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There are many factors that influence bringing up their children the parents in ____________________.
in order to make it clear
two examples are given
Step 2 writing
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考 生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容 概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 (3)上下文的连贯性 (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况
◆While reading
◆While writing
◆While reading 1. Is the passage a narration, exposition, argumentation or a description? 2. Is there any topic sentence or key words? If so, underline them. 3. Go through the supporting details or evidence to check whether the topic sentence or key words you find is appropriate.
It is rather tough to raise children for couples, especially future mothers. Parents should adopt reasonable methods to educate their children. There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children. In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 5：代词转换成具体信息
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job.
Step 1 reading
find out top sentences or words which can best serve the main idea.
Para 1： Topic： Child raising
Characteristics：
difficult
Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers, have to learn from their mothers, aunts, mothers-inlaw, or any other relative who is close to them.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 4 ：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举 的并列词汇 Para 2 As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to achievements, and teach them. educate their children adopt reasonable methods Parents should __________________ to educate their children.
找对主旨句
Reasons
Para 2：
As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to achievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all. .
Child raising is a difficult job.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 2：转换同义词或者词性 Child raiwenku.baidu.coming is a difficult job. Bringing up a child is hard work/ difficult/tough. Tip 3：转换句型 It is rather tough to raise a child for people.
Para 4 One group consists of people who don’t have economical resources or education. … Para 5 Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated. …
Evidence 例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息
Para 1 Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world.
In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that children raised in families with different ___________________________________
economical and educational background may have different futures
A detailed example 忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过
Para 3：
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment.
topic sentence
outline
(以议论文为例)
supporting details (conclusion)
◆While writing
1. Structure 1)Topic sentence* 2)Main supporting points/evidence 3)About 60 words 2. Language 1)To use your own words* 2)To be concise (leave out the details; reduce the examples; simplify the descriptions; eliminate all repetitions. 3)To present the information fairly, do not give your own co mments 4)To use the third person to retell 5)Tense
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性 One group consists of people who don’t have economical resources or education. … Other groups of people are hard workers or welleducated.
in order to make it clear
two examples are given
Step 2 writing
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考 生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容 概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 (3)上下文的连贯性 (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况
◆While reading
◆While writing
◆While reading 1. Is the passage a narration, exposition, argumentation or a description? 2. Is there any topic sentence or key words? If so, underline them. 3. Go through the supporting details or evidence to check whether the topic sentence or key words you find is appropriate.
It is rather tough to raise children for couples, especially future mothers. Parents should adopt reasonable methods to educate their children. There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children. In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 5：代词转换成具体信息
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job.
Step 1 reading
find out top sentences or words which can best serve the main idea.
Para 1： Topic： Child raising
Characteristics：
difficult
Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers, have to learn from their mothers, aunts, mothers-inlaw, or any other relative who is close to them.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 4 ：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举 的并列词汇 Para 2 As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to achievements, and teach them. educate their children adopt reasonable methods Parents should __________________ to educate their children.
找对主旨句
Reasons
Para 2：
As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead them to achievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all. .
Child raising is a difficult job.
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 2：转换同义词或者词性 Child raiwenku.baidu.coming is a difficult job. Bringing up a child is hard work/ difficult/tough. Tip 3：转换句型 It is rather tough to raise a child for people.
Para 4 One group consists of people who don’t have economical resources or education. … Para 5 Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated. …
Evidence 例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括
Step 2 writing
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息
Para 1 Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world.
In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that children raised in families with different ___________________________________
economical and educational background may have different futures
A detailed example 忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过
Para 3：
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment.
topic sentence
outline
(以议论文为例)
supporting details (conclusion)
◆While writing
1. Structure 1)Topic sentence* 2)Main supporting points/evidence 3)About 60 words 2. Language 1)To use your own words* 2)To be concise (leave out the details; reduce the examples; simplify the descriptions; eliminate all repetitions. 3)To present the information fairly, do not give your own co mments 4)To use the third person to retell 5)Tense
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly?
Tip 6：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性 One group consists of people who don’t have economical resources or education. … Other groups of people are hard workers or welleducated.