高三英语书面表达专项训练3

高三英语书面表达专项训练（三）: 个人情感与人际关系

一、典题解析

下面是某高中学校对150名高三学生睡眠时间不足及原因所作的调查。请根据图1提供的信息描述高三学生的睡眠情况，并针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。

1.试题解读

本文属图表类作文，要仔细读图和图前的文字说明。本文要求考生说明学生睡眠情况的调查结果。基本时态应用一般现在时态。以第三人称的口气来表达内容。从写作步骤来看，可先描述学生睡眠时间不足的具体数据，然后针对图2中任何一个数据所反映的情况写出你的一个看法。

在介绍数据变化时应特别注意表达的多样性。要仔细读图和图前的文字

柱形或饼柱形或饼形图表式

柱形或饼形图表式作文的体裁多为议论文、说明文和应用文，内容大多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析，系统准确地表达出突变含义，并得出令人信服的结论。必须做到行文切题，紧扣中心思想，不漏要点，并且意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确、得当。

柱形或饼形图表式作文写作形式和要求与文字表格式有所区别。写图表作文时，要注意遵循以下步骤：

(1)认真分析图表的含义，弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系；柱形图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系，要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势，因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。饼形图表示各事物在总体中所占的比例及相互关系，旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体，部分与部分之间的相互关系，这种关

系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。

(2)确定文章的主题思想，构思出文章的基本框架，筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据；

(3)编列文章的提纲；

(4)根据文章的提纲，将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落，然后将各个段落组成文章，注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡。

实际写作时，常采用三段式的谋篇方式。

第一段：概述图表反映的主题思想；

第二段：分析产生的原因；

第三段：展望未来或提出办法或建议。

2.写作模板

1) Recently, a survey has been done to find out 所要表达的主题. As is shown in the pie chart，表中的内容1, 表中的内容2. 表中的内容3 and表中的内容4.

In conclusion, the survey shows that总体规律、趋势或呈现的问题. Many factors contribute to the problem. One is that原因之一. Another is that原因之二.

In my opinion，自己的观点，如何解决问题．

2)As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/ percentage in the table (graph/pie chart), 作文题目的议题has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases). 具体变化数据. Judging from these figures, we ca n draw the conclusion that 得出结论．

There are 至少两个reasons why this happened. On the one hand, 原因之一. On the other hand, 原因之二. In addition, 原因之三is also responsible for it.

It is high time that we 发出倡议. We should/are supposed to/have an obligation to do/It’s our responsibility that 解决问题的方法或对策.

3．牛刀小试

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三、范文背诵

假如你是李明，最近，你的朋友张华因考试不利，情绪低落，学习消极应付。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail, 指出其消极行为可能带来的不良后果，并结合自身实际，提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法，鼓励他努力学习。

注意：字数150左右。

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your last exam. You are not the only one who seems to try his best but end up in failure in exams. Quite a few of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don’t want to study hard any longer. I’m sure you know that it’s unwise to do so because you might be left far behind.

I was once in the same situation as yours. Failure is the mother of success. In face of failure, what we need to do is to calm down and reflect on our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice. Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success. I truly hope I can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Ming

英语中“please” “thank you” “sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊、改善关系、化解矛盾的神奇力量，因而被称为“magic words”。请以“Magic power of Polite Words”为题写一篇150词左右的英语作文。体裁不限（记叙文，议论文，说明文…）

An increasing number of people attach great importance to relationship in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship among friends. Polite words can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.

Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on how he deals with people！Always be grateful to other people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the faster you will move towards your goal.

Although some people may easily ignore the importance of being polite, we students should form