高考英语作文 建议信

学案(二)建议信

[题型技法] (学一学)

建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。

[经典考题] (悟一悟)

[典例](2017·北京高考)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．你建议的线路；

2．你的理由；

3．你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

Yours，

Li Hua

[满分范文]

Dear Jim，

①What a pleasant surprise to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit! ②As for the two travel routes you’re considering, they’re equally good. ③Anyhow, I suggest the tour to Mount Tai. ④Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it. ⑤Having a trip there will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture. ⑥Of course, mountain climbing takes strength and courage.

⑦Hope that my advice will be of some help to you and that you’ll have a good time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua [阅卷评点]

①开门见山，直奔主题，使用了感叹句和宾语从句，用现在进行时表示将来的动作，表达地道。

②介词短语“as for”和省略关系词的定语从句是高级结构。

④现在分词作状语，with复合结构，“be attached to”以及高级词汇attraction的使用使本句充满文采。

⑥这里说爬山需要体力和勇气，发挥自然，想象合理。

⑦结尾使用祝愿句，使用了“be of＋抽象名词”句式结构，并用and连接两个宾语从句，增加了文章的得分点。

[增分佳句] (背一背)

1．开头部分常用语：

(1)You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.

关于……你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。

(2)I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing ... at the moment.

得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。

(3)I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how ...

非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何……你向我征求意见。

2．表达建议常用语：

(1)Here are some tips/advice/suggestions.

这里有一些建议。

(2)You may/might as well do ...

你不妨做……

(3)I would like to suggest that ...

我想建议……

3．结尾部分常用语：

(1)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

(2)I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.

我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/有帮助。

(3)In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

[热点押题] (练一练)

假定你是李海，你的堂兄李华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：

1．建议他回国；

2．你的理由：(1)学有所用，就业容易；(2)照顾父母。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯，内容应完整；

3．开头语与落款已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua，

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

Yours，

Li Hai 参考范文：

Dear Li Hua，

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hai