高中英语作文写作指导：如何写英语游记

写作指导
如何写英语游记
【写作任务】
假设你是李华，上周你和父母参加了某旅行社组织的香港三日游活动，请根据表格内容用英语写一篇游记。

注意:
1. 词数：120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：金紫荆广场the Golden Bauhinia Square；
维多利亚港Victoria Harbor；游轮cruise ship
【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本习作要求写一篇以记录行程为主的记叙型游记。

此类写作写作时应注意以下几点：
1. 按游览的顺序或时间来写；
2. 写出景物的特点；
3. 适当抒发自己的情感或发表自己的看法。

游记类作文中的时态以过去时为主，人称多用第一人称。

二、谋篇布局
本篇习作可分为以下三部分：
第一部分：简述旅行概况（上周和父母参加了香港三日游活动）；第二部分：描述旅游过程及所见所闻（具体的三日行活动介绍）；第三部分：表达旅行感受（对香港之旅的评价）。

三、组织语言
1. 第一部分：简述旅行概况。

2. 第二部分：描述旅游过程及所见所闻。

3. 第三部分：表达旅行感受
【范文展示】
◀普通范文▶
Last week my parents and I visited Hong Kong.We stayed there for three days.
As soon as our plane reached Hong Kong we went straight to visit the Golden Bauhinia Square.After lunch, we went to Hong Kong Ocean Park.There we saw many interesting ocean creatures.After supper, we enjoyed the beautiful night scenes of Victoria Harbor on a cruise ship. The next day, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland and spent a happy day taking part in lots of exciting activities. On the third day, we were showed around the streets and did some shopping.
We were tired but our trip to Hong Kong was really unforgettable. I won't regret doing it.
◀高级范文▶
Last week my parents and I made a three-day tour of Hong Kong.
On our flight's arrival, we headed straight for the Golden Bauhinia Square. After lunch, we went to Hong Kong Ocean Park, where we were impressed by a wide variety of amazing marine life. After supper, we admired the fascinating night scenes of Victoria Harbor from a cruise ship. The next day, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland and had much fun there participating in many thrilling activities. On the third day, we went on a sightseeing tour of the streets and purchased some souvenir gifts.
Exhausted as we were, it was worth it. Not only did it entertained me, but it also broadened my horizon.。