学生作文易犯错误
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5．断句方面
1) TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live withoutit.
2)We must protect our environment. Since the earth is the only place human beings can livein.
2)People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often provesuseless.
3)Television providing us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy lifethoroughly.
4)One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resourceseconomically.
5)People now pay much attention tonutrition, so they chose to eat meat and drinkmilk.
5)Smoking is harmful to health. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman ispregnant.
3)There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example widening the streets, building subways and soon.
4)By comparison, nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as it is clean andcheap.
3)When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates newproblems.
4)One is watching TVandhe will always see one or two advertisements betweenprograms.
学生作文易犯错误分析
学生在写作中会出各种各样的错误，现将以往试卷及作文练习中学生常犯的错误归纳为以下九个方面，请予以改正，然后参阅批注，定能使你的写作水平有很大的提高。——夏振邦
1．指代方面
1) Sometimes teacherswill inform students of the heavy burden they have tobear.
3)But it may occur some newproblems.
4)Opportunities are only belonged to those who workhard.
B.
1)The pace of our modern life isgettingmore faster andfaster.
6．连词方面
1)One should improve his English, one should overcome difficulties instudies.
2)The city is seriously polluted, people have no fresh air to breathenow.
7)TVcommercialshave a profound influence on our every daylife.
9．语法方面
A.
1)Narrow streets easily cause to happen many trafficaccidents.
2)A great change has been taken place sincethen.
4．平行方面
1)While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can beincreased.
2)People not only want to eat enough food, but also want to eatbetter.
5)Apart from ability, a person who is most likely to be employed in a big company should have three good personality traits. A good sense of humor, sensitivity to others’needs and skill in socialrelations.
2)Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our dailylife.
3)First we should use our natural resources in an economicway.
4)We must make continualefforts.
4)The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if onecannotspeakEnglish.
5)In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL havedecreased.
2)Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds ofpower.
3)Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it isnow.
C.
1)Green trees can protect our air frompolluting.
6)The area thrives on competition since the same kind of shops are all grouped together. An exampleof thisbeing the three big department stores, which are within a mile of eachother.
2．修饰方面
1)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to thecountryside.
2)Without television, people can’t get information which comes from other parts of the worldimmediately.
6)In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly20%.
8．误用问题
1)With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds ofenergy.
8)Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our citiesbeautiful.
2)Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is inseason.
3)The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the pastdecade.
6)There are so many countriesusingEnglish that it had been regarded as an internationallanguage.
7)Studyhardnow so thatwecan cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-firstcentury.
3)At the age of six, my father began to give me Englishlessons.
4)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatlyimproved.
3)The price of milk isn’t higher thangrain.
4)The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and humanbeings.
5)But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever itarises.
6)Some college graduates couldn’t find a better job, so they decided to continue their highereducation.
7．搭配方面
1)However the speed of a car is much faster than that of abicycle.
5)Womennowhave risen highly in socialstatus.
6)There are many reasons for the changes in people’s diet. First,peຫໍສະໝຸດ Baiduple can now afford expensive but nutritiousfood.
5)Toimproveone’s writing skill,regularpractice isessential.
3．一致方面
1)Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of theday.
2)In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not affordit.
3)We students should study / learn as much as knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for thefuture.
6)Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train ourcharacter.
7)BeforeIselected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long itlasted.
1) TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live withoutit.
2)We must protect our environment. Since the earth is the only place human beings can livein.
2)People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often provesuseless.
3)Television providing us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy lifethoroughly.
4)One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resourceseconomically.
5)People now pay much attention tonutrition, so they chose to eat meat and drinkmilk.
5)Smoking is harmful to health. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman ispregnant.
3)There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example widening the streets, building subways and soon.
4)By comparison, nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as it is clean andcheap.
3)When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates newproblems.
4)One is watching TVandhe will always see one or two advertisements betweenprograms.
学生作文易犯错误分析
学生在写作中会出各种各样的错误，现将以往试卷及作文练习中学生常犯的错误归纳为以下九个方面，请予以改正，然后参阅批注，定能使你的写作水平有很大的提高。——夏振邦
1．指代方面
1) Sometimes teacherswill inform students of the heavy burden they have tobear.
3)But it may occur some newproblems.
4)Opportunities are only belonged to those who workhard.
B.
1)The pace of our modern life isgettingmore faster andfaster.
6．连词方面
1)One should improve his English, one should overcome difficulties instudies.
2)The city is seriously polluted, people have no fresh air to breathenow.
7)TVcommercialshave a profound influence on our every daylife.
9．语法方面
A.
1)Narrow streets easily cause to happen many trafficaccidents.
2)A great change has been taken place sincethen.
4．平行方面
1)While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can beincreased.
2)People not only want to eat enough food, but also want to eatbetter.
5)Apart from ability, a person who is most likely to be employed in a big company should have three good personality traits. A good sense of humor, sensitivity to others’needs and skill in socialrelations.
2)Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our dailylife.
3)First we should use our natural resources in an economicway.
4)We must make continualefforts.
4)The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if onecannotspeakEnglish.
5)In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL havedecreased.
2)Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds ofpower.
3)Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it isnow.
C.
1)Green trees can protect our air frompolluting.
6)The area thrives on competition since the same kind of shops are all grouped together. An exampleof thisbeing the three big department stores, which are within a mile of eachother.
2．修饰方面
1)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to thecountryside.
2)Without television, people can’t get information which comes from other parts of the worldimmediately.
6)In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly20%.
8．误用问题
1)With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds ofenergy.
8)Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our citiesbeautiful.
2)Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is inseason.
3)The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the pastdecade.
6)There are so many countriesusingEnglish that it had been regarded as an internationallanguage.
7)Studyhardnow so thatwecan cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-firstcentury.
3)At the age of six, my father began to give me Englishlessons.
4)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatlyimproved.
3)The price of milk isn’t higher thangrain.
4)The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and humanbeings.
5)But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever itarises.
6)Some college graduates couldn’t find a better job, so they decided to continue their highereducation.
7．搭配方面
1)However the speed of a car is much faster than that of abicycle.
5)Womennowhave risen highly in socialstatus.
6)There are many reasons for the changes in people’s diet. First,peຫໍສະໝຸດ Baiduple can now afford expensive but nutritiousfood.
5)Toimproveone’s writing skill,regularpractice isessential.
3．一致方面
1)Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of theday.
2)In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not affordit.
3)We students should study / learn as much as knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for thefuture.
6)Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train ourcharacter.
7)BeforeIselected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long itlasted.