高一英语作文训练1
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Composition 1
• 假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。 某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减 肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对 该问题的见解。内容要点如下： • 1．健康比漂亮更重要； • 2．学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的 看法； • 3．可通过多锻炼身体保持健康，要改变不良的饮 食习惯； • 4．健康的心态也很重要。 • 注意： 1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发 挥； 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇： state of mind 心态
• 节食减肥是把双刃剑，即使它可能帮助你减肥,它同时也可能让 你失去健康。 • Dieting is a double-edged sword. Despite the fact that it may help you lose weight ,It is probable that you lose your health at the same time . • 健康是生命中最大的财富.美丽不应该以牺牲健康为代价。 • Health is the greatest wealth in our life. Beauty shouldn’t be gained at the cost of our health. • 很多女孩盲目追求美丽，完全没有意识到她们的健康状况越来越 差 • Some girls are in blind pursuit of beauty ,ignoring the fact that their health is going downhill. • 节食很有效也有风险， 长期持续下去的话，可能会导致严重 的 健康问题 • Dieting can be very effective but risky, leading to serious health problems if continued for a long time . •
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I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting and I have to tell you that my point of view is nothing like yours. First of all , I don’t think being beautiful is more important than being healthy , because we can’t live as well as we expected with a beautiful but weak body . Secondly , as a student who should put his full heart into study , you shouldn’t pay attention to your weight and others’ views. What ‘s more , you can get over your problem by exercising more and get into a good habit of eating . Maybe it’s the best way for you to lose weight and stay healthy . Last but not least , A healthy state of mind is playing an important part in your life . Don’t let your weight bother you . Just be yourself .
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I have some points to tell you . I have some advice/suggestions for you . Be healthy is more important than being beautiful . Healthy is important than beautiful. The health is more important than beauty. Health is more important than beauty . The best way to lose weight is adjust your state of mind. The best way to lose weight is to adjust your state of mind . I think you can change another way to lose weight . I think you can choose another way to lose weight .
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1.Handwriting 2.Structure Para1 Your opinion to dieting Para 2 Reasons and suggestions Para 3 Hope and expectation. 3.Contents You must include every details into your work. 4.Language Word choice Phrase Sentence pattern
• To be healthy is more important than to be beautiful (强调句） • It is to be healthy that is more important than to be beautiful .
• 作为学生,我们 应该重视学习而不是生活在别人的看法中。
I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting , but I hope you not do that thing, the first part is because health is more important than your beauty , healthy is the first of everything . The second, you needn’t to think too much on your weight or what people think of you , do yourself is the best . About the way to lose weight , you can get down to the parts. First is doing practice such as running ,swimming and so on to keep your health . Second is have a balanced diet, not eat food with too much oil or junk food. Finally , a healthy state of mind is the most important ,believe yourself, your can do it . I hope you lose weight successfully .
• Please don’t care you are beautiful or not and don’t care other’s opinion . • Please don’t care too much whether you are beautiful or not , nor do you care about others’ opinion. • You don’t need think other’s minds . • You don’t need to care much about others’ opinions . • • You needn’t care about what you look like and how others think of you . • You needn’t care what you look like and what others think of you . • You should pay more attention on your study rather than your looking . • You should pay more attention to your study rather than your looks /appearance.
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Students work
I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting , but I hope you not do that thing, the first part is because health is more important than your beauty , healthy is the first of everything . The second, you needn’t to think too much on your weight or what people think of you , do yourself is the best . About the way to lose weight , you can get down to the parts. First is doing practice such as running ,swimming and so on to keep your health , second is have a balanced diet, not eat food with too much oil or junk food. Finally , healthy state of mind is the most important ,believe yourself, your can do it I hope you lose weight successfully .
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I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting and I have to tell you that my point of view is nothing like yours. First of all , I don’t think being beautiful is more important than being healthy , because we can’t live as well as we expected with a beautiful but weak body . Secondly , as a student who should put his full heart into study , you shouldn’t pay attention toБайду номын сангаасyour weight and others’ views. What ‘s more , you can get over your problem by exercising more and get into a good habit of eating . Maybe it’s the best way for you to lose weight and stay healthy . Last but not least , A healthy state of mind is playing an important part in your life . Don’t let your weight bother you , just be yourself .
• As a student, we should attach more importance to studying hard instead of always living in others’ opinions. • 美丽的确很重要。但对于我来说，我更愿意选择健康。 • Beauty is very important .So it is . But for me , I would prefer health to beauty . • 健康很重要，健康的心态也重要。 • Health is indeed important . So it is with a healthy state of mind .
• 假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。 某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减 肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对 该问题的见解。内容要点如下： • 1．健康比漂亮更重要； • 2．学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的 看法； • 3．可通过多锻炼身体保持健康，要改变不良的饮 食习惯； • 4．健康的心态也很重要。 • 注意： 1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发 挥； 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇： state of mind 心态
• 节食减肥是把双刃剑，即使它可能帮助你减肥,它同时也可能让 你失去健康。 • Dieting is a double-edged sword. Despite the fact that it may help you lose weight ,It is probable that you lose your health at the same time . • 健康是生命中最大的财富.美丽不应该以牺牲健康为代价。 • Health is the greatest wealth in our life. Beauty shouldn’t be gained at the cost of our health. • 很多女孩盲目追求美丽，完全没有意识到她们的健康状况越来越 差 • Some girls are in blind pursuit of beauty ,ignoring the fact that their health is going downhill. • 节食很有效也有风险， 长期持续下去的话，可能会导致严重 的 健康问题 • Dieting can be very effective but risky, leading to serious health problems if continued for a long time . •
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I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting and I have to tell you that my point of view is nothing like yours. First of all , I don’t think being beautiful is more important than being healthy , because we can’t live as well as we expected with a beautiful but weak body . Secondly , as a student who should put his full heart into study , you shouldn’t pay attention to your weight and others’ views. What ‘s more , you can get over your problem by exercising more and get into a good habit of eating . Maybe it’s the best way for you to lose weight and stay healthy . Last but not least , A healthy state of mind is playing an important part in your life . Don’t let your weight bother you . Just be yourself .
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I have some points to tell you . I have some advice/suggestions for you . Be healthy is more important than being beautiful . Healthy is important than beautiful. The health is more important than beauty. Health is more important than beauty . The best way to lose weight is adjust your state of mind. The best way to lose weight is to adjust your state of mind . I think you can change another way to lose weight . I think you can choose another way to lose weight .
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1.Handwriting 2.Structure Para1 Your opinion to dieting Para 2 Reasons and suggestions Para 3 Hope and expectation. 3.Contents You must include every details into your work. 4.Language Word choice Phrase Sentence pattern
• To be healthy is more important than to be beautiful (强调句） • It is to be healthy that is more important than to be beautiful .
• 作为学生,我们 应该重视学习而不是生活在别人的看法中。
I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting , but I hope you not do that thing, the first part is because health is more important than your beauty , healthy is the first of everything . The second, you needn’t to think too much on your weight or what people think of you , do yourself is the best . About the way to lose weight , you can get down to the parts. First is doing practice such as running ,swimming and so on to keep your health . Second is have a balanced diet, not eat food with too much oil or junk food. Finally , a healthy state of mind is the most important ,believe yourself, your can do it . I hope you lose weight successfully .
• Please don’t care you are beautiful or not and don’t care other’s opinion . • Please don’t care too much whether you are beautiful or not , nor do you care about others’ opinion. • You don’t need think other’s minds . • You don’t need to care much about others’ opinions . • • You needn’t care about what you look like and how others think of you . • You needn’t care what you look like and what others think of you . • You should pay more attention on your study rather than your looking . • You should pay more attention to your study rather than your looks /appearance.
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Students work
I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting , but I hope you not do that thing, the first part is because health is more important than your beauty , healthy is the first of everything . The second, you needn’t to think too much on your weight or what people think of you , do yourself is the best . About the way to lose weight , you can get down to the parts. First is doing practice such as running ,swimming and so on to keep your health , second is have a balanced diet, not eat food with too much oil or junk food. Finally , healthy state of mind is the most important ,believe yourself, your can do it I hope you lose weight successfully .
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I have received and read your letter , in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting and I have to tell you that my point of view is nothing like yours. First of all , I don’t think being beautiful is more important than being healthy , because we can’t live as well as we expected with a beautiful but weak body . Secondly , as a student who should put his full heart into study , you shouldn’t pay attention toБайду номын сангаасyour weight and others’ views. What ‘s more , you can get over your problem by exercising more and get into a good habit of eating . Maybe it’s the best way for you to lose weight and stay healthy . Last but not least , A healthy state of mind is playing an important part in your life . Don’t let your weight bother you , just be yourself .
• As a student, we should attach more importance to studying hard instead of always living in others’ opinions. • 美丽的确很重要。但对于我来说，我更愿意选择健康。 • Beauty is very important .So it is . But for me , I would prefer health to beauty . • 健康很重要，健康的心态也重要。 • Health is indeed important . So it is with a healthy state of mind .