英语作文批改常见错误归纳

• 6.句义严重反复，缺乏变化
• Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesn't affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesn't affect friendship. …
• 5.论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考
• A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides...
大学英语四级作文批改常见错误归纳
• 1. 最常见错误：从句连接词缺失，最主要的是 There be…句型：
• There is a saying goes ... • [应为There is a saying which goes ...]
• There are many people think that... • [应为There are many people who think that... • 或者直接说Many people think that...]
• 其他：语义重复
• In my opinion, I agree with the view that... • agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改为the view that... is right] • share many common interests • common与share属同义反复， • 改为: have many common interests或share many interests
• 1.) There are many studentsΒιβλιοθήκη Baiduwho always complain that… • [ many students always complain that...]
• 2.) It's the major thing affects people's expression. • [少了一个that] • 3.) When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. • [少了一个who]
• 7. 连词错误
• It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. • if一词显然应该是that，不过更通顺的说 法应该是: • It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.
• 2. no matter / whether错误:
• Speaking is important for no matter good or poor in English. • 改为: • Speaking is important, whether for the students good or poor in English. • "no matter"后面必须接一个小句（主语、谓语 完整）
• 3. that/whether重复:
• People are not sure that whether... • [that一词多余]
• 4. lack / lacking
• 似乎受汉语语感的影响，多数英语学生似乎 认为lack是形容词，所以时常说is lack of...
• 4. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但 还是经常出错： • If people become interested in English, both of them won't care about the way or the wrong words... • 改为: • neither of them care about ...
8.不会使用照应语
• We won't ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. • people和other people显然应该是同指 关系，后面的other people应改为them 才对
More Ex.
• Tom is a recent newcomer to our class. • The true fact is, I never like him. • I first began to feel sick when we went into the classroom. • At one time total extinction threatened the panda. • He was frightened with fear by the mysterious sound behind. • It was the most interesting book I had ever read before in my life.
for us advice • We asked Mr. Wilson to give because of the fact that he is such a wise man.
After studying in the afternoon • I studied history history in the afternoon. Then in andevening English Iin the evening, the studied English. After that, I treated myself to a movie.