雅思写作-论述类题目的写作

2、具体分类法
1)People can work or study on the internet without going to school or company.
Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
2、具体分类法
具体来看，利弊都可以写： 好处：节约通勤时间，避免堵车，不受复杂人事的干扰，
1. 以人为本法
人的需求有哪些? 身体上(健康) VS 心理上(安全，求知，自信，被
尊重等) 物质上(生活需求离不开经济基础) VS 精神上(文
化娱乐)
1. 以人为本法
1) More young people in the workforce change their jobs or careers every few years.
与观点类题目的区别
观点类题目可以完全支持或者完全反对 论述类题目不可以 观点类题目的主题段落可能是两反一正，或者两正
一反 论述类题目的主体段落必定是一正一反
特点解析-1
论述类题目的前两段主体段，一定要说明持有不同 看法的人为什么是对的，不能质疑它们。
第1，2个主体段是在引述观点，需要讲到它们各自 的合理性
雅思写作 论述类题目的写作
By Jimmy Xu
论述类题目
当题目中出现了： Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 即为论述类题目
论述类题目
段落结构： 开头段： 给出个人立场（支持一方或者支持双方都可以） 主体段1： 正方的看法 主体段2： 反方的看法 主体段3：自己的看法 结尾段（可省略）：总结自己的看法，也可总结双方立场
Job
范文赏析-主体段3 In my opinion, there is no perfect job in the world. The only thing we can do is to find a suitable job rather than a perfect one. There is a 10,000 hours theory in psychology that people who devote themselves to jobs and spend more than 10,000 hours constantly can become experts in that field. This theory tells us a plain fact that no one can achieve a sense of job satisfaction without years of efforts and persistence.
What are the reasons for this? Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
1. 以人为本法
比如说，年轻人为什么要换工作： 1). 身体上：建筑/销售工作 2). 心理上：不被领导尊重/客户同事认可 3). 物质上：不谈薪资的老板都在耍流氓 4). 精神上(最高层面)：《我在故宫修文物》
质疑它们会造成文章结构以及论述的混乱 如果不同意，在第三个主体段里表达即可
特点解析-2
论述类题目的中心句会经常出现一些字眼:譬如 some people argue that，it is sometimes argued that 等。
因为这些表达不是在写自己的立场，而是在引述别 人的看法
Job
范文赏析-主体段1
On the one hand, a permanent job can guarantee to meet employee’s basic needs. This is because almost no one can escape from the reality. Everyday, we are facing with a variety of expenses, such as food, shelter, transport, bill and even education tuition for children. With a relatively stable job, people, especially those in middle aged can cover most expenses. In addition, those who stay in the same company or institute are more likely to get a promotion as they show the loyalty towards their company. However, those who change their jobs frequently may meet unintended outcomes. For example, they may find difficult to support themselves and raise their family members.
思路构建
考试时需要在5分钟内进行构思，理清思路，找 出两个或三个贴切、有说服力、相互独立的论 据。
思路构建
大作文题目包罗万象，例如环境类题目和文化 类题目所包含的重要因素就有很大的不同，要 用一种套路去应对所有的写作题目，几乎是不 可能的。
三种方法
大作文话题构思的三种突破方法： 1. 以人为本法 2. 具体分类法 3. 核心词汇法
1. 以人为本法
身体上，玩电子游戏和看电视太久会对健康有伤害 (视力，颈椎，肥胖等) 心理上，不良的节目和游戏内容会对孩子的心理发展有害 (电视里的色情，暴力等)
2、具体分类法
有些作文题目很宽泛，看完题目后可思考为：it depends. 一些具体情况下我支持正方;另一些情况下我支持反方。
特点解析-3
特点3.论述类题目的中心句不需要写得很肯定
在论述类文章主体部分的第一段和第二段，在引述 别人的看法时，要经常写一些may，might，are likely to，sometimes，in some cases，can be这样不 确定的表达
尽量不要用should, must, certainly, definitely, clearly 等比较肯定的表达，因为这不是你最后的立场，你 只是在引述观点
论述类题目
段落结构：五段式 论证方式：全面型 开头段: 背景引入，观点改写+自己的立场 主体段1: 稳定工作的好处 主体段2: 工作满意放在首要位置的好处 主体段3: 作者的立场 结尾段: 再次申明自己的立场
Job
范文赏析-开头段 It is true that seeking for a decent job is not as easy as decades ago due to the economic recession and competitive job market. Although some may argue that a sense of satisfaction towards their jobs is crucial, personally, I believe that a permanent job is more meaningful.
Job
范文赏析-主体段2 On the other hand, those advocates for pursuing a job they love might regard job satisfaction as the priority when finding an employment. They believe only working with friendly colleagues and employers and under a flexible working time schedule, can they fulfill their potential and accomplish all tasks well. However, this idea is unrealistic. For example, dozens of young graduates have the bitter result because of their immature thought, that is unemployment.
Job
范文赏析-结尾段 In conclusion, people having a constant job are more likely to have a promising job career and wellbeing.
课堂练习-1
请给以下题目写出提纲 There is an increasing number of advertising
不受规章制度的限制和拘束。 坏处：交际能力下降，缺乏沟通能力。人会变得冷Many people use distance-learning program (study material post, TV, internet. etc) to study at home. But some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2、具体分类法
数学，地理等学科适合远程教学; 市场营销，人力资源等管理学科目需要强调人际交往能力
和需要小组讨论或者头脑风暴，那么他们更需要传统的课 堂教学。
job security; others think people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
directed at children which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements may be harmful to children. However, some companies claim that their advertising provides children with useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
特点解析-4
论述类题目讨论你自己看法的主体段(也就是主体段 第三段)可以作为结尾段
因为论述类题目的问法是discuss both views arid give your own opinion也就意味着既然你在主体部分第三 段给出个人的看法，那么这一段当然可以作为结尾 段
论述类题目
例题 Some people say job satisfaction is more important than
1. 以人为本法
2)Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children.
Others believe this has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.