2011年6月大学英语四级作文讲解

give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger
There are several reasons behind sth
替 换
very
cause
..reasons for sth
desire
pour attention into
want
pay attention to
3．文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好吗？ 在所有写作考试中都有一条不成文的规定：没有复杂句不能得 高分。但是全是复杂句，文章读起来会很累很烦很不自 然。因此考试作文的句子要长短结合，简短句复杂句适宜。
4．不知从何处着手复习写作，怎么办？ 作文的思维：1、审题；2、思考简单的分支观点； 考虑可以采用的成熟的句型或“万能句”。 只有多写才能活化思想，固定句型和找到适合自己的“万能 句”。 5．背历年范文有用吗？ 建议是考生自己把近三年的范文看看，主要看结构，然后自己 写写，让同学或老师修改，再写一遍。
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2011年6月英语四级作文讲解
My views on Online Shopping
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚
2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不 少问题 3. 我的建议
点评： 本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题 之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是 众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较 熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出 的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该 话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以， 考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出 网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。 整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大， 只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不 会是难题。
Par.3
Writing Q&A 1．先想好中文意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗？ 要想少些一点中式英文，就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配，在 “翻译”时尽可能多用些固定的句型，少一些逐字对译。
2．常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，如何解决？ 第一，模糊化即用上义词表达。 第二，可以解释说明。 第三，可以把一些解释不清的东西略去不写。
句子主语可以变换 Perspective 看法,观点(+on) view/think Par.2
They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects（缺点,缺陷,不足之处 ） in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy（可信的）. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into 第一段：总述现象并引出话题 fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. 第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分 For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have 别铺陈其优缺点 much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain. It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we 第三段：给出自己的建议 need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.
文章开头要注意 with the development of the internet Definitely ad.毫无疑问的 of course not Come into 进入……状态 e.g. ～force/power/effect
获得，继承
Par.1
Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers（零售商）, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds（流动资金）.
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第二段
第三段
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.
观点陈undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible（不可抵抗的） trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated. accordance with与……一致,和谐;符合
6．想练习写作，怎么进行自我检查呢？ 英文应试的错误分为：1、结构错误；2、语言错误。简单无误 是第一原则。 变句型 替换词 在清晰表达的基础上 增加语言亮点
英语四级考试作文实用替换词
for my part ,from my own perspective Exceedingly , extremely, intensely in my opinion