内蒙古鄂尔多斯市第一中学2020届高三第四次调研英语试题

【题文】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。

请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：
1. 居住环境的变化；
2. 出行方式的变化；
3. 对中国未来发展的期待。

注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】
Dear Peter,
In your last e-mail you said you wanted to learn about the changes in Chinese people’s life in the past 40 years. Since China opened its door to the world, life has become much more convenient.
Let’s take living conditions and means of transportation for example. 40 years ago, most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long. Now people live in large houses equipped with heating systems. Bicycles used to be the main means of transportation. while , nowadays, private cars have become household items. In the future, Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development.
I hope you can come and see what China is like in person someday.
Yours
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一封邮件。

【详解】第一步：
审题: 应用文邮件
人称：第三人称为主
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
2、结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写邮件的目的，第二部分中国近40年来变化的具体例子，
第三部分希望Peter能到中国亲自看一看这些变化。

要点：
1. 说明写邮件的目的
2．中国近40年来变化的具体例子
①居住环境：过去住小房子，现在住在大房子里；
②出行方式：过去自行车是主要交通工具，现在私家车很普遍；
③对中国未来发展的期待：希望中国人跟上最新的科学技术的发展；
3．希望Peter能亲自来中国看一看。

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
the changes in；in /during the past 40 years; convenient；take … for example ; living conditions ; means of transportation ; be equipped with ; used to ; private cars ; household items; keep pace with
第三步：连词成句
1.You wanted to learn about the changes in Chinese people’s life in the past 40 years.
2.Life has become much more convenient.
3.Take living conditions and means of transportation for example.
4. Now, people live in large houses equipped with heating systems.
5.Bicycles used to be the main transportation.
6.Private cars have become household items.
7.Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序：First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning
Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end
表示举例：such as , for example , for instance , like , take …for example
表示并列或补充关系：what is more; besides , moreover , apart from;
in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others 表示转折对比关系：but , however, although , though , yet , while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。

【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如the changes in…某方面的变化；in /during the past 40 years在过去40年里; much more convenient更方便、更便利；take … for example 以…为例; living conditions生活条件; means of transportation交通方式; be equipped with配备、装备; used to过去常常; private cars私家车; household items家居用品; keep pace with 跟上，不落后于;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如时间状语从句Since China opened its door to the world, life has become much more convenient；使用过渡句Let’s take living conditions and transportation for example 衔接上下段落；过去分词作定语large houses equipped with heating systems; while表示对比：while, nowadays，private cars have become household items。

【标题】内蒙古鄂尔多斯市第一中学2020届高三第四次调研英语试题
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