读后续写与概要写作微技能三 运用四种手段 做到生动描述

With no path to follow，Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place，she turned around，hoping to see the lake.To her surprise，she saw nothing but forest and，far beyond，a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.
【典例示范】(2016·10月浙江卷改编) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。续写的词数应为150左右。 One weekend in July，Jane and her husband，Tom，had driven three hours to camp
overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately，on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake，Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane was so tired, hungry, and extremely frightened.
文中的动作和神情描写：lying，fell asleep， held her breath, slept，flew overhead, helped
“Tom！” she cried.“Help！” No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving，but the farther she walked，the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall，Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark，Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream，Jane heard a helicopter．Is that for me? Unfortunately，the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later，another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse， thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane rose at the break of day，hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴 落)somewhere at a distance．Quickly she followed the sound to a stream．To her great joy，she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now，Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
Paragraph 1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Paragraph 2： It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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微技能三 运用四种手段 做到生动描述
“读后续写”作为一种全新的高考英语题型，对于大家的语言综合运用能力的考 查要求更高，要增添“读后续写”的表达效果，写出内容具体的续写，不仅要有词汇 量的积累，还要注意避免使用泛泛而谈的词汇，应该多使用具体的词汇使表达更加准 确到位。只有准确、连续的动作＋夸张丰富的表情＋心理活动的描写，才能让人物栩 栩如生地站起来！高尔基名言：写人物，要多行动(描写)，少说话(对话)!
She thought to herself, “If only I had not quarrelled with
flag her yellow blouse wildly，gave her the
Tom. Where 百度文库s Tom? He must have made the emergency call. warmest and longest hug 等突出了Jane迷路