【公开课课件1】高中英语概要写作指导
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高中英语写作指导1课件北师大版必修1
写作指导
常用表达
写作结构
针对训练
2.要紧扣提示,围绕主题,详细描述书信的主体内容(如下面题目 中表格中的内容)。再如邀请某人参加晚会、晚餐或一般聚会,就 要把活动的时间、地点、活动的理由或有哪些人出席等写清楚。 3.语言要简洁。英文书信讲究开门见山,简明扼要。只要按照提 示的要点把需要表达的内容表达清楚即可,不可过多发挥,或拖泥 带水,毕竟词数有所限定。 4.符合英文书信的结尾方式(祝福对方best wishes;期盼looking forward to your reply等)。
单元写作指导
写作指导
常用表达
写作结构
针对训练
如何写书信 书信是人们交流的一种常见方式。一封好的书信首先要格式正确, 其次合理组织语言材料并融合在书信之中,这是书信写作的关键。 从近年高考试题来看,多数考查书信形式的作文已经给出了开头和 结尾,因此不涉及其格式的考查,可以直接动笔写作。 在动笔写作时,要注意以下几点: 1.处理好写信人与收信人之间的关系。在称呼、语言等方面应 格外注意。譬如,非正式信件直接称呼Dear Tom,最后的落款 Yours,Li Hua,如果不太熟的话,最好用正式文体。如邀请朋友参加 生日聚会,可以说I’m writing to tell you that...,但如果用It’s my great honour to invite you to...就显得太正式。
写作指导
常用表达
写作结构
针对训练
My day starts a little earlier.I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning.From 8:30 to 12:00,there are four lessons.There are two 10minute breaks and a 20-minute break.We do exercises at the longer break.There are three lessons in the afternoon,which begin at 14:30 and end at 16:00.After class,from 16:30 to 17:30,we have different kinds of activities for one hour.I often play badminton with my classmates.We also study in the classroom from 19:00 to 21:00 in the evening,but we just learn by ourselves.We go to bed at about 22:30. All my day is almost filled with lessons,but I have got used to this kind of life now. Best wishes! Yours, Li Li
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
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I looked in reference books.
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Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
【省级公开课课件】高中英语新高考概要写作-公开课(共24张PPT)
However,
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable. We spent much money on it and treasure it. Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources. This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble. We are running out of resources. We need to save resources before it’s too late. (71W)
能力提升
Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several ways to make that happen.
Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles ---both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. 1.Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weigh 2.The passage mainly tells some ways to lose weight by changing habits. 3.Whether people can lose weight or not depends on their living habits.
英语必修1精品课件1：Unit 4 Natural Disasters 同步写作——概要写作
2．议论文 The article gives the view that...should/shouldn't...(主题) ...(补充论据) The passage highlights the importance of sth.... The author argues that... 3．说明文 现象解释类： This article points out the common phenomenon...(主题)，which...(补充解释)
Years later，I drove to a meeting in the morning.In late afternoon I found that I'd left the lights on all day，and the battery was dead.Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership was right next door.I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.
(3)连词衔接法 He insisted on staying.He was not willing to go. →He insisted on staying rather than going. (4)词序改变法 Professor White，Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting. →Present at the meeting were Professor White，Professor Smith and many other guests. (5)利用特殊句式法 Jim wants to go boating and his parents want to go boating，too. →Jim wants to go boating，and so do his parents.
高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
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写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
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写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语概要写作过程指导公开课PPT课件
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① Psychologists and therapists
for influencing mood and state of
Supporting details
mind & various types of treatments
② Companies
③ Clothes
Read for the supporting details
Read for the supporting details
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General words
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Specific example
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省级公开课课件高考英语一轮复习概要写作技(2024)
End to end corresponden ce
Introduce the theme at the beginning, summarize the entire text or propose prospects at the end, forming a complete discourse structure.
Understand the cultural differences between the East and the West, and avoid cultural conflicts or misunderstandings in the article.
Clear hierarchy
Reasonably arrange paragraph order, reflecting the logical hierarchy and progressive relationship of the content.
Transition is natural
using transitional words, phrases, or sentences to achieve natural connections and transitions between paragraphs.
Use advanced vocabulary and phrases, such as fixed collocations, idioms, proverbs, etc., to enhance the expression effect of sentences.
2024/1/25
Logical coherence
Pay attention to language authenticity
高中英语教学竞赛公开课、高考复习课件——高考“概要写作”教学课件
• 2. Read the article for all you can understand the first time through.
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
• 3. Go back and reread the areas you have identified as most important.
• 4. Take notes on the material, getting down the main ideas and the key supporting details.
一、用简洁的句型 • Wordy: The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time
is that winter days are much shorter than summer days. (22 words) • Concise: Most of the country shifts to daylight savings time because winter
Skills of Writing Summaries
• “用自己的话”从wording和sentence structure两个方面着手：C-R-C-C • 删：删除不必要的细节(如具体事例、事实、直接引语、细节描写等)。 • 换：用同义词替换原文中的词语；使用同族词(如success, succeed)；
什么是 “要点”，什么是“细节”？
• 主旨(thesis): 作者想要表达的核心思想，较为笼统、概括，通 常出现在段落开头或结尾。全文的主旨通过主体段落的要点 (main points)来展开。说明文、议论文的要点通常都是明确表 达的。
• 要点(main ideas/points): 支持主旨的重要观点，通常一个主体 段落有一个要点。
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
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Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
高考英语-概要写作--公开课课件
Concise !!! 60-70 words
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
高中英语Summary Writing概要写作公开课精品PPT课件
Para.1: Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
Para.2: According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Tip3: use the third person Tip4: use various sentence structures Tip5: use general words Tip6: change the part of speech（改变词性） Tip7: replace with synonyms(同义词） Tip8atter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.
Rewrite the topic sentences
1. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology. 2. According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-toface human relationships. 3. However, a report suggests that technology can actually better relationships.
高中英语-概要写作课summary公开课-课件
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Reverse the expression Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Chimp behavior was not fully understood before Jane.
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Reverse the expression
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
3. Use some linking words to make a logical and coherent(连
贯的) summary
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Advertisingbusiness world. Many industries take advantage of advertising to attract or to win customers away from their business competitors. Now advertising is everywhere and it more or less affects people’s life. The influence of advertising is so huge that it causes many people to buy things that they do not want at the start.
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Dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease. Dirt on the skin was a barrier against outside disease.
1. 同义替换 - 改变词性
Baker concludes that people do not have the ability to sense when they are being stared at.
Baker's conclusion is that people are not capable of feeling other's observation.
1. 同义替换 - 改变词性：使用抽象名词
If you fail to pass the drug test, we will have to dismiss
几种概要写作的表达技巧 (语言)
Summary writing Skills
1. 同义替换法 (近义词、反义词、词性转换等) 2. 句式转换法 (改变主语、运用非谓语动词短语、with结构、运用同位语等) 3. 压缩长句法 (笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等)
1. 同义替换
Dirt on the skin could prevent people from getting sick.
高考英语
概要写作 3
概要写作表达技巧 (内容)
Summary writing skills
1. 主位描述 2. 要点完整 3. 逻辑清晰
Her first delight was going to the tower. It was built long ago by the Norman invaders of AD 1066. This solid stone, square tower had remained standing for one thousand years. Although the building had expanded around it, it remained part of a royal palace and prison combined.
There are many people who are shy. Shyness is co及with结构）
• Unlike bony fish, sharks have no bones; their skeleton is made of cartilage （软骨）which is not as hard as bone.
you from your job. Failure to pass the drug test will result in your job dismissal.
Your skin will be burnt if you are exposed to the sun too long. Long exposure to the sun will harm your skin.
The person at a restaurant who talks on the phone through an entire meal, ignoring his kids around the table; the woman who talks on the phone in the car, ignoring her husband; the teen who texts messages all the way home from school, avoiding contact with kids all around him.
• There are many different species of sharks that range from the size of a person's hand to bigger than a bus. The whale shark is the largest in the world; the basking whale is the second largest fish. Fully-grown sharks range in size from 7 inches long, up to 50 feet long. Most sharks are intermediate in size, and are about the same size as people, 5-7 feet long. Half of the shark species are under 39 inches long.
2.改变句式（更换主语）
1. Cell phones rob us of our quality time with family members and friends alike.
2. Due to cell phone addiction, kids, couples and friends lack quality time and company from parents, spouses and fellows.
3. With cell phone dependence disease, people tend to give their attention to cell phones rather than their beloved ones.
4. It is easier for people addicted to cell phones to neglect/overlook their family members and friends.
With only cartilage making up their skeleton, sharks come in various sizes, ranging from 7 inches long to 50 feet long.
2.改变句式（更换主语）
请用一句话来概括下面这段文字 （你能写出几种表达法?）
1. 同义替换 - 改变词性
Baker concludes that people do not have the ability to sense when they are being stared at.
Baker's conclusion is that people are not capable of feeling other's observation.
1. 同义替换 - 改变词性：使用抽象名词
If you fail to pass the drug test, we will have to dismiss
几种概要写作的表达技巧 (语言)
Summary writing Skills
1. 同义替换法 (近义词、反义词、词性转换等) 2. 句式转换法 (改变主语、运用非谓语动词短语、with结构、运用同位语等) 3. 压缩长句法 (笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等)
1. 同义替换
Dirt on the skin could prevent people from getting sick.
高考英语
概要写作 3
概要写作表达技巧 (内容)
Summary writing skills
1. 主位描述 2. 要点完整 3. 逻辑清晰
Her first delight was going to the tower. It was built long ago by the Norman invaders of AD 1066. This solid stone, square tower had remained standing for one thousand years. Although the building had expanded around it, it remained part of a royal palace and prison combined.
There are many people who are shy. Shyness is co及with结构）
• Unlike bony fish, sharks have no bones; their skeleton is made of cartilage （软骨）which is not as hard as bone.
you from your job. Failure to pass the drug test will result in your job dismissal.
Your skin will be burnt if you are exposed to the sun too long. Long exposure to the sun will harm your skin.
The person at a restaurant who talks on the phone through an entire meal, ignoring his kids around the table; the woman who talks on the phone in the car, ignoring her husband; the teen who texts messages all the way home from school, avoiding contact with kids all around him.
• There are many different species of sharks that range from the size of a person's hand to bigger than a bus. The whale shark is the largest in the world; the basking whale is the second largest fish. Fully-grown sharks range in size from 7 inches long, up to 50 feet long. Most sharks are intermediate in size, and are about the same size as people, 5-7 feet long. Half of the shark species are under 39 inches long.
2.改变句式（更换主语）
1. Cell phones rob us of our quality time with family members and friends alike.
2. Due to cell phone addiction, kids, couples and friends lack quality time and company from parents, spouses and fellows.
3. With cell phone dependence disease, people tend to give their attention to cell phones rather than their beloved ones.
4. It is easier for people addicted to cell phones to neglect/overlook their family members and friends.
With only cartilage making up their skeleton, sharks come in various sizes, ranging from 7 inches long to 50 feet long.
2.改变句式（更换主语）
请用一句话来概括下面这段文字 （你能写出几种表达法?）