; the bearded man
打/踢某人的（身体部位）
7.hit sb with a loud crash 砰地一声砸/击到某人
8.bite sb by his leg
咬住某人的腿
9.leap/jump/hop onto/into/off 跳上/跳进/跳下
10.pound against
反复击打；砰砰地猛击
11. throw/aim sth at
How
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
TJ Smith
neighbors
Brad Ware & his wife
rescue
Kim
the bearded man
a suspect
kidnap
Who Where When What Why
Fra Baidu bibliotekHow
TJ Smith; Brad Ware & his wife; Kim; the bearded man
2. With great care she began the dangerous crossing, sometimes on her hands and knees, hardly daring to look down between the sleepers into the wild flood waters below. If she should slip, she would fall between the sleepers, into the rapidly flowing stream.
On a street in Wichita Falls, Texas.
Last December, on a crisp Saturday afternoon The bearded man kidnapped Kim; TJ Smith tried to rescue her. If he lost her, TJ feared, she might never be found alive.
instantly pulled Mac into the car. 10.Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack.
III. 片段的积累
1. Every time I made a move to get it, some passing eye detected my purpose, and of course I straightened up and looked indifferent, and pretended that I hadn’t been thinking about the pear at all. This same thing kept happening and happening, and I couldn’t get the pear. I was just getting desperate enough to brave all the shame, and to seize it, when a window behind me was raised, and gentleman spoke out of it, saying: “Step in here, please.”
3. Mac saw his last straw, jumped off his bike and dashed for the side of the car. He slammed the car door wildly as the hungry wolf was almost reaching him. Paul quickly unlocked the door and Mac dived into the car, out of breath. The hungry wolf seemed unwilling to give up on its prey, growling outside the window. The frightened three sat inside trembling with horror with the wolf trying to enter the car. After what seemed a long time, the exhausted wolf walked away, disappearing into the woods.
把…瞄准/对准
12. dash for
冲向
13. rush/dive/jump into
…without pausing
毫不犹豫地冲/跳进去
14. catch up with
赶上
15. pull/ drag sb. into/onto 把某人拉进/上
16. race/chase after
追赶
17. restart/launch another attack 再次发动袭击
blocks down, standing in front of an abandoned white house.
②①①②③KoWWHnimtohhhwwaae ttaswstwdrasieaadsesvtKTetodhiJrm.esn(pheeseoaoasruvas/esniibneddl?tylhidkbaoeyt??hToJuaspenBadrnaWidckaWerdea)re
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之动作表达：打斗篇
我们常说，行动从思想中来。动作描写是刻画人物的重要方法之一。人 物在各种外在因素的作用下和不同性格的驱使下，会产生不同的表情、心 理和动作变化。动作描写常常和人物的表情、心理描写相结合。准确细致 的动作描写有助于更立体地反映人物的心理和性格特点，使得情节进展更 加顺畅自然，人物形象栩栩如生，跃然纸上。本文主要聚焦打斗类的动作 描写。
street kicking
and
biting
Para. 2 Alerted by Julie and other neighbors, the police and the
victim’s mother had arrived on the scene.
① What happened to Kim and the bearded man in the end?
② Who are everyday heroes?
dashed first thought
③ Why are they considered heroes?
对上述问题进行回答，我们就可以写出这样两段结尾：
Para. 1 Once TJ hit the alley, he spotted the man a couple of blocks dow点n,评st：an从di故ng事i情n f节ro上nt看of，a两n a个b续an写do段ne落d已w经hit完e 整ho地us交e.代Its了w这in个do事w件s w的ere bu结st局ed。, d但oo是rs，b从oa内rd容ed和u语p,言an角d度ya看rd，o续ve写r-第gr一ow段n中. HheowwwaassshKoivminsgavtheed pa应ni该ck是ed该g故irl事th最ro紧ug张h，a最w扣ind人o心w.弦Ju的st高th潮en部, 分Wa，re对a这nd个h部is分w进ife行p细ul致led的up. “thS描 递 让etam述满正ya，心能hne不 期量froeu仅 待。,”g容 的而hWt易 读本awr吸 者段ieth引颇仅toel读感仅adc者失用ThJof也望iathg有。sehhr利续te, a于写wtoin烘第todhkf托二去ionef段描afvlte虽述loyrwy然打Wda清a斗arydr楚过ethhm交程eera代，ohneoa了显sug这se受得ed个.害有Wt主o者些at题ar和干ek，e犯瘪a传nh罪，dim do嫌w疑n.人的结局，以及对everyday heroes这个主题进行了呼应，但是如 Pa果ra能. 2再A增le加rte一d些by细J节ul描ie 写an和d 人ot们he对r n于ei该gh事bo件rs的, t评he论p的ol话ice会a更nd符th合e本vi文cti的m’s m报oth道er文h学ad的a特rr点ive，d增on加t其he可sc信en度e.和K可im读d性as。hed into the safety of her mother’s arms. Meanwhile, officers cuffed and arrested Raeshawn Perez, 26. there were a few heroes that day, but Ware insisted that the quick-thinking, dogged 11-year-old deserved most of the credit.
The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能之动作表达：打斗篇
1.bear down on
逼近
2.let go of
放开；松开
3.crash/bump into
撞到
4.break into a run
拔腿就跑
5.slide/ sneak in
潜入；溜进
6.hit/kick sb in/on
Time and places Plot development
feelings
Interpretation of given information
续写首句解读 (G-N策略） Given
New
Information
Information
Para. 1 Once TJ hit the alley, he spotted the man a couple of
? Possibly with the help of Brad Ware
Interpretation of underlined words
street alley catch her breath walked away get free of first thought Brad Ware kicking and biting dashed panicked
18. wrap sb in one’s arms 紧紧抱住某人
19. pull sb back into
把某人拉回去
20. drag…swiftly into/onto/out of 把…迅速拉进去/上去/出去
II. 句子的积累
1.He dashed along the platform and jumped on the train. 2.It started to rain so we dived into the nearest café. 3.He bent down/over and picked up a book from the floor. 4.He cast a look at the woman. 5.He stormed out of the room and crashed the door shut behind him. 6.She fought him desperately, kicking and biting. 7.She would scream and kick and lie on the floor drumming her heels. 8.He held up his bicycle and threw it at the wolf, in the hope that the wolf would be
Everyday Heroes
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读
when
where
how
A story
who
why
what
Who Where When What Why
TJ Smith; Brad Ware & his wife; Kim; the bearded man
打/踢某人的（身体部位）
7.hit sb with a loud crash 砰地一声砸/击到某人
8.bite sb by his leg
咬住某人的腿
9.leap/jump/hop onto/into/off 跳上/跳进/跳下
10.pound against
反复击打；砰砰地猛击
11. throw/aim sth at
How
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
TJ Smith
neighbors
Brad Ware & his wife
rescue
Kim
the bearded man
a suspect
kidnap
Who Where When What Why
Fra Baidu bibliotekHow
TJ Smith; Brad Ware & his wife; Kim; the bearded man
2. With great care she began the dangerous crossing, sometimes on her hands and knees, hardly daring to look down between the sleepers into the wild flood waters below. If she should slip, she would fall between the sleepers, into the rapidly flowing stream.
On a street in Wichita Falls, Texas.
Last December, on a crisp Saturday afternoon The bearded man kidnapped Kim; TJ Smith tried to rescue her. If he lost her, TJ feared, she might never be found alive.