周考一作文范文.ppt

周考一英语作文讲解
基础写作写作步骤
• 1. 确定时态，人称 • 2.把内容分割成5句（方便自己写句
子为好）
• 3.套用句型（关注句子间的连贯， 适当加入不同的过渡词）
• 4.找出短语和词块，然后翻译 • 5. 检查（拼写，语法，单复数等）
基础写作
需要表达的要点如下： 1.近年来，许多家长在新学年花大量金钱为学生 购买电子产品，尤其是大一新生。 2.家长用来购买电子产品的钱高达数万元。 3. 那些钱主要用来购买笔记本电脑，手机，MP3 播放器。 4.学生购买这些电子产品的原因是因为人们生活 水平的不断提高和有些学生害怕丢面子儿强迫父 母买。 5.我觉得这是一种不健康的社会风气，不应该提 倡。 6 .学生购物时应考虑家里的家庭收入。
• 根据逻辑关系对要点进行整合，并考 虑用高级句型（如各种从句，非谓语 动词等）。
• 2.家长用来购买电子产品的钱高达数万元。
• 3. 那些钱主要用来购买笔记本电脑，手机， MP3 播放器。
• 思考：这两句之间有什么样的逻辑关系， 可以怎样把它连接成一个句子？
• 提示：定语从句
4.学生购买这些电子产品的原因是因为人们生活水 平的不断提高和有些学生害怕丢面子儿强迫父母 买。
• . As a student, I think we should discourage this unhealthy social trend and take our family income into consideration when buying things.
思考：英语中用来表达原因的经典句型是什么？在 大家都可能用到经典句型的情况下怎样做到与众 不同？
提示： The reason why... is that ...and that ...
The phenomenon/trend may result from ....
It is because of the ...and that ....that...(强 调句型）
continues to rise, / the standard of living is constantly improving百度文库 – Now our living standard has been raised,/
• Since living standards have improved,
• In recent years ,many parents spent a large amount of money buying electronic products for their children at the beginning of the new school year, especially parents of college freshmen. Some parents even spend tens of thousands yuan on items like the laptop, the cellphone,and the MP3 player.
• 社会风气： • social trend
• 不应该提倡：
• discourage/should not advocate/promote/encourage
• 考虑家里的家庭收入:
• take sth into consideration/account
• 请大声朗读范文，体会文 章使用了什么句型，用了 什么过渡词？
• One cause of the trend is the rising living standard. However, some students force their parents to buy these electronic products for them just because they don’t want to lose face
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• The total money of ...reached ...
– .The money for ...is as high as ... – the money sometimes gets/adds up to ... – The money spent on ...is as much as .... 生活水平的不断提高: – rising living standard/As people‘s living standard
so that从句
• 5.我觉得这是一种不健康的社会风气，不应 该提倡。
• 6 .学生购物时应考虑家里的家庭收入。
• 思考：这两句之间有什么样的逻辑关系， 可以用什么样的连接词连接？
• 提示：轻微的转折和对比
• instead,
翻译短语或者词块
• 花大量金钱为学生购买电子产品：
• sb spent some money on sth/in doing sth
• It take sb some money to do sth • sth cost sb some money
• A large amount of money is spent on .../ The big money goes for /sb poured money into sth
• 高达：
• 丢面子: • lose face/embarrassed/humiliated
/dishonorably
• 强迫父母买：
• forcesb. to do sth 或 force sb. into doing sth./sb was compelled to do so by absolute unnecessity