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(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)

(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)

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talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing(组织语言)
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿) by groups.
Step5: write a draft(草稿)
para1:Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1:analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学 习。 注意: 1. 词数100左右;

高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】共45页文档

高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】共45页文档

高考英语书面表达---建议信写作优秀 课件(共42张PPT)【完美版】
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46、我们若已接受最坏的,就再没有什么损失。——卡耐基 47、书到用时方恨少、事非经过不知难。——陆游 48、书籍把我们引入最美好的社会,使我们认识各个时代的伟大智者。——史美尔斯 49、熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟。——孙洙 50、谁和我一样用功,谁就会和我一样成功。——莫扎特

高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)

高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)

常用句: 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容 包括: 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2(.开二头)和谋结篇尾列已纲给:出,不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因;(2)引出自己的建议; (3)建议的理由一; (4)建议的理由二; (5) 总结建议理由; (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
(三)翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信,信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因

高考英语建议信ppt课件

高考英语建议信ppt课件
Welcome
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方 接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理, 注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足,具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括: (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华,最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字, 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信,提供一些 建议。要点如下:1.支持他练毛笔字;2.列举注意事项(选择 字帖,注意姿势,模仿视频,贵在坚持);3.相信他会练好。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇:书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke

高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)

高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善;
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试(美国高考),心理压力很大,很苦恼,希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____

高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)

高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题,可以用以下开头:
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式:
Beginning:
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结,表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.

高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT

高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT

罗列观点:
• Firstly/ First of all / To begin with/ In the first place/on the one hand/ For one thing…
• Secondly/ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ on the other hand/ For another/ Next…
Sentence patterns(句型) Body: give your advice & reasons
1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
join join in take part in
join 加组织,成为其中一员 join in 加入活动(小),游戏 join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人做某事的队伍中 take part in 参加活动(大) eg. ____jo_i_n___ the army ____jo_i_n___ me in playing football __jo_i_n__i_n_ the game

高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件

高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件
③结尾-呼应开头,表达愿望,希望建议给对方以帮助。
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议,但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后,如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! (有志者事竟成!)
写作模板
Dear_______,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......

高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 PPT课件 图文

高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信 PPT课件 图文
______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
将介词短语提前(全倒装)
Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头,重申观点(restate your opinion.)
4. 注意事项:
1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出 建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力; 2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议; 3)符合英文信件的基本格式; 4)基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

高考英语作文建议信PPT课件

高考英语作文建议信PPT课件
Hi everyone,
I’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn. But my mother continues to treat me as a seven- year- old. What should I do?
告诉他要理解母亲。
speak Putonghua to make yourself (Hi3e)ve陈ry述on你e,帮助他的具体打算
也许你担心你的同学会取笑你的口音。
understood. W也h许a你t s担ho心ul你d I的do同?学会取笑你的口音。
请我根还据 会下介面绍要好点朋给友他给写你封。信。 首在先一, 个你英不文妨网学络说论普坛通上话,,你这看样见别一人个就名能叫听Gr懂ow。n-up 的中学生发帖寻求帮助。
希望您能尽快的适应新的学校生活。
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
( 陕西)假如你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看见一个名叫Grown-up 的中学生发帖寻求帮 助。请根据帖子的内容,写作要点和要求回帖。
高考英语作文建议信
( 年山东题)假如你新华中学的学生李华,班 里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融 入新的班级,感到很苦恼。请根据下面要点 给他写封信。
(1)帮他分析原因 (2)给他提出建议 (3)陈述你帮助他的具体打算
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. ____
make good friends.

(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)

(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)

Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句) _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句) I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句) _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing(润色)
How to polish your writing?
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting(书写)
Polish your composition by improving your language

【课件】英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)

【课件】英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)

Chinese words more easily. What’s more, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
• 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学 好中文。请你根据下列要点写 回信。
• 要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班;⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中 文歌曲; ⑷ 交中国朋友。
• take a Chinese course
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, you had better show your friendliness to others.
It is good for your to make friends. 两个简单句
First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.状语从句
写作模板 第二段: (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.

高一英语写作---英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)

高一英语写作---英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)

Then, you should make strangers feel easy, no matter where he is. Be more concerned about others than yourself.
3.与别人有分歧时不吵架,要商量; disagree with sb have different ideas/opinions don’t argue/quarrel discuss with sb have a discussion with sb talk with sb have a talk face to face
范文:
Dear Flower, I'm glad to receive
your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so
写作模板 第二段: (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
When you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don't think it's necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, don't trust those who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.

英语书面表达2之建议信ppt课件

英语书面表达2之建议信ppt课件

B. 表达建议(body)
1.first,firstly,secondly….then,after that,in the end.finally.Meanwhile, what’s more... 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. I would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my

高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)

高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结,意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结,意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice

高二英语作文建议信公开课课件

高二英语作文建议信公开课课件
It aims to develop students' writing skills and improve their ability to express ideas effectively in English
The course will cover the basic principles of English composition and the structure and format of suggestion letters
Specific examples
The letter includes examples to illustrate the points made, making it easier to understand
Flexibility
The suggestions made are flexible and can be adapted to different situations or needs
make learning more interesting and engaging for students
It will resource students to actively participate in class discussions and share their ideas and experiences
Student writing ask assignment
Topic selection
Provide students with a range of topic options for their writing assignments, allowing them to choose topics that
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如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图;一两个句子

体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议;层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结;呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项: a.这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b.这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由, 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来, 如
A letter 略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是 写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容, 提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理, 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
果你能采取以下措施,将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly,…Secondly,….Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库:英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1.After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
difficulty in learning English. ②I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning environmental protection.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly,…. Secondly,….Thirdly,….
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.

yours,
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华,在校园英语论坛(forum)上 看到一些同学的帖子,他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖,结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示:
1)培养学习兴趣;
2)找到适合的学习方法;
3)勤学好问,多实践。
词数100左右
Dear Friends,
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