改写作文之雅思大作文开头段主题句怎么改写

雅思大作文开头段主题句怎么改写

【篇一：雅思大作文开头段怎样写能出彩？】

雅思大作文开头段怎样写能出彩？

雅思大作文开头段怎样写才能出彩？备考雅思大作文考试，考生怎

能忽略开头结尾而只注重主体段的写作呢，想要取得高分，好的开

头是必不可少的。想要了解的话且听小编为你讲解。

作文的首段通常由以下几方面组成：

1) 场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。

2) 一些人的观点(some people’s opinion)，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3) 个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少达到250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心

掏肺把什么话都说完。

大作文开首方式通常有以下两种情况：

1) 题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon)，有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的

背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达

(paraphrase)，可以做：

● 主动语态=被动语态

● 主谓宾=主系表

● 某些近义词互换

example：

at present， it is hard for college students to find jobs. many people claimthat college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and

business over such traditional ones as history and geography. to what extent do you agree？

→ the number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. numerous people blame

this on the university education and believe that more

emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as

computer science and business thanon traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

2) 题目中包含了背景信息，有时出现一些人的观点，但题目中字数

较少，若直接重新表达，字数凑不到40字左右。

这种情况下推荐把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的

背景信息的开首方式来保证字数。

总之，合理的开头段可以包括背景介绍、点明话题、阐明观点，2-3

句话，40-60字，5分钟内完成。因此，考生如果想要自己的作文开

头段写的漂亮还是要多下功夫，多多练习才能达到效果

这种情况下推荐把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的

背景信息的开首方式来保证字数。

【篇二：雅思大作文开头段巧思】

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雅思大作文开头段巧思

万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话

可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思

写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文

思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下专家将为考生们总结一下大作文开头段写作的两大要素，供考

生们参考。

要素一：现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章

的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。

e.g.1

nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of

e.g.2

some people believe that children should be allowed to stay

at home and play until they are six or seven years old.others believe that it is important for young children to go to school

as soon as possible.

what do you think are the advantages of attending school

from a young age?

in many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school

同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

e.g.3

in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

it is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school

所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句：

1.it is true that......是真实的

2.i tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.it is quite common… …是常见的

4.there is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.there is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.it is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二：点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种：report argumentative。

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

e.g.4

in many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

what do you think are the cause of this?

what solutions can you suggest?