2020年英语中考作文指导 课件

Translate these phrases
对…有益/害
be good/bad for
从现在起
from now on
Let’s remember them!
在我的业余时间 in my free time
尽管
even though
对……有益/有害
do exercise
in my spare time
4.He worked all the time, _a_s_a__r_e_su_l_t_, he finished it in time.
5. _I_n__a__w_o_r_d,（总之） I can‘t go out as I have many things to do.
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B
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1.We can do a lot of interesting things, such as pplalayyfionogtball, ssininggsionnggs and rreeaadding books.
Advantages:
1.I will have more free time than before.
2.I will feel relaxed
3. I can study by myself
4. I can do sports with my friends after class. 5.
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Can you make some sentences?
1.放学后去做运动是一个好主意。 It’s a good idea to do sports after class. 2.对于我们来说，抄袭作业是愚蠢的。
It’s foolish of us to copy homework.
条件状语从句连词：if 如果
we can keep good grades.
1.它使我得到了足够的睡眠时间。(make sb. do) It made us get enough time to sleep.
2.
If you improve very happy.
your
grade,
you
will
be
如果你提高了成绩，你将会很快乐。
after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such
看电视
help sb. do sth.
不仅……而且…… do sports
听音乐
even though
Remember these frames 1.It’s+adj.(kind/good/clever/foolish/…)
of sb.to do sth. 2. It’s a good idea to do sth. 3. I don’t think(that)… 4. I suggest that … 5…. and so on…
weekends. 2.没有老师，我们不知道怎样学习。
We don’t know _h_o_w__t_o__s_tu_d_y_ without teachers.
3.我建议，我们应该更努力学习，目的是保持好的成 绩。
I _s_u_g_g_e_s_t_ that we should study harder_s_o__t_h_a_t_
more.
2. It’s faster than a usual one__s_o___
it can help us save time .
注意：because 和 so在同一句话中不能 同时出现。
让步状语从句连词：though\although虽然, but但是，even though即使
1.虽然他累了，但是他仍然坚持学习。 _T__h_o_u_g_h_/_A__lt_h_o_u_g_hhe was tired, he still studied hard.
What does the word “write” make you think of?
wh-
Who,what, when,where, how
I write
thoughts
revising
editing
habit and hobby health and safety
resource
yourself
1. 所写内容与所提示的语言信息相符，层次较清楚； 2. 句子正确，表达较通顺；字数合乎要求； 3. 表达错误较少，单词拼写错误不超过5个。
第三档：6~9分
1. 所写内容与提示的信息基本相符； 2. 少数句子表达错误，但尚可读懂； 3. 单词拼写错误不超过7个。
中考作文评分标准
第四档：3~5分
1. 所写内容与所提示的信息多数不符； 2. 只有少数句子表达正确； 3. 拼写错误在10个以上。
如果你想保持健康，你就要多锻炼。 I_f_y_o_u_w__an_t__to___ stay fit, you should do more exercise.
原因状语从句连词：because因为, so所以
1. Homework is finished by us every
day _b_e_c_a_u_s_e_ we want to practise
good ways to get relaxed
You should /shouldn’t … You’d better… Why not … Why don’t you … How / What about …
What do you think of studying under less pressure?
Phrases
Sentence frames
Complex sentences
Connection words
Translate these phrases
做练习
do exercise
做运动
do sports
帮……做某事 help sb. do sth.
听音乐
listen to music
不仅…而且… not only …but also…
In a word, we should_______Let’s_______________
中考作文评分标准
第一档：13~15分
1. 所写内容符合提示的文字信息，层次清楚，有创意； 2. 句子结构灵活、正确通顺，或只有个别小错；字数合 乎要求； 3. 单词拼写错误不超过3个。
第二档：10~12分
as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, finally, 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially,
in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
写作层次要清楚
主题句要突出
注意句与句的连贯性
How to get a high score in writing?
句式和时态要多样化
书写工整
表达思想要清楚准确
have a rest, do sports , be good for … , keep … doing sth. It’s a good way to… , It’s important for us to…
2014年初，天津市发布“减负”的新规 定。作为一名九年级毕业生，临近中考，学业 紧张，你如何理解“减负”，在“减负”的同 时，你如何利用这关键的一个月时间？如何保 证成绩的提高？ 请根据以下提示，写80-100字短文，介绍你的 观点。内容包括： 1、你对新规定的见解。 2、“减负”的优点。(reduce pressure) 3、号召大家一起努力。
史密斯先生说话很慢以便学生们能够听清楚。 Mr. Smith speaks slowly__so__ _th_a_t__ the students can hear him clearly.
结果状语从句连词：so(+adj.)… that, such(+n.)…that 如此…以致
1.They study _s_o__ hard that they have no time to do sports.
2. Because my mother has done everything for me, so I want to thank her.
注意：although和but在一句话中也不能 同时出现。
1.周末里，我们不需要再在学校里学习了。
We _d_o_n_’_t need to study at school _a__n_y_m__o_r_e_at
2. She is _s_u_ch_ a lovely girl that we love her very much.
关联词(connection words)
(1) Add conjunctions. 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
what’s more ,not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折:but,however,although/though,
We know that______I think______is good for_________________________
There are many advantages of reducing pressure.First,__________Second,______ _____ Third,_______________
第五档：0~2分
语言错误很多，只能写出与所要求内容有关的一 些单词。
writing time
10 minutes! Time is flying!
小结(Summary)： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解
You did a good job in ww ritineg
We’re really interested in talking about expressions.
Homework
generally speaking, in short
Let’s try
first, however, for example, such as,
as a result, finally, next, in fact, in a word
1. It's raining hard. _H_o_w_e_ve_r_, I still want to go there.
OR: He was tired, _b_u_t_ he still studied
hard. 2.尽管是九年级的学生也应该做够运动。
Students should take enough exercise _e_v_e_n _th_o_u_g_h they are in Grade Nine.
目的状语从句连词：so that
environment
families you
friends idols
person
nature
science and
learning
technology
school life life
society cactivities
话题
The High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming! tired busy
2. We like doing kinds of sports _su_c_h__a_s _ swimming, running and hiking.
3. _F_ir_st__, he stood up. Then he got out. _N_e_x_t_, he went back. _F_in_a_ll_y__, he smiled.