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高中英语说明文概要写作省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件
Various as people’s names are, they have developed gradually in some common ways.
第13页
Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
第5页
04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
第13页
Paraphrase supporting points 1, 2 &3 on your own and then share them with your desk mate.
第5页
04 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Read for the style, topic sentence and structure
Step 2. Find the key information of each paragraph
Step 3. Paraphrase(改写) Step 4. Write the draft(初稿) and better it
what they mean?
• Some people give their children names that means good things. Clara means
“bright” Leonard
; Beatrice means means “as brave
a“sonaeliwonh”oe. gxivaems hpalpepsiness”;
As to people’s names, various origins and meanings are involved.
Faced with a variety of names, people may be curiou整s合ab、o提ut炼how they come into being.
Donald
means
超实用高考英语概要写作说课课件
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文本分析与写作步骤：
本文是一篇议论文，主要讲述了成名给名人们 生活带来的影响，以及处理这些问题的方法， 并依此引发读者思考。
此类文章在写概要时： 首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词； 其次，要对每一段的主题进行总结和概括； 最后在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词， 使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
The teaching procedures
Step1 The requirements of summary writing .
Evaluation standards
1. Cover the main points
(3*4=12points)
2. Do not copy, in your words
(4 points)
3. Use correct language，grammar and vocabulary (4 points)
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
(1 point)
Step 2 Find the key words and key sentences.
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
文本分析与写作步骤：
本文是一篇议论文，主要讲述了成名给名人们 生活带来的影响，以及处理这些问题的方法， 并依此引发读者思考。
此类文章在写概要时： 首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词； 其次，要对每一段的主题进行总结和概括； 最后在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词， 使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
The teaching procedures
Step1 The requirements of summary writing .
Evaluation standards
1. Cover the main points
(3*4=12points)
2. Do not copy, in your words
(4 points)
3. Use correct language，grammar and vocabulary (4 points)
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
(1 point)
Step 2 Find the key words and key sentences.
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today's stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world's attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
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I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
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Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.
高中英语概要写作过程指导公开课PPT课件
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Specific example
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Read for the style
高考 概要写作 公开课课件
详细描述
高考概要写作中明确规定不得抄袭原文，否则会被扣分。
总结词
考生在写作过程中，如果直接照搬原文句子而不进行改写或概括，很容易被判定为抄袭。为了避免被扣分，考生需要学会对原文进行改写和概括，用自己的语言重新表达文章要点。同时，考生还需要注意避免使用原文中的特定表述方式和词汇，以免被认定为抄袭。
详细描述
引入实际生活素材
教师可以将实际生活素材引入概要写作教学中，帮助学生理解现实生活中的问题和观点，提高概要写作的实际应用能力。
THANKS
感谢观看
学生需要具备较高的阅读理解能力，能够准确理解原文的主旨、结构和重要信息。
阅读理解能力
学生需要具备筛选和提炼原文重要信息的能力，能够准确把握文章的核心内容。
信息筛选能力
学生需要具备清晰、简洁的语言表达能力，能够将原文的主要内容用规范的语言表达出来。
语言表达能力
学生需要具备逻辑思维能力，能够合理地组织语言和段落，使概要内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。
逻辑思维能力
加强阅读训练
教师可以通过加强阅读训练，提高学生的阅读理解和信息筛选能力，从而提升概要写作水平。
强化逻辑思维训练
教师可以通过强化逻辑思维训练，帮助学生理清思路、组织语言，使概要内容更加条理清晰、逻辑严密。
注重语言表达
教师需要注重学生的语言表达训练，通过模仿、改写等方式，提高学生的语言表达能力。
在模拟考试中，严格按照考试要求进行时间分配，避免因时间不足而影响写作质量。
根据考试要求和时间限制，制定合理的写作策略，如先写主题句再展开论述等。
在模拟考试后进行反思和总结，针对不足之处进行有针对性的练习和提升。
高考概要写作展望
CATALOGUE
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高考概要写作中明确规定不得抄袭原文，否则会被扣分。
总结词
考生在写作过程中，如果直接照搬原文句子而不进行改写或概括，很容易被判定为抄袭。为了避免被扣分，考生需要学会对原文进行改写和概括，用自己的语言重新表达文章要点。同时，考生还需要注意避免使用原文中的特定表述方式和词汇，以免被认定为抄袭。
详细描述
引入实际生活素材
教师可以将实际生活素材引入概要写作教学中，帮助学生理解现实生活中的问题和观点，提高概要写作的实际应用能力。
THANKS
感谢观看
学生需要具备较高的阅读理解能力，能够准确理解原文的主旨、结构和重要信息。
阅读理解能力
学生需要具备筛选和提炼原文重要信息的能力，能够准确把握文章的核心内容。
信息筛选能力
学生需要具备清晰、简洁的语言表达能力，能够将原文的主要内容用规范的语言表达出来。
语言表达能力
学生需要具备逻辑思维能力，能够合理地组织语言和段落，使概要内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。
逻辑思维能力
加强阅读训练
教师可以通过加强阅读训练，提高学生的阅读理解和信息筛选能力，从而提升概要写作水平。
强化逻辑思维训练
教师可以通过强化逻辑思维训练，帮助学生理清思路、组织语言，使概要内容更加条理清晰、逻辑严密。
注重语言表达
教师需要注重学生的语言表达训练，通过模仿、改写等方式，提高学生的语言表达能力。
在模拟考试中，严格按照考试要求进行时间分配，避免因时间不足而影响写作质量。
根据考试要求和时间限制，制定合理的写作策略，如先写主题句再展开论述等。
在模拟考试后进行反思和总结，针对不足之处进行有针对性的练习和提升。
高考概要写作展望
CATALOGUE
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浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语教学竞赛公开课、高考复习课件——高考“概要写作”教学课件
• 2. Read the article for all you can understand the first time through.
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
高考 概要写作 公开课
概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and
correctly?
(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. characteristics 忽略具体事例 detailed example
近义词替换
1. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. 2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. 3. This has not permanent led directlyshort-lived to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语-概要写作--公开课课件
Concise !!! 60-70 words
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
书面表达之概要写作公开课
Step One-- Warming up & Leading in
Q1: Who are they? Q2: What are they? Q3: Whose contributions to society are less? Q4: Whose income are higher? Q5: Does he deserve the high pay?
知识目标：To help students catch the main idea of the passage and each paragraph 能力目标：To help students conclude the passage in their own language 情感态度与价值观： Guide studvely 教学重点： To help the students find out the topic sentences quickly and correctly 教学难点： To help the students replace them with proper vocabularies and sentence structures 教学方法： Analyzing, comparing, conclusion 教学工具：Multimedia facilities, blackboard
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要（上）。 As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball star, for instance, earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year. Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even argue that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contributions to society are much less than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件
9
Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
10
Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
14
Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
10
Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
14
Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
Voice
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
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Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25oints）：1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 contents 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇(内容)
3.
完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
language skills (语言)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要
结构紧凑 structure (结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
led directlysthootrhte-li“vtehdrow-away society” which is a
great waste of the earth’s resources.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.
概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. 忽略具体事例 detailed examplecharacteristics
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using
your own words properly?
(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever.
改变句式 result in
This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
• _S_o_m__e_t_im_e__a_g_o;_I_n_t_h_e__,industrial goods past; Decades ago were made _to__be__u_se_d__fo_r_a__lo_n_g_t_im__e__. to function well for a long time; durable
改变主语（形式主语）
2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.
•To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. 正话反说、反话正说 •It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.
Para2.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Para 3： 过渡句
This wastefulness of trouble.
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
topic sentence Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to tdwhiarresotcwetlyothfteothmtehaeewa“ratthyhrt’ocsrhhewrasaen-ursaaoltwtocutarreycerepsissoat.ciiJrciueststhyte”tmhwi.nhTkihcoihsfihtshaaesglceraedrast that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
忽略具体事例 detailed examples
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
spent much money on
treasure treat it kindly
use it carefully
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25oints）：1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 contents 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇(内容)
3.
完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
language skills (语言)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要
结构紧凑 structure (结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
led directlysthootrhte-li“vtehdrow-away society” which is a
great waste of the earth’s resources.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.
概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. 忽略具体事例 detailed examplecharacteristics
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using
your own words properly?
(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever.
改变句式 result in
This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
• _S_o_m__e_t_im_e__a_g_o;_I_n_t_h_e__,industrial goods past; Decades ago were made _to__be__u_se_d__fo_r_a__lo_n_g_t_im__e__. to function well for a long time; durable
改变主语（形式主语）
2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.
•To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. 正话反说、反话正说 •It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.
Para2.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Para 3： 过渡句
This wastefulness of trouble.
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
topic sentence Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to tdwhiarresotcwetlyothfteothmtehaeewa“ratthyhrt’ocsrhhewrasaen-ursaaoltwtocutarreycerepsissoat.ciiJrciueststhyte”tmhwi.nhTkihcoihsfihtshaaesglceraedrast that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
忽略具体事例 detailed examples
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
spent much money on
treasure treat it kindly
use it carefully
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!