英语四级考试满分作文

Should Firecracker Be Banned?

1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么？

2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么？

3. 我的看法（1)本文写作提示:角度一是遵循模版。采用以上模版套用题目分析优点和缺点,得出结论。

(2)本文写作提示:角度二是段落中句与句的过渡。过渡语的应用使句与句，段与段之间衔接更紧密，更具有连接性。

There has long been a national debate on … Some people advocate that firecrackers sh ould be banned because…. Others hold the opposite

opinion. They believe….

From my point of view, I welcome so-called limited banning, which has been practiced in some parts of our country. On the one hand,….

On the other hand,…. Only in this way can we….

过渡语

过渡语可是词，短语，也可是一个句子。通过使用过渡语可以使文章更紧凑，脉络更清楚。过渡语

表示举例说明的过渡语

for example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a case in point

Let’s take …as an example; take …for example

… is a typical example of …

表示递进关系的过渡语

in addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also, what’s more

not only, but also, similarly; another …is

… is also a factor

表示对比对照的过渡语

in contrast, by contrast, on the other hand,in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely

…diffe r/vary greatly/vastly from

表示因果关系的过渡语

because of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reason therefore, so, as a result, consequently, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thus

The reasons why/for …are/lie in…

表示结论的过渡语

to sum up, to conclude, to summarize

in sum, in summary, in conclusion, in all, in a word, in short, in brief

We can come to the conclusion that….

A conclusion can be reached that….

表示转折的过渡语

though, although, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, even though

As everything has two sides, we should not neglect the other side of the coin

Let’s look at the other side of the coin

Reference Model (1)

There has long been a national debate on firecrackers. Some people advocated that fire- crackers should be banned because we had heard of too many instances of firecrackers injuring people and causing fires. Others hold the opposite opinion. They believe firecrackers, a part from creating happy atmosphere and bring good luck, have become part

of our national tradition. How can we do away with this custom which labels our identity? From my point of view, I welcome so-called limited banning, which has been practiced in Reference Model (2)

some parts of our country. On the one hand, the local government at all levels, can organize large-scale parties in which firecrackers are left off on national holidays especially the Spring Festival. On the hand, the specialist himself, who makes this his career, takes on the responsi-bility of letting off the firecrackers on ceremonies and parties. Only in this way can we ward off danger while retaining the happiness brought about by firecrackers.