高中英语新高考-英语作文：热点话题指导与解读：意见分歧、教育

高中英语新高考-英语作文：

热点话题指导与解读：意见分歧、教育

作文不常写，写作技能就会生疏，这是必然的。但是每次写一定要有所突破，才会有效，其中一个好方法就是把别人的好作文的好文笔内化为己有。下面这篇文字用到了很多高级词块，个别是四级常用词汇，相信对成绩非常好的读者也会有用。我一贯主张，先广泛阅读大量的同类话题作文，然后下笔，调用自己的思维，用上积累的词块。

欢迎大家提出更好的写法建议。非常感谢。

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题目：

在我们合作的过程中，经常小组里出现不同的声音，如何看待不同的声音并且取得一致的声音。

写作过程：

首段导入：说明分歧的坏处：破坏合作和孤立成员

（话题导入+解释说明结果+明确立场）

Nowadays, along with people from different backgrounds come many conflicts in a community, which, if not handled properly, may threaten cooperation. (这个句子比较复杂的，主句是倒装句，定语从句里含有状语从句的省略结构，属于：现象+结果的思维模式) For example, it makes members gradually lose support and isolate

themselves. (对前面的threat继续解释)Therefore,great efforts should be made to achieve a universal voice.（最后提出观点）

中间段：解释立场，说明消除分歧争取统一的声音的好处

First, it can help achieve high working efficiency. Obviously, a group where all members unite as one is usually full of passion and strength. Otherwise, a lot of time will be spent convincing each other. (展开方式：主题句+解释+反向说明) Second, it contributes to a friendly environment in which everyone can work with a good mood. By contrast, individuals with strong opinions are inclined to be aggressive, imposing great pressure on others. (展开方式：主题句+反向说明)

结尾段：提出建议

Personally, even with the most deeply held differences, treating the other person with respect is always a good first step towards greater understanding. Also, a good listening can gain you deep empathy with others. Both will be a source of personal comfort and reassurance in various conflicts.

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好词好句：

Along with…come…两个事物一起发生

if not handled properly如果处理不好

lose support失去支持

isolate themselves孤立自我

mutual respect相互尊重

achieve high working efficiency赢得高效

full of passion and strength充满激情和力量

with a good mood好心情

are inclined to倾向于

imposing great pressure on对……施加压力

gain you deep empathy with others带来共鸣

a source of personal comfort and reassurance安抚和宽慰的来源注：最后一段是圣诞节英国女王致辞里的。

But through the many changes I have seen over the years, faith, family and friendship have been not only a constant for mebut a source of personal comfort and reassurance.但纵观这些年间诸事变迁。我的信仰，家庭和友谊不仅是我永恒的坚守，同时也是我的安抚和宽慰。

Even with the most deeply held differences,treating the other person with respect and as a fellow human being is always agood first step towards greater understanding.即使彼此间存在最根深蒂固的分歧，视对方为同侪、待他人以尊重永远是增进理解的第一步。

题目：评价虎爸虎妈的严苛教育

本题目可以用在所有父母不当的教育方式上，可以随意拓展。

开头段：不赞成这种方式

In China, the idea that “spare a rod, spoil a child" has been rooted in a family from generation to generation. Personally, such severe parenting styles could be counterproductive.

主体内容：

1.削弱创造力和想象力

2.不利于培养沟通能力

Firstly, the controlling methods weaken children's creativity and imagination. （后面开始说明原因）The fast-changing society favors those who will try something new and do away with old routines.（从反面来说明）Unfortunately, many parents confine children's behaviors and thoughts to a cramped space, depriving them of the freedom to set their minds free.

Secondly, they pose a great threat to the cultivation of communicative ability. (后面具体解释threat）Children subjected to high-pressure parenting for long tend to make compromises and blindly follow the footsteps of others.