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练习：女生的数量大约是男生的三倍。
女生的数量大约是男生的三倍 The number of girls is about 3 times that of boys. The number of girls is about 3 times as high as boys. The number of girls is about twice higher than boys.
（3）The people working in the industrial sector occupied 42 % of the total labor force, which was the most significant part of all.
（4）The people who worked in the industrial sector made up 42% of the total labor force, which was the most significant of all.
Over two thirds just over two thirds
超过2/3 2/3多一点
slightly more than 20%
A further 20% Less than one tenth Almost the same as… About /nearly half
20%多一点
另外20% 不到1/10 几乎和…一样多 差不多一半左右
Body之单饼
可先按照扇形面积大小从大到小排列数据。主体段在 描写各个扇形数据的时候，要注意详略，即最大和第 二大的扇形要重点描述。
Lexical Resources
百分比的表达: percentage，proportion, share a large/ substantial proportion of, a significant percentage of 动词“占”的表达：account for, make up, take up, constitute, comprise, represent
被动： 42% of the people (largest portion) were employed in the industrial sector.
分 词 表 被 动 ： The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42% of the total. 定语从句： The percentage of the people who chose to work in the industrial sector / were employed in the industrial sector covered 42%.
注意：
若遇到饼图中有总数的描述，宜在开头先写，for example:
Overall, Coca-cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide in the year 2000. OR Overall, a total of 17.1 billion cases of Coca-cola fizzy drink were sold worldwide in the year 2000.
表余下的：the rest =the remainder/ remaining （adj.）
表相同：be similar to/ be equal to/share the same percentage at （＋具体比例）
倍数的表达：倍数＋that of ＋名词
倍数＋as….as
倍数＋比较级＋ than
Body之双饼
The two pie charts describe the data of the energy use and the residential energy use in detail in the United States. It can be seen from the first pie chart that the energy is used for four purposes. Specifically, industry accounts for the largest proportion(41%) of the used energy while demand of transportation makes up 26% of the total need of energy. The Residential and commercial represent 19% and 14% respectively.
According to the second pie chart, it clearly shows that heating and air conditioning account for the largest proportion (62%) in the residential energy use while the small appliances makes up the least proportion (10%). The heating water and miscellaneous ( including cooking) constitutes 15% and 13% respectively.
2. Body: describe the graph in details
3. Conclusion
Tense
文章的起始句作为全文的介绍，说的是图表告诉 （show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什 么，所以用一般现在时； 在文章的主体部分，时态的选择根据图表给出的时间 信息具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般 将来。
苏打水是最受欢迎的饮料，它在饼形图上所占的比例最大。
约数表达: the majority of, most of, a minority of , just over…, slightly more than…,less than…, nearly half… 确切数字表达 分数与百分比的转化：one third, two fifths，one tenth 常见表达：a quarter, a half
EU’s budgets on trasport
It is noticeable that road was the biggest item of government expenditure which made up over half of the EU transport budget. Railway was the second largest category of spending, with nearly a third of EU transport funds being spent on railways. Public transport constituted 10%. Comparatively, the outlays spent by EU on other areas were rather small, comprising around 1%2% each of EU transport budget.
主动：in 1932, 42% of the people (largest portion) worked in the industrial sector. 42% of the people chose to work in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force.
Introduc百度文库ion
Sentence patterns:
The pie chart(s) shows/ illustrates/ reveals/suggests/ demonstrates/ indicates/
describes…
Or
gives detailed information on ...
1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most people’s choice (42%).
Fast Food Preferences of Teenagers in the USA
9% 7% 3% 33%
Introduction
How to paraphrase:
变换词性（n. v. adj. adv.） 变换主语 变换语态（主动／被动） 使用从句 同义词替换
Examples of Paraphrase
表达目标：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，42% （1）In 1932, most of the people (42%) worked in the industrial sector. （2）There were 42% of the people (largest portion) working in the industrial sector.
图表‘口诀’
线分段饼分类 多柱就要多对比 遇表按类找最值
混合图表挨个来
Overview
20 mins 150 words 静态饼图与动态饼图
写作步骤
先审题，在看图
几张饼，几种馅
哪个馅儿多，哪个馅儿少 数字，比率，变化
Structure
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction: paraphrase
Comparatively, working in the industrial sector would be most people’s choice (42%) among all the sectors in 1932. Relatively, the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce (42%) in 1932.
由…组成，包括几部分：
be made up of…, be composed of…, consist of …
comprise…= be comprised of …
Eg: 1The blacks constitute ten per cent of the populati on. 黑人占人口的百分之十。
2The weekly report shall comprise the following par
-ts.
周报应由以下几个部分构成
3Soda is the most popular drink because it represents the largest proportion of the chart.
22%
26%
Hamburgers
Pizza
French Fries
Fried Chicken
Tacos
Sushi
The pie chart shows the fast foods that teenagers prefer in the USA.
The following two graphs display the distribution of workforce between the ages of 16 and 65 in 1932 and 1992 in Great Britain. OR The two pie charts illustrate the distributional situation of labor force from 16 years old to 65 in two different years in the UK.
女生的数量大约是男生的三倍 The number of girls is about 3 times that of boys. The number of girls is about 3 times as high as boys. The number of girls is about twice higher than boys.
（3）The people working in the industrial sector occupied 42 % of the total labor force, which was the most significant part of all.
（4）The people who worked in the industrial sector made up 42% of the total labor force, which was the most significant of all.
Over two thirds just over two thirds
超过2/3 2/3多一点
slightly more than 20%
A further 20% Less than one tenth Almost the same as… About /nearly half
20%多一点
另外20% 不到1/10 几乎和…一样多 差不多一半左右
Body之单饼
可先按照扇形面积大小从大到小排列数据。主体段在 描写各个扇形数据的时候，要注意详略，即最大和第 二大的扇形要重点描述。
Lexical Resources
百分比的表达: percentage，proportion, share a large/ substantial proportion of, a significant percentage of 动词“占”的表达：account for, make up, take up, constitute, comprise, represent
被动： 42% of the people (largest portion) were employed in the industrial sector.
分 词 表 被 动 ： The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42% of the total. 定语从句： The percentage of the people who chose to work in the industrial sector / were employed in the industrial sector covered 42%.
注意：
若遇到饼图中有总数的描述，宜在开头先写，for example:
Overall, Coca-cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide in the year 2000. OR Overall, a total of 17.1 billion cases of Coca-cola fizzy drink were sold worldwide in the year 2000.
表余下的：the rest =the remainder/ remaining （adj.）
表相同：be similar to/ be equal to/share the same percentage at （＋具体比例）
倍数的表达：倍数＋that of ＋名词
倍数＋as….as
倍数＋比较级＋ than
Body之双饼
The two pie charts describe the data of the energy use and the residential energy use in detail in the United States. It can be seen from the first pie chart that the energy is used for four purposes. Specifically, industry accounts for the largest proportion(41%) of the used energy while demand of transportation makes up 26% of the total need of energy. The Residential and commercial represent 19% and 14% respectively.
According to the second pie chart, it clearly shows that heating and air conditioning account for the largest proportion (62%) in the residential energy use while the small appliances makes up the least proportion (10%). The heating water and miscellaneous ( including cooking) constitutes 15% and 13% respectively.
2. Body: describe the graph in details
3. Conclusion
Tense
文章的起始句作为全文的介绍，说的是图表告诉 （show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什 么，所以用一般现在时； 在文章的主体部分，时态的选择根据图表给出的时间 信息具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般 将来。
苏打水是最受欢迎的饮料，它在饼形图上所占的比例最大。
约数表达: the majority of, most of, a minority of , just over…, slightly more than…,less than…, nearly half… 确切数字表达 分数与百分比的转化：one third, two fifths，one tenth 常见表达：a quarter, a half
EU’s budgets on trasport
It is noticeable that road was the biggest item of government expenditure which made up over half of the EU transport budget. Railway was the second largest category of spending, with nearly a third of EU transport funds being spent on railways. Public transport constituted 10%. Comparatively, the outlays spent by EU on other areas were rather small, comprising around 1%2% each of EU transport budget.
主动：in 1932, 42% of the people (largest portion) worked in the industrial sector. 42% of the people chose to work in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force.
Introduc百度文库ion
Sentence patterns:
The pie chart(s) shows/ illustrates/ reveals/suggests/ demonstrates/ indicates/
describes…
Or
gives detailed information on ...
1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most people’s choice (42%).
Fast Food Preferences of Teenagers in the USA
9% 7% 3% 33%
Introduction
How to paraphrase:
变换词性（n. v. adj. adv.） 变换主语 变换语态（主动／被动） 使用从句 同义词替换
Examples of Paraphrase
表达目标：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，42% （1）In 1932, most of the people (42%) worked in the industrial sector. （2）There were 42% of the people (largest portion) working in the industrial sector.
图表‘口诀’
线分段饼分类 多柱就要多对比 遇表按类找最值
混合图表挨个来
Overview
20 mins 150 words 静态饼图与动态饼图
写作步骤
先审题，在看图
几张饼，几种馅
哪个馅儿多，哪个馅儿少 数字，比率，变化
Structure
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction: paraphrase
Comparatively, working in the industrial sector would be most people’s choice (42%) among all the sectors in 1932. Relatively, the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce (42%) in 1932.
由…组成，包括几部分：
be made up of…, be composed of…, consist of …
comprise…= be comprised of …
Eg: 1The blacks constitute ten per cent of the populati on. 黑人占人口的百分之十。
2The weekly report shall comprise the following par
-ts.
周报应由以下几个部分构成
3Soda is the most popular drink because it represents the largest proportion of the chart.
22%
26%
Hamburgers
Pizza
French Fries
Fried Chicken
Tacos
Sushi
The pie chart shows the fast foods that teenagers prefer in the USA.
The following two graphs display the distribution of workforce between the ages of 16 and 65 in 1932 and 1992 in Great Britain. OR The two pie charts illustrate the distributional situation of labor force from 16 years old to 65 in two different years in the UK.