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3. sing Chinese songs
learn and remember Chinese words more easily give much fun to us
4. make Chinese friends tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese
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Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my
advice on how to learn Chinese well. I will try to make some suggestions here. As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions:
建议或忠告。
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3.基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议。(reasons and
evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点。 (restate your opinion.)
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2. read books, magazines, newspapers in Chinese, watch TV, see movies broaden our horizons practice our Chinese learn more about Chinese history and culture
建议信ppt课件
daughter told a lie is that you are too strict with her
and she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you
the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much
Dear Xiaoming, 烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的健康皮肤进行自体移植，但对于大面积烧伤病人来讲，健康皮肤很有限，请同学们想一想如何来治疗该病人 I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions.
烧伤病人的治疗通常是取烧伤病人的 健康皮 肤进行 自体移 植，但 对于大 面积烧 伤病人 来讲， 健康皮 肤很有 限，请 同学们 想一想 如何来 治疗该 病人
文体概述
作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出 自己的看法和建议。
写给个人的建议信，通常是就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；写给某个组织和机 构建议信，是就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。通 常包括： 1. 说明写信目的。 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。 3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
10. 培养好习惯 develop good habits
11.
认为……有用
find sth. helpful/ beneficial
useful/
12. 把…考虑在内take sth. into
13. 得到改善
account/consideration get improved
建议信公开课课件
课程目标
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掌握建议信的基本构成和写作 技巧。
学习常用表达方式，提高语言 运用能力。
了解实际应用场景，提高实际 操作能力。
培养学习者沟通能力和书面表 达能力，提升个人综合素质。
CHAPTER
02
建议信的写作技巧
写作格式
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02
03
开头
明确表达写信目的，即提 出建议。
正文
分点阐述建议的具体内容 ，说明理由和依据。
推荐建议信
总结词
推荐建议信是第三方对被推荐人的能力和品格的肯定和赞扬，常用于申请学校 、工作或奖学金等场合。
详细描述
推荐建议信需要客观、具体地描述被推荐人的工作表现、能力特点和个人品质 ，强调其在所申请领域的优势和潜力。同时，推荐人还应表明自己的身份和与 被推荐人的关系，并表达对被推荐人的信任和支持。
心意思。
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建议信的实践应用
求职建议信的实践应用
求职建议信是求职者在申请工作时向 雇主展示自身优势和适合度的书面材 料，通过突出个人特点、技能和经验 ，以争取获得面试机会。
求职建议信应简洁明了，避免冗长的 篇幅和复杂的语言，让雇主能够快速 了解求职者的优势和适合度。
在撰写求职建议信时，应强调与应聘 职位相关的经验和技能，突出个人特 点和优势，同时表达对职位的热情和 兴趣。
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总结与展望
建议信的重要性和作用
促进有效沟通
促进问题解决
建议信是一种有效的沟通方式，能够 清晰地表达个人观点和建议，帮助双 方达成共识。
建议信可以针对具体问题提出建设性 的解决方案，有助于推动问题的解决 和改进。
高考英语建议信ppt课件
Welcome
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
必修一unit1作文-建议信课件
actually：事实上 especially：特别，尤其 homesick：想家的 anxious ： 焦虑的
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country . So don’t worry too much.
通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如源自写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？ 试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。
作文演练：
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友1Linda最 近在中国学习。她在信中向你诉说了她的 困扰：不适应新的学习环境，想家，感到 焦虑。请你给他写一封信。
要点：
1.表示理解并给与安慰。 2.提出建议并给出理由。
【写作分析】 本单元的写作要求是根据Xiao Dong的一封来信，假借Miss Wang的口气
写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作( persuasive writing )范畴中的 “ 建议 ( letter of advice ) ” 。话题 “ 无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼 ” 是中学生成长过 程中经常碰到并感到困惑的问题，题材贴近学生生活，属于开放性的话题， 思维空间相对较大，有利于学生自由发挥，运用自己的思维方式去解决问 题。这符合书面表达的要求，即能够正确运用英语进行交际。
【审题要素】 写作时应注意下面几点：
1. 确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常 规格式。 2. 主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3. 主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。 4. 内容要点： ①问题介绍； ②建议一； ③建议二； ④建议三； ⑤我的愿望。 5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country . So don’t worry too much.
通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如源自写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？ 试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。
作文演练：
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友1Linda最 近在中国学习。她在信中向你诉说了她的 困扰：不适应新的学习环境，想家，感到 焦虑。请你给他写一封信。
要点：
1.表示理解并给与安慰。 2.提出建议并给出理由。
【写作分析】 本单元的写作要求是根据Xiao Dong的一封来信，假借Miss Wang的口气
写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作( persuasive writing )范畴中的 “ 建议 ( letter of advice ) ” 。话题 “ 无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼 ” 是中学生成长过 程中经常碰到并感到困惑的问题，题材贴近学生生活，属于开放性的话题， 思维空间相对较大，有利于学生自由发挥，运用自己的思维方式去解决问 题。这符合书面表达的要求，即能够正确运用英语进行交际。
【审题要素】 写作时应注意下面几点：
1. 确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常 规格式。 2. 主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3. 主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。 4. 内容要点： ①问题介绍； ②建议一； ③建议二； ④建议三； ⑤我的愿望。 5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。
高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题，可以用以下开头：
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件
③结尾-呼应开头，表达愿望，希望建议给对方以帮助。
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
建议信公开课课件
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建议信的案例分析
针对公司管理的建议信
总结词：改善公司管理，提高工作效率
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02
详细描述
1. 阐述公司管理存在的问题
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2. 分析问题产生的原因和影响
3. 提出针对性的改进建议
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4. 强调改进后可能带来的好处和收益
针对产品开发的建议信
总结词：优化产品设计，提 升市场竞争力
详细描述
1. 分析市场需求和竞争态势
建议信公开课课件
• 建议信的概述 • 建议信的写作技巧 • 建议信的常见问题及解决方法 • 建议信的案例分析 • 建议信的实践与提升
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建议信的概述
建议信的定义
建议信是一种书信形式，通常用于向他 人提供建议或意见。它可以是针对个人 或组织，可以是正式或非正式，具体根
据情境和目的而异。
建议信的主要目的是提出建议或意见， 以帮助对方解决问题、改进工作或提高 效率。同时，它也可以用于表达对对方 的关注和关心，以及加强沟通与合作。
2. 阐述产品存在的问题和不 足
3. 提出产品优化和创新的建 议
4. 强调改进后可能带来的市 场潜力和增长点
针对市场营销的建议信
总结词：调整营销策略，拓展市场份额
3. 强调改进后可能带来的品牌影响和市 场占有率
2. 提出创新的营销策略和推广方式
详细描述 1. 分析市场趋势和竞争对手的营销策略
针对个人职业发展的建议信
详细描述
在表达个人观点时，需要注意语气和措辞，尽量避免使用过于主观或极端的表达 方式。同时，也需要尊重对方的意见和看法，并在适当的时候表达自己的建议是 基于共同利益出发的。
忽略对方感受
总结词
建议信ppt
建议信ppt尊敬的XXX先生/女士：我写信是为了向您提供一些建议，希望能够为您的企业带来更好的发展。
首先，我要衷心地恭喜您在过去的几年里取得了如此骄人的成绩，并在市场上建立了良好的信誉。
然而，不能停滞不前是企业取得长期成功的关键。
在如此竞争激烈的市场中，持续创新和改善至关重要。
因此，我想提供以下几点建议，希望对您的企业有所帮助。
首先，我建议您加强市场调研。
市场调研是了解消费者需求、了解竞争对手以及发现潜在机会的重要手段。
通过投入更多的资源，收集和分析市场数据，您可以更好地洞察市场动态，为企业的产品和服务提供有针对性的改进措施。
其次，我建议您提升研发创新能力。
随着科技的不断发展，新技术的引入对企业来说变得越来越重要。
通过加大研发投入，引进先进的技术设备，培养高素质的研发团队，您可以带来更多创新的产品和服务，提高企业的竞争力。
此外，我建议您加强品牌建设。
品牌是企业在市场上的形象和声誉，对消费者的认知和忠诚度有着重要影响。
通过制定清晰的品牌战略，包括品牌定位、品牌传播以及品牌体验，您可以巩固和提升企业的品牌价值，吸引更多的潜在客户并留住现有客户。
此外，我建议您加强员工培训。
员工是企业最重要的资源，他们的素质和能力决定了企业的成败。
通过提供定期培训，帮助员工提升专业技能和管理能力，您可以激励员工发挥出更大的潜力，为企业创造更大的价值。
最后，我建议您关注社会责任。
企业不仅仅是为了追求利润，也应该积极履行社会责任，为社会做出贡献。
可以通过参与慈善活动、环保行动以及支持教育等方式，树立企业良好的社会形象，赢得公众的认可和支持。
总之，以上是我对您企业发展的几点建议。
希望这些建议能够为您提供一些思路和启发。
如果您对以上建议有任何问题或需要进一步的讨论，我将非常乐意为您提供帮助。
衷心祝愿您的企业取得更大的成功！此致敬礼XXX。
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
建议信 作文模板 共11张PPT
Hope that my suggestions will be of help to you and that you will have a good time. (115)
step1 step2 step3 stceived your letter asking for my advice on two travelling routes,I am writing to suggest that you should go to the Yangtze river.
My reasons are as follows.Initially, the Yangtze river is the birthplace of Chinese culture. When it comes to going to the Yangtze river ,not only does it broaden your horizons but also help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture. Secondly, as the third longest river in the world, you can appreciate lots of natural wonders, which impress you a lot. Last but not least, refreshed and relaxed, you can benefit a lot.
Writing
I received some letters from my students ...
ADD YOUR TITLE HERI'Em too fat. I want to lose weight,what should I do ?
step1 step2 step3 stceived your letter asking for my advice on two travelling routes,I am writing to suggest that you should go to the Yangtze river.
My reasons are as follows.Initially, the Yangtze river is the birthplace of Chinese culture. When it comes to going to the Yangtze river ,not only does it broaden your horizons but also help you have a better understanding of Chinese culture. Secondly, as the third longest river in the world, you can appreciate lots of natural wonders, which impress you a lot. Last but not least, refreshed and relaxed, you can benefit a lot.
Writing
I received some letters from my students ...
ADD YOUR TITLE HERI'Em too fat. I want to lose weight,what should I do ?
高考英语写作之建议信课件
我希望您会发现这些建议是实用的。如果您仍然感到
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
英语书面表达2之建议信ppt课件
B. 表达建议（body）
1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．． 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. You may consider doing… 6. I would seem to me that you could… 7. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 8. I wonder if you have considered the following. 9. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions /recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my
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getting fatter and fatter, therefore, this letter is written to give/offer you some suggestions on losing weight.
8
Para.1: Knowing that you ... ... ..., therefore, this letter
5
Suggestion Letter
Para.1: 1. describe his/ her problem. 2. express the purpose: give him/her some suggestions.
6
Suggestion Letter
Para.1: 1. Her problem:She feels upset because/for
getting fatter and fatter. Therefore, I am writing this letter to give/offer you some suggestions on losing weight.
Para.1: Knowing that you feel upset these days for
I am looking froward to receiving your letter. Yours, Li Jin2 g
Q:What is her problem?
----She is getting fatter and fatter.
Q: How can we help her?
----Give her some suggestions on losing weight.
is written to give/offer you some suggestions on ... ... ... .
9
Suggestion Letter
Para.2: 1. give suggestions: two or three points. 2. After every piece of advice, use some
details/examples to support your suggestions.
10
Suggestion Letter
Para.2: 1. keep a balanced diet 2. do some exercises. 3. keep on losing weight.
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Sentence patterns about offering advice: 1. You should do sth. 2. You had better do sth. 3. Why not do sth? 4. How about doing sth? 5. I suggest doing sth./ I advise you to do sth. 6.It is suggested/advised that you should do
Teaching objectives: After the class, the Ss can grasp/learn 1. the whole structure of a composition. 2. how to offer suggestions. 3. how to develop a composition in a logical way.
1
Here is the letter from one of my former students asking for help.
Dear Miss Ann, I feel a little upset lately. It is because I am
getting fatter and fatter these days. Therefore I think nobody will like me, which makes it hard for me to focus on my study. Could you tell me how to get rid of this situation. Thank you so much.
she is getting fatter and fatter. 2. I am writing this letter to do sth./ This letter
is written to do sth.
7
Para.1: I know that you feel upset these days for
A suggestion letter
3
Now if you were me, how would you write the letter?
The structure of a composition: ----Three paragraphs. Q: What shoud we write in each paragraph?
4
Suggestion Letter
Paraem. 2. express the purpose: give him/her
some suggestions. Para.2: 1. give/offer two or three suggestions. 2. add supporting details after each suggestion. Para.3： Draw a conclusion and express best wishes.
sth.
12
Para.2: First/ To start with, you should have a
balanced diet. Besides/In addition, why not do more exercises? Finally/Last but not leat, it is suggested that you should keep on losing weight.
8
Para.1: Knowing that you ... ... ..., therefore, this letter
5
Suggestion Letter
Para.1: 1. describe his/ her problem. 2. express the purpose: give him/her some suggestions.
6
Suggestion Letter
Para.1: 1. Her problem:She feels upset because/for
getting fatter and fatter. Therefore, I am writing this letter to give/offer you some suggestions on losing weight.
Para.1: Knowing that you feel upset these days for
I am looking froward to receiving your letter. Yours, Li Jin2 g
Q:What is her problem?
----She is getting fatter and fatter.
Q: How can we help her?
----Give her some suggestions on losing weight.
is written to give/offer you some suggestions on ... ... ... .
9
Suggestion Letter
Para.2: 1. give suggestions: two or three points. 2. After every piece of advice, use some
details/examples to support your suggestions.
10
Suggestion Letter
Para.2: 1. keep a balanced diet 2. do some exercises. 3. keep on losing weight.
11
Sentence patterns about offering advice: 1. You should do sth. 2. You had better do sth. 3. Why not do sth? 4. How about doing sth? 5. I suggest doing sth./ I advise you to do sth. 6.It is suggested/advised that you should do
Teaching objectives: After the class, the Ss can grasp/learn 1. the whole structure of a composition. 2. how to offer suggestions. 3. how to develop a composition in a logical way.
1
Here is the letter from one of my former students asking for help.
Dear Miss Ann, I feel a little upset lately. It is because I am
getting fatter and fatter these days. Therefore I think nobody will like me, which makes it hard for me to focus on my study. Could you tell me how to get rid of this situation. Thank you so much.
she is getting fatter and fatter. 2. I am writing this letter to do sth./ This letter
is written to do sth.
7
Para.1: I know that you feel upset these days for
A suggestion letter
3
Now if you were me, how would you write the letter?
The structure of a composition: ----Three paragraphs. Q: What shoud we write in each paragraph?
4
Suggestion Letter
Paraem. 2. express the purpose: give him/her
some suggestions. Para.2: 1. give/offer two or three suggestions. 2. add supporting details after each suggestion. Para.3： Draw a conclusion and express best wishes.
sth.
12
Para.2: First/ To start with, you should have a
balanced diet. Besides/In addition, why not do more exercises? Finally/Last but not leat, it is suggested that you should keep on losing weight.