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作文讲评
词汇: 上网 search surf (on) the Internet 上瘾者 addict
离开网络 leave the net get/ stay/ be away from the net
丰富生活 make life rich/ abundant make your life colorful, enrich your life
多应用非谓语形式
8. 非谓语 例句
Nowadays, surfing the Internet is becoming more and more common and the problem of being addicted to the Internet is becoming more and more serious.
It is said that people who are addicted to surfing the Internet will be annoyed and sleepless when they are away from the Internet. In fact, it’s bad for us to surf the net for a long time. Meanwhile, it can make us weak (fragile) and feel lonely so that we are easy to be led to have a tendency (trend) to (for) violence. To solve the problem, we should organize some activities to lead our colorful (rich) lives, such as sports, making friends, travelling and so on. Last but not least, we can also turn to experts (for help).
Spending too much time in surfing the net, people often feel ….
To solve the problem, we should have more sports…..
We can have sports….. , making our lives more enjoyable and colorful.
2.狭义理解 上网成瘾 be addicted to playing computer games
…… the Internet 3. 并列 You can do sports, make friends and go for a trip
and so on.
You can do sports, make friends , go for a trip and so on.
失眠 feel difficult to sleep feel it difficult to sleep, become sleepless have insomnia 不眠症
是一种病 belong to a disease is a disease
症状 ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱppearance , criterion symptom(s)
4. 写作随意 … feel alone, fragile and led to produce violently… … they can fall their life with doing sports … ….be misadvise to create violence’s tendency… …In my opinion, surfing the Internet has two coins.
5. 试看 下句好不好 (网瘾的不良作用) However, it can be changed.
We can enrich our lives by ….. 如何改? To change this situation, we can ….
6. 最好有结尾句 In a word, it’s beneficial to us to surf the net in a
虚弱 fragile, weak 暴力倾向 may be leaded/misleaded to violence
倾向 trend, tend may develop a tendency to violence may tend to be violent; may be misled to violence may be misguided to violence
moderate way.
7. 比较 哪个更好 为什么
(1). We can do sports, make friends and travel to make our lives more colorful.
(2). Doing sports, making friends and travelling can enrich our lives.
词汇: 上网 search surf (on) the Internet 上瘾者 addict
离开网络 leave the net get/ stay/ be away from the net
丰富生活 make life rich/ abundant make your life colorful, enrich your life
多应用非谓语形式
8. 非谓语 例句
Nowadays, surfing the Internet is becoming more and more common and the problem of being addicted to the Internet is becoming more and more serious.
It is said that people who are addicted to surfing the Internet will be annoyed and sleepless when they are away from the Internet. In fact, it’s bad for us to surf the net for a long time. Meanwhile, it can make us weak (fragile) and feel lonely so that we are easy to be led to have a tendency (trend) to (for) violence. To solve the problem, we should organize some activities to lead our colorful (rich) lives, such as sports, making friends, travelling and so on. Last but not least, we can also turn to experts (for help).
Spending too much time in surfing the net, people often feel ….
To solve the problem, we should have more sports…..
We can have sports….. , making our lives more enjoyable and colorful.
2.狭义理解 上网成瘾 be addicted to playing computer games
…… the Internet 3. 并列 You can do sports, make friends and go for a trip
and so on.
You can do sports, make friends , go for a trip and so on.
失眠 feel difficult to sleep feel it difficult to sleep, become sleepless have insomnia 不眠症
是一种病 belong to a disease is a disease
症状 ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱppearance , criterion symptom(s)
4. 写作随意 … feel alone, fragile and led to produce violently… … they can fall their life with doing sports … ….be misadvise to create violence’s tendency… …In my opinion, surfing the Internet has two coins.
5. 试看 下句好不好 (网瘾的不良作用) However, it can be changed.
We can enrich our lives by ….. 如何改? To change this situation, we can ….
6. 最好有结尾句 In a word, it’s beneficial to us to surf the net in a
虚弱 fragile, weak 暴力倾向 may be leaded/misleaded to violence
倾向 trend, tend may develop a tendency to violence may tend to be violent; may be misled to violence may be misguided to violence
moderate way.
7. 比较 哪个更好 为什么
(1). We can do sports, make friends and travel to make our lives more colorful.
(2). Doing sports, making friends and travelling can enrich our lives.