高中英语作文句子润色,提高写作分数

句子润色，提高写作分数一、用从句：（定语从句，名词性从句（主，表，宾，同），状语从句）

1.I got on a bus. There were already too many people on it. (定语从句)

I got on a bus where there were already too many people on it.

2.He got the first place in

the exam. It surprised us a lot.(非限制性定语从句) He got the first place in the exam ，which surprised us a lot

3.Louise was born in 1931. He is a famous artist now.(定语从句)

Louise was born in 1931 who is a famous artist now.

4.Her parents wouldn’t let him marry the girl .Her family was poor.(定语从句)

Her parents wouldn’t let him marry the girl whose family was poor.

5.It surprised me greatly.

I found she was such a fine swimmer. (用what引导的主语从句)

What surprised me greatly was to find she was such a fine swimmer.

6.He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again.(what 引导的主语从句)

What he offered me was that I should cheer up and start all over again.

7.The advantages are as follows. It is very convenient for us communicate with each other. It is very cheap for us to buy it.(用表语从句合成一句)

The advantages are that it is very convenient for us communicate with each other and very cheap for

us to buy it.

8.The news is that we won the game. It made us wild with joy.(用同位语从句) The news that we won the game made us wild with joy.

9.He worked very hard. He made great progress in his study. (状语从句) He worked very hard so

that made great progress in his study.

10.He only entered the contest for fun, but he won the first prize.(状语从句)

Although he only entered the contest for fun, he won the first prize.

二．用非谓语（to do, doing, done，with 复合结构）

1. When I heard that, I was much moved. Hearing that, I was much moved.

2.They were faced with many problems. They didn’t lose heart.

Faced with many problems ,they didn’t lose heart.

3. In this picture, a mother

bird stays in her nest in a big tree. The mother bird watched her babies flying away.

In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree ,watching her babies flying away.

4. He wants to be admitted by the ideal university. He studies hard.

In order to be admitted by the ideal university he studies hard.

5. The girl is staring at the picture. The girl is my former classmate.

The girl staring at the picture is my former classmate.

6. He fell asleep. The lights were still on.(with复合结

构)

He fell asleep , with the lights on.

7. The society is developing rapidly. It is quite necessary that we should have a good knowledge of English and computer.( with复合结构) With the society developing rapidly, it is