雅思小作文范文-线图

1. The proportion of male and female smokers in Someland from 1960 to 2000.
1. 两条线，建议每条线一段;
2. 每条线的描述请参考经典折线写法(在数据库里有，详见《单线指导写法》);
3. 关键性数据不可少，如最大值，最小值等;
4. 本文用到了线段之间的对比关系，如文中的: 6 times of 和smallest difference with，这些都是加分项
The chart compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between 1960 and 2000. Overall, the proportion of smoking for both is currently declining and fewer women smoked throughout the period.
Initially, the peak of male rate was reached in 1960, when it was 600 in every 1000, over 6 times of that of females. This number then decreased gradually to 500 by 1975 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 250 by 2000, which had the smallest difference with the level of women.
Oppositely, the rate of smoking in women in 1960 was the lowest at only 90 in every 1,000. By 1965 this increased to 180, followed by a sharper rise to 320 by 1975. The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1980 at which point the figure began to decline and ended up at 200 by 2000.
In conclusion, the rate of smoking in men dropped straightly throughout the whole period while the figure of women smokers went through a fluctuation.（172）
2. Radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
以下是6分, 7分和9分范文，可以看出，上6分的文章都有一个共性，就是没有大的语法错误，分段合适，表达清晰，且进行适当的词汇替换。

而7分比6分好在如下方面：
1. 7分加入了对比。

2. 7分的句式更加的多样和灵活，而6分文章的句式单一，而且again使用过多。

3. 7分有足够的信号词(如however, after that等)，这能帮助考官理解文章的层次和结构。

4. 最后，9分范文的特点是句式多样，词汇的同义替换和词性变化十分明显，同时表达更加细节化。

The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 yes old of UK follows the radio and television throughout the day during the period October-December 1992.
It has been observed from the graph that less than 10% audiences follows the radio at 6:00 am and the percentage raised to a peak around 30% at 8′AM and decline gradually to around 10% during the period 2′00 to 4′00 Pm and again raised a bi t to around 12% between 4′00 to 6′00 PM. It then again dropped to below 10% at around 10′PM. The rate again raised to a bit between 10′00 PM to 12′00 PM and then dropped slowly by 4′00 AM.
On the other hand, the rate of television audiences raises 0-10% during the period 6′00 to 8′00 am and remain steady up to 1 0′AM and then gradually goes down by 12′00 noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 2′00 noon. The percentage raised dramatically goes down by 12′00 noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 2′00 PM which again raised to a peak above 40% between 6′00-8′00 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 12′00 PM to 4′00 AM.（237）
3. The amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
1. 分段原则：按照线段的形状分类，上升的一段，下降的一段。

2. 折线模式的重点在于描述数据的改变和趋势。

3. 注意线段描述的完整性：动作+幅度。

4. 注意一类数据的描述(Max, Min, 交点等)。

The line graph illustrates the amount of fast food consumed by teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years. Overall, the consumption of fish and chips declined over the period, whereas the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased.
In 1975, the most popular fast food with Australian teenagers was fish and chips, being eaten 100 times a year. This was far higher than Pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year. However, apart from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption of fish and chips gradually declined over the 25 year timescale to finish at just under 40 times per year. In sharp contrast to this, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at much higher levels. Pizza consumption increased gradually until it overtook the consumption of fish and chips in 1990. It then leveled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers, increasing sharply throughout the 1970’s and 1980’s, exceeding fish and chips consumption in 1985. It finished at the same level that fish and chips began, with consumption at 100 times a year.（196）
4. Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
1. 分段原则为：相同趋势的分在同一段落，具体为：最主要的能源一段，次重要的能源一段，最不重要的能源一段。

2. 由于线段过多，所以线段的描述尽量简洁，只描述最重要的特征(Max,Min,上升，下降，波动，交点)，其他数据一律不写。

3. 不用每条线都描述，只重点描述几条线的共性。

4. 注意句式的多样性，即动词表达和名词表达的交替使用。

The graph shows consumption of energy in the U.S. since 1980 with projections through 2030. The historical trends show Petrol and Oil as the major sources of fuel, rising from 35 quadrillion units used in 1980 to 42 quadrillion in 2012. Despite some fluctuation between 1980 and 1995, there was a steady increase, which is expected to continue, reaching 47 quadrillion in 2030. Consumption of energy from natural gas and coal followed a similar pattern over the period. From 20 quadrillion and 15 quadrillion respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24 quadrillion. Coal consumption is projected to rise to 31quadrillion in 2030, whereas after 2014, natural gas is forecast to remain stable at 25 quadrillion. In 1980, energy from solar/wind, nuclear, and hydropower was the least-used, with only 4 quadrillion. Nuclear has risen by 3 quadrillion, and solar/wind by 2. Since 2005, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to remain approximately constant through 2030, while the others are projected to rise gradually after 2025.
Overall, fossil fuels will remain the chief energy source for the US, with a little bit of hydroelectric, nuclear and a smidgen of renewables like wind and solar.（222）
5. The information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.
1. 五条线，故必须进行分组：时间内数据始终较多的分一组，数据相对较少的分一组;
2. 注意关键数据的描述：最大值，最小值，交点等;
3. 需要呈现明显的线形，如平行，稳定不变，剧烈上升或下跌。

The graph shows the overall numbers of tourist arrivals in five countries between 1995 and 2010. In 1995 over 70 million tourists visited the United States, more than twice as many as the next most popular destination shown, France. However, between 2005 and 2010 there was a decrease of approximately 1,500,000 in the numbers going to the United States whereas there was an increase of nearly 20 million tourists visiting France. The result was that in 2010 the number of tourists arriving in the United States and France was almost equal at around 90 million each. The number of tourists visiting Malaysia rose steadily over the whole period but by 2010 the total was still under 50 million. The countries with the fewest tourist arrivals were Brazil and Egypt. The number of tourists going there was similar between 1995 and 2000 but after that there was a greater increase in tourists going to Egypt than to Brazil.（157）。