上海市九年级初三中考英语-作文修改及亮点句型训练2

例文：
Dear editor,
Hello. I’m writing to make some comments and propose my suggestions on the textbook, New Century English, which is widely used by middle school students in Shanghai.
First of all, the illustrations and the content of this book are cool and attractive. Not only can they arouse students’ interest, but they also manage to inform us of the hottest topics lately. Besides, since the all-round ability is what students need most, the book provides us with the training of listening, speaking, reading and writing skill.
However, there are spots even on the sun. On behalf of my peer students, I strongly suggest adding more interesting topics concerning foreign culture to the book. Meanwhile, some English songs on the tape going with the textbook would be nice as well.
In a word, as one of the users, it’s my only wish that the book can make some improvements to meet students’ needs. It will be nice of you to take my advice into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Dora
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修改意见：
1本文内容充实，语言精炼且结构清晰。

2几乎没有语法错误和不符合规范的表达。

3字数太多，可以适当精简
范文修改如下：
Dear editor,
Hello. I’m writing to make some comments and propose my suggestions on the textbook, New Century English, which is widely used by middle school students in Shanghai.
First of all, the illustrations and the content of this book are cool and attractive. Not only can they arouse students’ interest s, but they also manage to inform us of the hottest topics lately. Besides, since the all-round ability is what students need most, the book provides us with the training of listening, speaking, reading and writing skill s.
However, there are spots even on the sun. On behalf of my peer students, I strongly suggest
adding more interesting topics concerning foreign culture to the book. Meanwhile, some English songs on the tape going with the textbook would be nice as well.
In a word, as one of the users, it’s my only wish that the book can make some improvements to meet students’ needs. It will be nice of you to take my advice into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Dora 短语训练：
1.manage to to 成功做某事
be successful in doing sth
succeed in doing sth
注意：在中考句转题型种经常考
rm sb to do sth 告知某人去做某事
inform sb of sth 告知某人某事
inform sb that 告知某人某事
3.provide sb with sth 提供某人某物
provide sth for sb 给某人提供某物
注意：中考单选和连词成句可能会考到
4.meet one’s needs
satisfy one’s requirements 满足某人的需要
注意：中考句转题型可能会考
句型训练：
1.not only 引导的倒装句“部分倒装”
他不仅说得更正确,而且讲得更不费劲了.
Not only did he speak more correctly, but he spoke more easily.
2.谚语学习
A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
双鸟在林不如一鸟在手。

A burnt child dreads the fire.
一朝被蛇咬，十年怕井绳。

A clean hand wants no washing.
身正不怕影子斜。

3.It is/was…that/who强调句的用法
It was he who broke the windows yesterday.
正是他昨天打坏的窗户。

It is in the store that they buy the interesting books.
他们正是在那个商店买的书。

4.It is+adj+of sb to do sth 和It is+adj+for sb to do sth
It is inconsiderate of you to write so many incorrect answers in the text.
你是如此粗心的在考试中写了这么多不正确的答案。

It is important for you to finish the work tonight.
对你来说，今晚完成工作很重要。

注意：这个句型种，若adj是修饰人的性格品质，则用介词of;若adj修饰物，则用介词for。