八年级英语写作公开课[优质ppt]
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Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.
Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
SurveyΒιβλιοθήκη Baidu
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
a nice body
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
a nice tail
写作第四步： 连
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰， 各个部分衔接自然。
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列或递进：and, besides, both…and，not only…but also，what’s more, …
• Boys and girls，
• Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
加 写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
A Lesson of Writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组 调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇 报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇 80词左右的调查汇报。
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
WWF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、
字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信 息。
人称 主题 字数
补充 信息
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展 开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组 组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及 自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
• 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking…
My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
WWF worker
he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
一般现在时
体裁
提示 要点 时态
列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.
Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
SurveyΒιβλιοθήκη Baidu
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
a nice body
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
a nice tail
写作第四步： 连
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰， 各个部分衔接自然。
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列或递进：and, besides, both…and，not only…but also，what’s more, …
• Boys and girls，
• Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
加 写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
A Lesson of Writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组 调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇 报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇 80词左右的调查汇报。
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
WWF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、
字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信 息。
人称 主题 字数
补充 信息
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展 开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组 组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及 自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
• 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking…
My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
WWF worker
he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
一般现在时
体裁
提示 要点 时态
列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.