上海中考真题范文初中英语作文.doc
上海中考英语备考训练：写作
一，一等文要求，
1，结构三段式：
第一段：简单明了，开门见山。
如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQ is extremely strong.观点明确，一句足矣。
第二段：分析为什么他强壮。
A. 每天吃 10 顿饭， He has ten meals everyday!详举吃的是什么。
B. 每天运动 2 小时， He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建
议等。如， How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
2，内容和要点：
话题 topic 必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、
要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示
内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题 , 跟主旨无关的话不要写。
3，逻辑合理：
递进： first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in
addition, what's more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。
转折： but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。总结： in a word, all in all, in conclusion。
4，语法和亮点：
单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，
编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。
二，三段十句话：
1，三段布局：
高考作文题型多样 , 有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料 , 按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。
无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都
可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。
记叙文： A. 背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。 B. 故事发展经过结果。 C. 结局和感受。
议论文： A. 发表观点。 B. 论据理由。 C. 结论呼应论点。
图片文： A. 描述图片内容，提炼观点。 B. 论据理由。 C. 结论呼应论点。
日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。
2，十句成篇：
Passage 1,
1） Topic话题
2） Thesis论点
Passage 2,
3）4）Transition Argument1
过渡句
论据 1
5） Detail 1论据1的支持句
6） Argument2 论据 2
7） Detail 2论据2的支持句
8） Argument3 论据 3
9） Detail 3论据3的支持句
Passage 3
10）Conclusion总结
以上为议论文的三段十句结构。根据具体情况可调整加减。其它文体在此基础上略作修改即可。
三，具体各类题型写法：
1，描述图片类：
P1 图片描述 , 图片主旨。 P2 过渡句加论据和支持句。视字数调整论据和支持句
个数。 P3 总结。
2，夹叙夹议文：
写法 1，P1 话题记叙或描述。 P2 观点或感想，写 2 个论据和 2 个支持句。
P3 总结。
写法 2，P1 话题和观点。 P2 事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。 P3 总结说明事件，再次证明话题和论点。
写法 3，P1 回忆记述事件。 P2 感受、观点。 P3 总结。
3，两主旨议论文：
有时需要写两个主旨，如第一个为什么喜欢读书，另一个喜欢读什么书。或第一个水为什么珍贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大部分写：
P1话题、一个论据和支持句。P2 过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。P3总结4，建议型议论文：
写法 1，倾向建议：提出一个问题，简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建议： P1 写信目的，一个问题。 P2 针对这个问题若干建议。 P3 总结希望。
写法 2，问题建议并重：提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议： P1 写信目
的。 P2 提两个问题并说明。 P3 针对两问题给两建议。
写法 3，倾向于问题：提出一个问题，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个
建议。 P1 写信目的。 P2 提出一个问题，原因及危害等。 P3 建议、总结。
5，说明文和纯事实新闻报导：
同纯记叙文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。
四，写作四步骤：
1，审题：主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。
2，框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。
3，成文：一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。
4，检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主
谓一致。变换句式：不用过于简单的结构。
总之：认真审题 , 提炼要点 ; 紧扣主题 , 扩词成句 ; 表述准确 , 连句成文 ; 通篇检查 , 确保无误。
五，英文文章开头有两种可以选择：
1，每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。标题和文章间不用空行。
2，每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。标题和文章间不用空行。两种都可以，但是空格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比较多。上海中考英语写作训练：真题范文 2018 VI. Writing(
作文 )( 共 20 分 ) Write at least 60 words on the topic"
My progress( 以“进步了”为题 , 写一信不少于 60 个词的短文 , 标点符号不占格 ) 你在生活或导习中一定取得过不少进步 , 比如生活枝能的获得、 学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面 , 结合自身经历 , 谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。（注意 : 短文中不得出现任何人名、 校名及其它相关信息 , 否则不予评分。) The following is for reference only( 以下表达仅供参考 ) used to do/be try my best to do make progress in( doing)
My Progress
I used to be poor in English, especially in speaking English as I was too shy to open my mouth.
Things have been changed since I had a new English teacher who was very kind and told me the correct way to learn English. With his
encouragement, I gained confidence and began to speak a little. In the meantime, I spent more time in English learning and try my best to improve my English. I listened to English broadcasting and imitated the pronunciation. I also went to English Corner to practice my spoken English with foreigners every Sunday. Step by step, I have made substantial
progress in learning English. Not only can I read English novels now, but also I can speak English fluently.
As a proverb says, “Nothing is difficult if y ou put your heart in it. ” I ’m proud of my progress.
2017 VII. Writing （作文）（共 20 分） Write at least 60 words on the topic “There ’s always hope ”（以“常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短
文，标点符号不占格）面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候 来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，
总能让人常怀希望。 请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解 （可结合自身或他人的经历） 。
（以下表达仅供参考）
a hand never lose hope
There ’s Always Hope
Difficulties and failures are unavoidable in our lives, However, I believe there ’s always hope as long as you don ’t give u p.
I used to be poor in English. The grammar, the vocabulary, the
pronunciation and writing were continuously torturing me. I almost lost my heart and thought about giving up. Luckily, I met a good teacher who was so kind that he spent hours helping me to correct my mistakes and
teaching me excellent methods. He always gave me generous praise for any minor progress of mine. With his encouragement, I gained confidence and
tried my best to overcome all the difficulties. Day by day, I have made
substantial progress. Not only can I read English novels now, but also
The following is for reference only get out of difficulty give
I can speak English fluently.
As an old saying goes, matter how difficult things
“Where there is a will ,there is a way.”seem to be, let ’s cherish hope and never give
No
up.
2016 Writing （作文） Write at least 60 words on the topic “I ’m ready ”（以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬．为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准备？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的．（ independent be good responsible take part in hardworking it helps me to I ’m Ready
When I was young, my mother usually read books for me as soon as
she had time. I was attracted by the fascinating world of stories so I made a determination to become a writer.
To achieve the dream, I have been doing my best all the time. First
of all, I pay great attention to my Composition classes. Furthermore, I join
school writing group and take part in writing contest, which makes me
practice a lot in writing. Last but not the least, I keep connection
with a famous writer who helps me to improve my writing ability
substantially.All in all, through hard working I am good at writing now.
How happy I will be when my books that will enrich children’s life are published someday! I hope my dream will come true . I’m ready.
I'm ready
I always say to myself: "I'm ready!" before a competition or a speech, though it seems that I will never be ready for them absolutely.
" I am ready!" ,which makes me so confident that I can pay all of my
attention to what I do efficiently.Of course, as a saying says: Practice makes perfect. Essential preparation is necessary. We should make every
effort to prepare for what we do .
Say to ourselves:‘I'm ready’ ，and it will help us play our best
card ！
2015 Writing ( 作文 ) Write at least 60 words on the topic “I want to invent _____ ”
( 以“我想要发明 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格 ) （注意： 1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2 、短文中不得出现任何人名、
校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only. ( 以下表达仅供参考 )It can be used to It will be
exciting/necessary/helpful to
I Want to Invent a Family Robot Doctor
I want to invent a family robot doctor because it is very helpful to
us.
First of all, a family robot can cure illnesses for people at home
immediately after you feel sick or get hurt, which is very convenient and
efficient, especially in emergency situations. What ’s more, as we all know, nowadays hospitals are always occupied by patients who are anxious to be taken care as soon as possible, so family robot doctors can reduce
the pressure of hospital and alleviate the patients ’ anxiety. Last but not the least, with the help of a robot doctor, people can get duly advice for healthy diet and live a better life. In a word, a family robot doctor is substantially useful for our society.
In order to achieve my dream of inventing a family robot doctor, I
will do my best and learn hard.
I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot
I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far as I ’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:
First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick
or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency
situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.
In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our
society.
I want to invent a time machine
As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of humanbeing from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That ’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice.
The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of
best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for
its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the
ancient city, I can not only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well.
Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is
both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to
the day when my time machine comes out..
2014. Writing ( 作文 ) Write at least 60 words about t he topic “ This time next year “ ( 以“明年此时”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格 )
你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎
样的期待？你能为此做些什么？） The following sentence patterns are for reference only. ( 以下句型仅供参考 )I hope to /I hope that... Perhaps I will...
It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to ...
This Time Next Year
It is exciting to imagine what I will be this time next year.
Life is changeable and I will be different.
First, I’ll be a senior student next year. I really hope I can
achieve my dream and attend my favorite high school. Furthermore, I will
get manynew friends with whomI will spend my precious moments. Perhaps
I can take part in a summercamp abroad as my English will be good enough to communicate with foreigners. Of course, to realize the wishes,
hardworking is still necessary for me. Finally, it is high time that
I should help my mother with more housework.
Anyway, I will be better, kinder and more diligent this time next
year. Let me look forward to it.
This time next year
It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.
At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will
make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps
I will be taking part in a summercampabroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care
of myself when I am alone.
Life will be totally different,but I'm really looking forward to it.
This time next year
Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future,
which is full of challenge as well as hope.
Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying
in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to
concentrate in class and take notes carefully.Then, I will benefit from reading English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in
improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English
endlessly.
Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge
is coming, the hope is also around the corner.
2013 Writing( 作文 ) Write at least 60 words about the topic protect myself ”． ( “如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于“How to 60 个词
的短文，标
点符号不占格。 )
提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自
我保护 ( 可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何
预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等) 。Phrases for reference(以下短语仅供参考 ) ：Ask for help calm down in danger prevent...From
How to Protect Myself
Life is precious. Protecting myself is the most important thing to
do when I am in danger.
Then if an earthquake hits my city, what can I do to protect myself?
First of all, I must calm down as panic is of no help. Second, I should
try to run out instead of hiding in a building. Taking lift is prohibited during an earthquake and what I can only do is walking downstairs. In the
meantime, I should be aware of the falling objects to avoid being hit.
Finally, if I still have difficulties in escaping I can cry out and ask
others for help.
In conclusion, when a disaster comes I should calm myself down and
manage to survive.
How to protect myself
As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from
dangerous situations.
First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is
of no help. Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most
effective way to save myself. As well as that ,it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators.
In conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I
will be able to protect myself from fires.
How to protect myself
Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first
word that came to my mind was earthquake.
When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here
and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the
fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldn ’t take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead.
Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt,
and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to
protect myself in an earthquake.
2012 Writing ( 作文 ): Write a letter in at least 60 words according to
the given situation ( 根据所给情景写一封不少于60 词的信 ) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. ( 假如你是 Joe, 你的好朋友 Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。)
May 1, 2018
Dear Betty,
Regret knowing that you are especially anxious about the coming exam.
I fully understand you as I was once in the same situation. I would like
to give you some advice.
First, please breathe deeply when you feel worried, which can help
you calm down. Second, try to spare some time to take part in recreational activities such as walking, running or chatting with friends. This can
alleviate the pressure and refill you with enough energy. Third, consult
your teacher about your problems and try to prepare the exam efficiently.
In a word, anxiety is of no help, let us focus on the process instead of
the result.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Joe
Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried.
Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all,keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you
to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you.
As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward. ” I am sure you
will get through this situation.
2011 Writing (
作文 ) Write at least 60 words about the topic “I ’m a member of “
( 以“我是的一员”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”提
示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。
Use the following points as a reference , Are you glad to be a member
of ？
What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member?
I ’m a Member of a Reading Club
I am glad to be a memberof a reading club because reading is my hobby and taking part in the club’s activities gives me gr eat pleasure.
In the club, the membersread together and share opinions about books every weekend. Sometimes we go to mountains, rivers or parks to have
outdoor reading meeting, which brings us relaxations and exercises. We
also invite famous writers to make speeches about their works, from whom we learn how to write.
Being a memberof the club, I feel very happy. After I joined the club,
not only have I read many excellent books, but also I have madea few good friends who have the same interests with me.
As an old saying goes.”Reading makes people more intelligent.”The reading club enriches my life and benefit me a lot.
I am a member of reading club
When I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now I'm
a member of a reading club.
I'm very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with
each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never
get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion,
reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
To be such a member makes my life more and more colorful.
2010 Writing ( 作文 ) : Write at least 60 words about the topic ' I ’m proud of myself. ’ ( 以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格 ) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则
不予评分）
Use the following points is a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an example / examples.)
Why are you proud of yourself?
I ’m proud of myself
I used to be quiet girl and speak a little in my class. I want to change my character and become a bit outgoing.
How can I begin? I got an idea of setting up a reading club for my
school . On the one hand, I can speak more and be active through the work, on the other hand, I can do something benefitting my classmates.
As an old saying goes, ” Action is more important than idea. ” First, I summonedsome classmates who take up reading as hobby like me together. Second, I ask my teacher for help and prepared a schedule for the club.
Third, we had a trial reading meeting to see how we should go on . Step
by step, a reading club was set up in my school, where we can read together and get new friend. During the experience, my character has been changed a lot. I overcame my shyness and became brave to speak.
I am proud of myself because not only can I speak in public now, but
also I set up a reading club for my school.
2009 IX. Writing ( 作文 ) :Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school ”. ( 以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文 ) Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考 ) What do you want to do for your school? Why do you want to do
it? How are you going to do it?
I Want to Do Something for My School
I love my school. I love my teachers and classmates. I want to
set up a reading club for my school.
I like reading, so do many students in my school. If we have a reading club,
we can read together and share ideas about books. We can also have reading activities such as reading meeting or speech contest which can
enrich our school life.
Then, how am I going to begin? First , I will summon some classmates
with the same interest and ask my teacher for help. Second, I will make
a schedule and list the activitieswhich we mayhave for discussion. Third, we can try holding a reading meeting in the clu
b and get some experience
from it. Anyway, through hardworking, the reading club will be set up step by step.
I will be proud of myself for my contribution to the school.
2008 X. Writing (作文): Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s) ” . ( 以“爸爸 / 妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 )
A story about my parent
My mother is a keyboard operator. She is very kind and diligent. She gets up early to cook for the family every morning and often works late
at night.
One Sunday, my mother took me and one of my friends to Disneyland.
Tired and hungry, we were looking for a restaurant after having some entertainments at noon. While we children were resting in our seats, my
mother stood in a long line . Finally we got food and ate eagerly but my
mother had nothing to eat because the limitation of quantities only
allowed her to buy two meals. With sweats running down her face, she
smiled and said: “I ’m not hungry. ”
I was deeply moved by her action. Mother always takes care of me like this. Her selfless love always lights up my way like a beacon.
2007 X. Writing ( 作文 ) ： Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do ”. ( 以“我不喜欢”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 )
Use the following points as a are the things that you hate to do?
What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.)
Things I Hate to Do
Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still
things that I hate to do. For example, I hate to eat fish, which my mother says is good to health. I hate to get up early. I hate to have classes
at weekend.
The thing I hate doing most is taking classes at weekend. First of
all, I have already five days a week at school, I don’t know why I can’t have a rest and relax myself at weekends. What ’s more, my parents must pay a large amount of money for the classes. How fun it is if they use
the money for taking me travelling! Finally, taking classes at weekend
makes me tired so that I often sleep in classes on Monday.
I hope my parents change their idea and give me more free time.
2006 Ⅺ. Writi ng ( 写话 ): Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream ”. ( 以“我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 )（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）
．．．．．．．．
My dream is to be / to do / to go , I enjoy / like / prefer
To make my dream come true, I, If my dream comes true,
I Have a Dream
When I was very young, my mother always read books for me. I used to
be deeply attached by the astonishing stories. At that time, I had a dream.
I want to be a writer for children.
To make my dream come true, I have been keeping writing diary and
reading a large quantities of books, which makes memaster the basic skills
of writing. In the meantime, I join a writing club where I can share my
works with others and exchange opinions about writing. The last but not
the least, I keep connection with a famous writer, who often gives his
advice for me. Through my hardworking, my writing ability has been
improved substantially.
If my dream comes true, I will pay more attention to children’s life in order to write their favorite books. I am looking forward to that day.
2005 Writing (写话): Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Growing pains and gains ”. The pictures below are for your reference
only.
( 以“成长的烦恼与欢乐” 为题写—篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Growing pains and gains
Everyone’s life has ups and downs. We all h ave pains and gains in growing
2004 Writing ( 写话): ( 共 10 分 ) Write at least 60 words on the topic
60 个，标点
“Leaving School ” ( 以“毕业时分”为题写话。词数不少于符号
不占格 ):
Suggested points: old school life, teacher(s) and schoolmate(s),
future plan
Leaving School
In a few days, I will graduate from my junior middle school where I
have studies for three years. At this moment, I am filled with all sorts
of feelings with happiness, anxiety and envision all together.
I am happy for my graduation and look forward to my senior high school life while I am reluctant to apart from my old teachers and schoolmates.
I am overwhelmed with longing for those innocent days which I spent with my friends in the past years. I will never forget my English teacher. It
is him who gave me encouragement that mademe gain confidence in learning English. It is him who always spared hours to help mecorrect my mistakes.
In the future, I will work harder and try my best to have better performance. I will get new friends and cherish friendship.Anyway, being kinder, better and more diligent is my purpose.