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The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 犯罪

A 惩罚

B 人们不愿意失去驾照（risk losing the license），还有罚款（face heavy fines）

C 震慑犯罪（deter reckless driving）

Stiff punishment is an effective method to deter reckless driving in some cases. (A+C)

Punitive measures can reduce crime because driving offenders may not risk losing the license and be fearful of facing heavy fines. (B) Road offences will be in decline. (c)

This intervention is particularly effective to those drivers who used to think they could bear consequences. (特定化)

A 完善交通设施

B 标识清晰路面平坦

C 道路更安全(reduce road fatalities)

Transport infrastructures, road facilities, clear signs, improve road conditions,

同学例子However, punishment is not the only method to reduce the

road fatalities, perfect transport infrastructures are also significant. Road conditions can be improved once clear signs are available on road facilities. In that case, drivers can have a better idea of the road condition, which enables them to make correct decisions while driving cars. Therefore, the road safety will be enhanced.

However, punishment is not the only method to reduce road fatalities, and well-developed transport infrastructures are also significant.

(A+C)

Road conditions can be improved and clear signs can be erected （竖起来）on the road. (p)

In that case, drivers can have a better idea of the road conditions, which enables them to drive safely. (p)

Therefore, the road safety will be enhanced. (p)

A 进行公益宣传(hold awareness campaigns)

B 提高大众安全意识raise awareness，恪守规则 (obey rules)

C 道路更安全

解释意识：知道自己的行为后果（dire consequences）

Holding awareness campaigns also plays an important role in road safety.(A+C)

These campaigns can raise awareness of safety in the general public and encourage people to obey rules because they learn more about the dire 可怕的consequences of reckless driving. 危险驾驶(p)

roads are therefore safer for users. (p)

One way to prevent people from commit street crime is to enforce stiff punishments because citizens are not willing at risk of losing their driving license and facing heavy fines. By doing that, it is easier to deter reckless driving in order to improve the street safety.

Stricter punishment is not the only way to ensure street security, the authorities should make an effort to well developed the public infrastructures, like maintaining the clear traffic light and smooth roads.

1. International exchange programmes for teenage school students have more advantages than disadvantages. To what extent do you agree?

A 出国留学（pursue a degree）

B 进入好的大学（a highly prestigious(有声誉的) university）

C 提高就业前景（increase the chances of securing a decent position）A 出国留学 B 和不同国籍的人（people of various nationalities）交往，交新的朋友（form friendships with） C 建立好的关系圈（professional networks）

A 外国学习 R 没有家长的陪伴（company of parents）C 很难适应新的环境（adapt to a new environment），文化冲击（suffer from a cultural shock）

A+C 背景化 B 解释 C +拓展

Inernational exchange programmes are likely to increase these participants' chances of securing a decent position in a company in the future. (A+C)

A large proportion of these programmes are normally developed and coordinated by prestigious universities. (背景化)

This means that these students can receive a good education and gain access to world-class顶级的 facilities from an early age. (解释)