雅思小作文

题目解析

本次小作文是一个动态的线图。注意主要信息点总体趋势，极值和数据的对比。

高分表达

How much a particular government did and will 这个政府花了多少在。。。。

Albeit to varying degrees 尽管程度不同

To be more specific 具体来说

The least funded public service 资助最好的公共服务（同位语结构）

The ...period witnessed ... 某一段时间见证...趋势

范文

The line graph compares how much a particular government did and will provide financial aid to health, education and road as well as railways within the 2000-2025 period. In 2000, this government allocated a similar amount of GDP on all of the, but since then the allocations varied, albeit to varying degrees.

The majority of GDP was spent on education before 2015 or so when its figure was equal with that of health, constituting approximately 6%. To be more specific, exactly 5% GDP funded education and with the peak at up to around 7%，it enjoyed a slight growth before falling slowly until 2025 when it is estimated to hit a low at 4.2%.

There was a stable rise of no less than 7% in health by the year 2025 and in the same year, it is predicted that the proportion of GDP expenditure on it will reach the peak at as much as nearly 7%.

With an initial drop of only 1%, road and railways, the least funded public service, saw a gradual increase to almost 5% in 2016 while the last decade will witness another marginal reduction to 3.8%.

Overall, the government sponsored slightly more on education and health than on road and railway before about 2015 but during the next decade, health will receive a little bit more financial aid.

高分表达

reaching the bottom at 在…达到最低

showed a completely opposite trend 呈现了一个完全相反的趋势peak at 在…达到最高

saw a gradual decrease and ended at 经历逐步上升和最终达到… remained top 保持第一

it is interesting to note that 值得注意的是

gained popularity 受欢迎

significantly outnumbered 远远超过

范文

The line graph compares the average number of people who participated in top-level football matches between1980 and 2004 in Germany, England and Italy.

In 1980, the average number of people who were active participants of football competitions was around 36 in Italy, compared to about 23 of British people and 18 of Germans. The data of people joining in matches in England and Germany declined remarkably over the next 6 years, reaching the bottom at about 18 and 15 respectively in 1986. By contrast, the figures for Italy showed a completely opposite trend with a peak at approximately 42 in the same year.

As for the following years, although the average number of people in Italy remained top at the beginning, it saw a gradual decrease and ended at 28 in 2004.However,it is interesting to note that top-level football matches gained popularity in England and Germany，so the rest years witnessed substantial increase for their figures (35 and 37,separately in 2004) ,which significantly outnumbered Italian counterpart.

Overall, while top-level football matches lost Italians' favor, more British people and Germans were involved in them over this 24-year period.