五句话写作

非 谓 语 动 词 作 状 语
动词的v-ing——主动 Having done——完成
过去分词 v-ed——被动
Having been done——完成被动
写作运用非谓语三步走
• 谓语动词/句型的要求 • 主被动关系 • 时间先后顺序
主：V-ing 被：v-ed
Having done Having been done
v-ing/v-ed 定/状/名词性从句 and,or,but 连接 五大基本句型
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分词作状语
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从属复合句
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并列复合句
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简单句
英语一句话只能有一个主谓结构
如果出现更多动词…？
• 加连词（and / but / so…） • 放入从句 • 变为非谓语动词
主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、补语
一主多谓（化腐朽为神奇！）
表被动含义
• He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 • He was invited to many countries to give lectures.
Given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921, he was invited to many countries to give lectures.
7.The old man walked in the street was followed and_____________ (follow) by his son. 8. I lost my way in complete darkness and ,_______ (make) matters worse, it to make began to rain.
How to write a good composition
1. 学会使用丰富的句式
技 巧
2. 学会使用较高级词汇
3. 学会使用适当的连词
学会使用丰富的句式
多用复合句、及复杂句； 句式丰富： 长短句结合、变换主语。 同位语，非谓语，从句， 高级句型 倒装句，强调句，介词with结构
五句话秘籍——一主语多谓语写法
主动——表结果
• The old woman died. • She left her son a large sum of money.
The old woman died, leaving her son a large sum of money.
主动——表结果
• Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meterhurdle race in the Olympics. • He became a super star and well-known across China. Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meter -hurdle race in the Olympics，making him become a super star and well known across China. Which made
Reviewing
1.I heard my favorite playperformed ___________ （perform） again on the radio a few years ago. to work 2. He was made _______ (work) too hard.
having been invited 3.Not ___________________(invite) to the party, he was greatly hurt. stealing (steal ) in 4. The thief was caught ______ the store and taken to the police station. 5. The book written ( write )by Lu Xun is _______ popular now . lying 6.The book ______(lie) on the desk was mine.
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• 洪战辉，24岁，在校大学生，出生在一个贫 困的家庭。 • Hong Zhanhui, aged 24, a college student, was born in a poor family. • a college student of 24
孟老师给予我很多鼓励。最后我完成了中学的学习。
Often encouraged by Mr. Meng, I graduated from the middle school at last.
Example
Hearing the news, he jumped with joy.
Greatly touched by his story, we decided to work harder.
Tip 使用分词作状语： 谓语主语相同 主动现在分词 被动过去分词
化腐朽为神奇——用分词改写 表主动含义 教育经历：
我所遇到的问题?
• • • • • • 词汇匮乏、表达不地道？ 怎样避开不会表达？ 写作如何避免时态的错误？ 基础写作如何整合信息？ 如何避免句子结构和句式单一？ 如何让阅卷老师瞬间发现亮点？
优秀作文四大标准
• • • • S1:信息完整，正确 S2:书写整齐，清晰 S3:语法高级，贯通 S4:句型漂亮，地道
He Majored in Science. He graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.
Majoring in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.