短文改错2及答案

短文改错2

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

1．Recently I have been quarrel ling about my mother over whether I can watch TV after the school. She holds the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. It seem to her that I am allowed to watch TV, I won’t be able to control me and I’ll forget all about my studies. She also thinks that it is bad to my eyes. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Besides, it is important for me to know what had happened both at home and abroad. However, I shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

2．

This summer holiday, which I’m looking forward for, is coming. What great fun that it is to go fishing! Play football is one of my hobby. I can ride my bike, climb high mountains, and go swimming. Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather. How interested my holiday will be! But my father was always afraid I might be hurt: drop from water, fall off a tree, hurt by a truck or something. But if I’m careless enou gh, how will these things happen? I must try best to persuade him.

3．

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, that was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, although he was born in China. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy collecting stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her. 4．

Dear Li Hua,

I'm very glad to hear from you. I know you have difficulty remember English words. Now I’ll give you some advices. Firstly, you should read aloud as often as possibly, for it can develop your sense of language. Secondly, you must read more. Reading can enlarge your vocabulary and you can easily find plenty reading materials that interests you. Thirdly, whenever you will meet a new word, it isn't enough to write them down. The more you repeat it, the well you'll remember it. Finally, you must put your vocabulary into practice, like writing English letters to me. Only with this way can you use the language freely.

I hope the above advice can be very use to you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

David

5．

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But she is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?

6．

【小题1】about—with

【小题2】school前the去掉

【小题3】fully—full

【小题4】lesson—lessons

【小题5】that和I 之间加if或once

【小题6】me—myself

【小题7】to—for

【小题8】watch—watching

【小题9】had—has

【小题10】However—Thus/Therefore/So