高考英语作文复习之情景作文常用句式(一)

情景作文常用句式（一）
情景作文：
1．情景作文的高分标准；
2．情景作文基本思路；
3．情景作文时态的选择；
4．情景作文应注意的问题。

1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。

4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。

1．完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2．覆盖了所有内容要点；
3．运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；
4．语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；
5．有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯、结构紧凑。

6．完全达到了预期的写作目的。

情景作文的基本思路：
1．每幅图的基本内容；
2．图与图之间要有连接；
3．结尾要有感想和总结。

每幅图的基本内容有：when：事件发生的时间；where：事件发生的地点；who：事件发生的人物；what：发生了什么事件；why：事件发生的原因；how：事件是怎样发生的。

第二节(20分)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。

你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1．日记的开头已为你写好。

2．词数不少于60。

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This afternoon, we held a farewell party in my classroom to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.
In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tears.
图与图之间要有连接 1．可以用一些与时间相关的副词,如then, later, next, afterwards, soon after that 等; 2．一些时间状语从句, 如after...., before..., that moment, as soon as, hardly had … when, when, while, as 等; 3．非谓语动词的使用；
4．谚语或者习惯用语的使用。

Monday, March 10 Fine This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad. In the beginning, ……. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some ….. Afterwards, we signed …….
At last, we had a photo……… True friendship won’t be weakened by distance. We’ll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.
Teachers in our school are very helpful ．They are not only experienced and knowledgeable ，but they also patient and understanding. Whenever I have problems with my study or life, my teachers are always there ,ready to lend a hand.
We also have colorful sports activities at schoo1. In addition to PE
classes ，we have more choices 1ike playing basketball, soccer ，table tennis ，as well as swimming. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
高考情景作文应该注意以下几点： 1．注意细节，但不要过分添加细节；
2．注意图与图连接，但不要过多使用简单句； 3．尽可能使用形容词和副词，使文章生动； 4．注意文章的主旨思想，不要跑题； 5．注意词汇要多变，特别是同意转换；
6．内容简洁明了，没必要时，不要发表感想； 7．注意审题，如fine 、百万英镑； 8．注意结尾，尽量套用句式。

1．注意细节，但不要过分添加细节；
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2．注意图与图连接，但不要过多使用简单句；
Afterward, two classmates presented him a heart-shaped board with many classmates’ pictures.
Hardly had Li Hua finished his speech when two classmates presented him a heart-shaped poster with many photos from our classmates so that it could remind him of the unforgettable life.
3．尽可能使用形容词和副词，使文章生动
Afterward, two classmates presented him a heart-shaped board with many classmates’ pictures.
Hardly had Li Hua finished his speech when two classmates were
delighted to present him a heart-shaped poster with many invaluable photos from our classmates so that it could remind him of the unforgettable life.
4．注意文章的主旨思想，不要跑题
5．注意词汇要多变，特别是同意转换
order 命令 command 命令 demand 要求
6．注意审题
7．注意结尾，尽量套用句式。

Only after this farewell meeting can I realize that how great the friendship between classmates are.
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