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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高二英语书信写作课件
Sincerely,Li Hua
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2. 正文（ 五大要点）
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假设你是中学高三学生李华。你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲授员, 请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信, ......
I'm writing this letter to apply for...
Dear + 头衔Dear editorDear Mr. manager
Dear Sir or MadamTo whom it may concern(未告知明确的收信人)
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齐头式Block style
每个段落的开头都顶格写段落与段落之间空一行最后敬语和签名的位置顶格写
缩进式Indented style
（1）格式 format
每个段落段首前空4个字母最后敬语和签名的位置右下方
purpose
key points
languagewords
politeness
开门见山说意图
信息要点不能少
reply
（2）五大要点 five key points
语言正式词多变
感谢客气不能少
期待回信不要忘
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Letter of Apology
Letter of Advice
Letter of Recommendation
Letter of Application
Contents
Letters
Letter of Application
Review
Letters
Dear + 名Dear Bob
Dear + 姓Dear Mr. Wang
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2. 正文（ 五大要点）
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假设你是中学高三学生李华。你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲授员, 请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信, ......
I'm writing this letter to apply for...
Dear + 头衔Dear editorDear Mr. manager
Dear Sir or MadamTo whom it may concern(未告知明确的收信人)
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齐头式Block style
每个段落的开头都顶格写段落与段落之间空一行最后敬语和签名的位置顶格写
缩进式Indented style
（1）格式 format
每个段落段首前空4个字母最后敬语和签名的位置右下方
purpose
key points
languagewords
politeness
开门见山说意图
信息要点不能少
reply
（2）五大要点 five key points
语言正式词多变
感谢客气不能少
期待回信不要忘
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Letter of Apology
Letter of Advice
Letter of Recommendation
Letter of Application
Contents
Letters
Letter of Application
Review
Letters
Dear + 名Dear Bob
Dear + 姓Dear Mr. Wang
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高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
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使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)
Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高二英语写作公开课ppt课件
学生写作实例展示和点评
挑选出几个学生的作品进行展 示
点评：分析作品中的优点和不 足
鼓励学生们互相学习，共同进 步
引导学生们反思自己的写作过 程和方法
学生写作实践和交流
学生写作实践：学 生独立完成写作任 务，教师给予指导 和建议
学生交流：学生互 相交流写作思路和 技巧，分享作品并 评价
写作展示：挑选优 秀作品进行展示， 鼓励其他学生借鉴 学习
语法和用法：标点符号和拼写 的正确用法，以及常见的语法
错误和纠正方法
审题和构思
仔细阅读题目， 确定主题和写
作方向
列出写作提纲， 明确文章结构
和要点
根据要点，列 出需要用到的 关键词和短语
结合语法规则 和语言表达习 惯，将关键词 和短语组合成 句子，形成文
章初稿
草拟提纲和列出要点
确定主题和要点
句子单调乏味和解决方法
句子结构单一 缺乏丰富的表达方式
解决方法：学习多种句式，如简单句、复合句、复杂句等，增加句子的变化和丰富性 解决方法：积累词汇，尝试用不同的单词或短语表达同一个意思，增强表达的多样性
词汇贫乏和解决方法
问题：学生在 写作中常常因 为词汇贫乏而 无法准确表达
自己的意思
解决方法1： 通过阅读英文 文章、书籍等
反思总结：回顾本 次写作实践和交提供写作素材和要求 教师展示自己的范文并讲解写作技巧 学生模仿教师范文进行写作，教师进行个别指导 教师收集学生作品并展示点评
学生互评和反馈
学生在课堂上展示自己的写作作品 其他学生给予评价和反馈 教师点评和指导 学生根据反馈进行修改和完善
,a click to unlimited possibilities
汇报人：
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
《高二英语话题作文》课件
Writing essays helps students develop clear and coherent writing skills, essential for effective communication.
Research Skills
Writing essays on topics requires students to conduct research and cite sources, thereby enhancing their research skills.
methods • Sample Analysis and Learning • Practical Writing Practice and
Commentary
01 introduction
The Importance of Topic Essays in High School
English
02 Topic selection and review
How to choose a topic
Consider personal interests and hobbies
Select topics that interest you, allowing for more enthusiasm and engagement during the writing process.
Select topics relevant to the curriculum
Ensure the topic aligns with the course objectives and is suitable for the grade level.
Consider the audience
Research Skills
Writing essays on topics requires students to conduct research and cite sources, thereby enhancing their research skills.
methods • Sample Analysis and Learning • Practical Writing Practice and
Commentary
01 introduction
The Importance of Topic Essays in High School
English
02 Topic selection and review
How to choose a topic
Consider personal interests and hobbies
Select topics that interest you, allowing for more enthusiasm and engagement during the writing process.
Select topics relevant to the curriculum
Ensure the topic aligns with the course objectives and is suitable for the grade level.
Consider the audience
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高二英语写作公开课课件
2019年 全国卷 I
全国卷 II
全国卷III
书信类别
邀请信 招聘信 求助信 建议信 申请信 邀请信 咨询信 介绍信 咨询信 介绍信 建议信 邀请信 求职信 建议信 致歉信 介绍信 邀请信 咨询信 通知 介绍信 申请信 通知 邀请信
02 高考评分标准（25分，按5档评分）
五档（21-25分）： 内容齐全，错误非常少，高级句型多。 四档（16-20分）：因使用高级句型而有一点小错。 三档（11-15分）：有错误，但不影响理解。 二档（6～10分）: 错误较多，但也基本理解文章信息。 一档（1～5分）: 明显漏掉主要内容，无法传递读者有效信息。 0分：内容太少，无法评判
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我校，位于大犀山脚下，全县最漂亮的学校，拟定于下周五
举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
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定要点 开头: ④_____________________________
定结构
主体: ⑤__________________ 结尾: ⑥____________________________
=in order that
Part 3：
询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否 有意愿参加？期待你的回复。
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents） attention:when\ where\ who\ what\ why\ how
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
Voice
Language use
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03
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01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
04
Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
01
02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
04
Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.
表达2 定语从句I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase
our interest of learning English, my school, which is the best and 定语从句
the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.
表达3 被动语态I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful school in the city.
Step 2 翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)
很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的 学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
表达1 同位语 I am increase
our interest of learning English, my school, the best and the most 同位语
HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?
Why writing is so difficult for you?
Reason 1. don’t know what to write. 写什么 Reason 2. don’t know how to write it . 怎么写
书面表达： 假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一 次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市 就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件， 邀请她一起参加。内容包括：
表达2：定语从句 As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I want to improve my oral (spoken) English .
表达3：升级表达，As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition.
2 说明你打算参加的原因
1.喜欢学习英语
原
因
2. 想提高口语能力
3.希望结交有共同 兴趣爱好的朋友
对西方国家的文化 感兴趣。
口语在语言学习中 扮演重要角色。
共同学习，共同进 步。
3. 询问对方的意见
你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供 更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。
我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所 以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有， 我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你 的回复。
表达2：定/宾语从句 The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I like English and am interested in western culture.
定、宾语从句
表达3：升级词汇The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.
直译
定语从句
升级表达
Reason 3：
希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。
表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together. 表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.
一般将来 时的被动 语态
Reason 1：
我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文化感兴趣。
直译 表达1：直接翻译 I want to take part in the competition because I
like English ,I am interested in western culture.
升级词汇
Reason 2：
想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。
表达1：直译The second reason is that I want to improve my oral (spoken) English, because it plays an important role in language learning.
1.介绍比赛的相关内容； 2.说明你打算参加的原因； 3.询问对方的意向。 （注意：词数100左右。）
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents）
1.介绍比赛的相关内容
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语 幽默故事大赛。 为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学 校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。 很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮 最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
表达2 定语从句I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase
our interest of learning English, my school, which is the best and 定语从句
the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.
表达3 被动语态I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful school in the city.
Step 2 翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)
很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的 学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
表达1 同位语 I am increase
our interest of learning English, my school, the best and the most 同位语
HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?
Why writing is so difficult for you?
Reason 1. don’t know what to write. 写什么 Reason 2. don’t know how to write it . 怎么写
书面表达： 假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一 次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市 就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件， 邀请她一起参加。内容包括：
表达2：定语从句 As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I want to improve my oral (spoken) English .
表达3：升级表达，As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition.
2 说明你打算参加的原因
1.喜欢学习英语
原
因
2. 想提高口语能力
3.希望结交有共同 兴趣爱好的朋友
对西方国家的文化 感兴趣。
口语在语言学习中 扮演重要角色。
共同学习，共同进 步。
3. 询问对方的意见
你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供 更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。
我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所 以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有， 我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你 的回复。
表达2：定/宾语从句 The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I like English and am interested in western culture.
定、宾语从句
表达3：升级词汇The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.
直译
定语从句
升级表达
Reason 3：
希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。
表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together. 表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.
一般将来 时的被动 语态
Reason 1：
我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文化感兴趣。
直译 表达1：直接翻译 I want to take part in the competition because I
like English ,I am interested in western culture.
升级词汇
Reason 2：
想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。
表达1：直译The second reason is that I want to improve my oral (spoken) English, because it plays an important role in language learning.
1.介绍比赛的相关内容； 2.说明你打算参加的原因； 3.询问对方的意向。 （注意：词数100左右。）
Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents）
1.介绍比赛的相关内容
我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。
我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语 幽默故事大赛。 为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学 校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。 很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮 最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。