英语书面表达英语作文汇编的专项培优易错试卷练习题含答案

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.

【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示

了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

2．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。

因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy...

2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...

3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Dear schoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers.

____________________

【答案】Dear shoolmates,

I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get s ick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”

There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.

In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·广东实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

农历五月初五，我们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——端午节The Dragon Boat Festival”一

系列主题活动，请你邀请外国友人Amy来校参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar

Dear Amy,

I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next

month.______________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特别是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get toget her with family./ I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.等多种从句结构的运用，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·山东中考模拟）写作

假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。

2. 陈述自己的理由。

3. 提出至少2条建议。

【答案】Hi,TigerMom,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university

admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are

many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in

society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up

mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her

have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国的传统文化，请你为Susan设计温州一日游的活动，帮助她体验温州的文化习俗。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件：

1.计划去的地方；

2.一日游的活动安排；

3.阐述安排的理由

要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；

2. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou._______________________________________ Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Susan,

I’m gla d to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture．

Sincerely waiting for your coming!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符

合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

6．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

A small thing

提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；

2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.

This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.

【解析】

【详解】

本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】

认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。

7．（·山东中考模拟）写作

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并

准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

8．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步

入高中的青少年。在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。请你以

“_______ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投

稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。

要点提示:

1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；

2. 它使你快乐的理由。

要求:

1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

_______ makes me happy

【答案】One possible version:

Reading makes me happy

During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy.

Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore.

Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“_______ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了读书让我感到快乐，接下来介绍读书的好处，最后指出我会一生保持读书的习惯。此处like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

9．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达

“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。

提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an environmental project….

要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。

Let’s help Xi’an be better

Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we

find_____________

【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be better

Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。

10．（·陕西中考模拟）下周一下午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告, 你打算把你爸爸最近

网购的音乐机器人（music robot）介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告, 请你根据所提供的信息写一份发言稿。

我是能听会说的小音乐机器人,只要你对我说歌曲的名字, 我就能唱给你听。我还有其他本领……

参考词汇:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient

要求:1. 参考提示, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句涌顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息；

Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I'd like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, "Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE's songs" ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.

I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达主要描述爸爸最近给“我”买的音乐机器人。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文。内容上首先要介绍这个音乐机器人，其次表达为什么“我”要介绍这个机器人，也就是对它的喜爱。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

11．（·四川雅安中学中考模拟）书面表达。

假如你们学校要开展主题为：“如何保护地球”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演

讲稿。

提示：1. 现在存在的环境问题。

2. 采取措施，保护环境。

1）关闭工厂，不乱扔垃圾。

2）节约用水、用电的方法。

3）使用购物袋代替塑料袋, 尽量乘坐公共交通。

4）回收利用废品等。

要求： 1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。

2.词数80--100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不记入字数。

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

Thanks for listening!

【答案】How to Protect the Earth

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

However it becomes dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature.

It's time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don't litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.

I hope our home will become better and better.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It's time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等词语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

12．（·吉林中考模拟）“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？

2. How did he/ she inspire you？

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me

Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.

Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.

You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

13．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题

．．．．，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，本周六龙湖公园将举办端午节游园活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter

和你一起参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们见面的时间、地点，在那儿可以做些什么以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语: meet, take part in, the drago n boat race, make Zongzi, camera…

提示问题:

When and where are you going to meet?

What can you do there?

What do you advise Peter to prepare?

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me.

__________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

题目②

“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。某英文网站正

在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你的梦想是什么？你为什么会有这样的梦想？为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做？提示词语：want to be, like, study hard, come true...

提示问题：● What's your dream and why?

● What will you do to make your d ream come true?

【答案】例文：Dear peter,

How is it going?

This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos.

I’m looking for ward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Peter写一封信，邀请他参加端午节游园活动，告诉我们见面的时间、地点以及要做的活动。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：This Saturday is……，There will be……，We are going to……，We can watch……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示我邀请你参加端午节游园活动，接下来介绍我们见面的时间和地点以及可以做的事，最后期望收到你的回复。此处invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

14．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。

要求：（1）报告必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译；

（2）报告的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；

（3）词数在80-100左右。参考词汇：捐赠 donate 希望工程 the Project Hope

Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week.

____________________________

【答案】Hello, Everyone! Here are some important things that happened this week. Let me tell you something about the speech contest. My classmate- Lijia has kept practicing spoken English these days. With the help of the teacher, she worked so hard that she won the first place in the English speech contest on Wednesday afternoon.

And now let’s talk about the good thin gs that happened in our class. 200 books, 50 school bags and 4200 yuan were donated for the project Hope. In addition, Li Ming got ill on Monday and our monitor sent him to the hospital in person.

Our colorful school life brings us so much happiness that we will remember the days forever. That’s all, thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇材料作文，假定你今天是英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。本文人称主要是第一和第三人称，使用的时态有一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般将来时，一定注意时态的转换。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含所给要点，，条理清楚，字数80-100左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

大家好！以下是本周发生的一些重要事件。我来告诉你一些演讲比赛的情况。我的同学李佳这些天一直在练习口语。在老师的帮助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英语演讲比赛中获得了第一名。

现在我们来谈谈我们班上发生的好事。为“希望工程”捐赠了200本书、50个书包和4200元。另外，李明周一生病，班长亲自送他去医院。

我们丰富多彩的学校生活带给我们如此多的幸福，我们将永远记住这些日子。

就这些，谢谢！

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

15．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一）

内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹；

（2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；

（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；

（4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；

（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。

参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。

写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名

（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；

（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）

Dear Li Lei,

I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last

year,___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forw ard to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Wang Mei 【答案】Dear Li Le,

I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.

She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.

Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.

I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours

Wang Mei 【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达顺应了当今的热门话题，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悦。

【详解】

这是篇材料作文内容要点给的比较详细，考生主要把所有要点表达清楚连贯就是篇不错的短文；参考词汇中，给了一些很好的词汇，考生一定要把它们融合到作文里。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

16．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.

Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can

be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.

If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊

2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服

4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

17．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达

请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。

提示：1. 出行方式

2. 不浪费纸、水、电等

3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点）

4. 低碳生活的作用

注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；

3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。

My low-carbon life

Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________

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【答案】My low-carbon life

Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use

of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.

I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。本文时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

我的低碳生活

低碳生活是一种生活方式。节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。保护我们的环境很重要。首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。第三，我使用纸张的两面。我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。

我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。

低碳，快乐生活。我们采取行动吧。

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

18．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

86. 如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我班学生对如何减压、放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压、放松的方法。请根据提示，以How Can We get relaxed为题，写一篇短文。