2012年5月雅思大作文真题

2012年5月雅思大作文真题+范文

Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from competitive companies. To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?

写作语汇一览表：

1.in response to an advertisement回应广告

mercials商业广告

rmative传递信息

4.hooks圈套

5.tricks and catchy phrases花言巧语

6.Advertising is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。

7.be immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响

8.subtle不易察觉

9.a great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品

写作例句推荐：

1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us

remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.

2.While advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products,

to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental

as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.

写作提纲思路：

经济角度：promote consumption, enhance economy

公众角度一： make consumers informed of the latest information of commodities

公众角度二： exaggerating, misleading, stimulate consumers to buy what they do not need.

分别形成三个中心句：

1. One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.

2. Meanwhile, advertising serves to stimulate consumption and contributes to economic development.

3. Despite its importance, there is no denying that every now and then, advertising leads consumers into an impulsive purchase, thereby causing wasteful spending.

如何解决supporting sentences：

1. explanation 解释和说明中心句的意思或原因

2. extension 对主题句拓展，阐述其影响

3. example 举例说明

4. sorting 当主题句有几个分论点支持的时候，将分论点分类说明

5. contrasting 描述相反的情形，尤其针对无法落笔的情形

主题句： One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.

【1】 As for the majority of people, it is unlikely for them to get out of their way to have an overall knowledge of commodities they need; thus advertisements serve as an effective and up-to-date channel of information rendering them informed of new products. (Explanation/paraphrase/make the statement more explicit and concrete.)

【2】 With the presence of advertising, a consumer is able to acquire the latest information in the market, such as properties of a product or service, and thereby make a wiser buying decision. (Extension, further statement and exemplification.)

【3】 In contrast, without advertising, a consumer is at the risk of purchasing a product that fails to meet all of his or her needs, because of lack of knowledge of better alternatives in the market. (Contrasting)

【1】 Besides the informative merits of advertising, it is also beneficial in boosting economy and arouse the confidence of consumption. (Explanation topic sentence.)

【2】 Advertising describes a product in such an impressive way that it always succeeds in attracting target customers and driving them into a final purchase.

【3】 Furthermore, advertising reminds the potential customers of their needs.(the above two sentences have utilized “sorting”, that is to say, classification of the different layers of a certain statement.)

【4】 For example, the advertisement of chocolates on television always reminds you