科技论文翻译个人常见错误总结

201004论文翻译个人常见错误总结

1.分析:太中文化

原文示例: Aiming at the problem that the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is with limited energy and computing capabilities

修改后: Aiming at the problem that the energy and computing capabilities of the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is limited

2.分析:状语?使用方式错误。分词做状语

原文示例: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies are added into tradition auction scheme.

修改后: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies being added into tradition auction scheme.

3.分析:词性混淆。句式错误。And 连接两个句子，只省略主语不能省略谓语。

原文示例: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexibility, and ?high consultation rate of success

修改后: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexible and has high consultation rate of success

4.分析:状语从句的使用，句式不熟悉。

原文示例: WSN is a self organizing wireless network composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor

修改后: WSN is a self organizing wireless network which is composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor

5.分析:1，词性不对；2，句子结构混乱，不知所云。

原文示例: Task allocation is a broad area of high-performance computing research problems

修改后: Task allocation is an issue which is studied in high-performance computing broadly.

6.分析:句首大写。名词所有格。

原文示例:the traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network node capacity and capability is limited.

修改后: The traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network node’s capacity and capability is limited.

7.分析:冠词用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少谓语。

原文示例: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as a agent. However, wireless sensor networks with high dynamics

修改后: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as an agent. However, wireless sensor networks have high dynamics

8.分析:近义词的区分。

原文示例:WSN is similar with MAS due to??that Sensors can handle problem indepentely and WSN is a distributed system with a self-organizing feature 修改后: WSN is similar with MAS because Sensors can handle problem indepentely and WSN is a distributed system with a self-organizing feature.

9.分析:连词的恰当使用。助动词的使用，句子结构混乱。

原文示例: And the introduction of auction to the WSN is not a very good taking into account the dynamics of the network enviroment and its resources constrained(restricted?)

feature.

修改后: In addition the introduction of auction to the WSN doesnot take into account the dynamics of the network environment and its limited resources.

10.分析:被动语态；主谓一致；介词使用

原文示例: The study is build on clustering-based WSN framework. A sensor want find 修改后: The study is built on clustering-based WSN framework. A sensor wants to find

11.分析:动词选择；从句用法（要有动词）；主谓一致

原文示例: The sensor broadcast the task allocation information to sensors which in the same cluster, then choose the most suitable one by a automatic negotiation.

修改后: The sensor sends the task allocation information to sensors which are in the same cluster, then chooses the most suitable one by a automatic negotiation.

12.分析:词性混淆；被动用法

原文示例: The whole process of announce, negotiate, and settle on is accomplish by our impoved auction scheme

修改后:The whole process of announcement, negotiatiation, and settlement is accomplished by our improved auction scheme

13.分析:并列句，缺少连词。

原文示例: is too low, its total utility is

修改后: is too low, and its total utility is

14.分析:分词做状语；句子太长时的句式变通；从句中主谓一致

原文示例: The sensor will launch an auction to find a successor when it?? can not continue to carry out its functions for some reason (to leave or to meet the energy floor threshold). It will sent Notice to sensors that in the same cluster.

修改后: The sensor, not continuing to carry out its functions for some reason (to leave or to meet the energy floor threshold), will launch an auction to find a successor. It will send Notice to sensors that are in the same cluster.

15.分析:分词状语从句

原文示例: With the DL (150s) remains unchanged,

修改后: With the DL (150s) remaining unchanged

16.分析:one of 到底要不要定冠词？上个批注里把a改为了the

原文示例: Auction is one of the typical methods for task allocation in MAS

修改后: Auction is one of typical methods for task allocation in MAS

17.分析:对于缩写名词第一次出现全称后以后都用缩写

原文示例:

修改后:

18.分析:词性混淆

原文示例: with new policies being added into tradition auction scheme

修改后:

19.分析:定语倒置混乱

原文示例: The traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly

修改后:distributed algorithms of traditional field

20.分析:句式调整

原文示例: wireless sensor networks have(has?)high dynamics, the limited nature of the