高考英语满分作文名师点评范文5篇
高考英语满分作文名师点评范文5篇
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意：词数不少于60.
提示词：游乐园amusement park 垃圾箱bin
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
【名师点评】
本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。*覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。*叙述清楚，描写细致，
准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1 set off 出发2. litter n.废弃物3.respectively adv.分别地
好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .
在爬山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。
1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.
然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。
评析：细节描写，生动形象。“shock”一词也用得生动传神。
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;
3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);
4.游泳池：全天免费开放;
5.欢迎预定。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
*开门见山，首先点明了主旨。*最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使*比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，*句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),
一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、自我介绍;
2、祝贺苏琳生日;
3、感谢工作人员;
4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】*写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍;
2.信息****;
3.祝贺生日;
4.感谢照顾;
5.索取照片;
6.合适的结尾。
这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。*行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换;型号新，无配件，无法维修。2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1. 词数为100左右;
2. 参考词汇：配件—— spare part;
3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【名师点评】
*内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使*结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使*的语言显得地道而精炼。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的 3. consideration n.体谅
好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。
评析：复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……
鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……
收发邮件，选购商品……
点播音乐，下载电影……
如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
For most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
【名师点评】
*为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。*说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文
【高考英语满分作文试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
每天锻炼一小时
健康工作五十年
幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
【名师点评】
*的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。*分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是*的特点之一。
积累卡片
好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.
如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
评析：虚拟语气。
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高考英语满分作文名师点评范文5篇
高考英语满分作文名师点评范文5篇 【高考英语满分作文试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 注意：词数不少于60. 提示词：游乐园amusement park 垃圾箱bin Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy. 【名师点评】 本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。*覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。*叙述清楚，描写细致，
2020高考英语丨历年高考英语满分作文点评(附衡水体)
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